FF Ajab Si....last part pg 75....21Jan

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hi everyone............u have probably come across me as I do comment to some of ur ffs but mostly I'm a silent reader.

I got inspired from everyone who writes ff in KS forum so I tought why not give it a try..........so here I am with my first ff ever and hope u like it and if can pls do comment or u can pm me if u have any question.

Here is the character sketch

AJAB SI…..

Walia family

Ranveer Walia: 32 years old, Jai's elder brother and takes care of Walia Industries along with Jai. Married to Raashi and loves her a lot.

Raashi Dixit but now known as Raashi Walia : A simple person and a good wife(27years old) ,is very happy with her life as her husband loves her a lot and have a lovely devar like Jai. Now she is pregnant with Ranveer Walia's first child.

Jai Walia: 28 years old, loves his bhaiya and bhabhi a lot and also his sister but is very close to to his bhabhi. Helps his bhaiya in business and is very good in what he does. Lovely person and waiting 4 his one true love. Pushkar is his best friend.

Jigyasa Bali: Walia family's elder child(38 years old). Married to Aditya Bali and lives couple of blocks away from Walia Mansion.(she is a positive character) .She has a daughter around 8 years old – Anu and a son 5 years old – Sahil.

Aditya Bali: Fell in love with Jigyasa during college and got married. Very happy with his family. A great husband and father.

Billo Massi: Stays in Chandigarh with her daughter and comes to stay with the walia family once in a while and since Raashi is pregnant now so she is with them.

Dixit family

Nishikant Dixit: Owns a big business just like jai's but now its handle by his son Pushkar.

Kiran Dixit: A good mother to her children and always there 4 them.

Pushkar Dixit: The elder son of the Dixit family. 28 years old and is married to Rano.Loves his family a lot and both his sisters and is Jai's best friend.

Raashi Dixit: Second child and married to Ranveer Walia.

Bani Dixit: The last child of Nishikant&Kiran Dixit. 24 years old and just finish her studies in business management from London University and due to come back home after studying there for 4 years. During that period she came back only once for her sisters wedding. Loves her family a lot especially her sister as she is not only her sis but also her best friend.

Note: Jai and Bani didn't meet each other during Ranveer and Raashi's wedding cause when the wedding got fixed Jai was in abroad for business and he only came on the wedding day and Bani went to London the next day itself cause she was having exams but they have heard about each other but never seen their each others pic before.

pt 1 - pg 1 , pt 2 - pg 2 , pt 3 - pg 4 , pt 5 - pg 7 , pt 6 - pg 8 , pt 7 - pg 10 , pt 8 - pg 12 , pt 9 - pg 15 , pt 10 - pg 17 , pt 11 - pg 19 , pt 12 - pg 21 , pt 13 - pg 23 , pt 14 - pg 24 , pt 15 - pg 26 , pt 16 - pg 28 , pt 17 - pg 29 , pt 18 - pg 31 , pt 19 - pg 33 , pt 20 - pg 35 , pt 21 - pg 37 , pt 22 - pg 38 , pt 23 - pg 40 , pt 24 - pg 42 , pt 25 - pg 44 , pt 26 - pg 45 , pt 27 - pg 47 , pt 28 - pg 48 , pt 29 - pg 50 , pt 20 - pg 53 , pt 31 - pg 55 , pt 32 - pg 59 , pt 33 - pg 60 , pt 34 - pg 63 , pt 35 - pg 66 , pt 36 - pg 69 , pt 37 - pg 72 , last part - pg 75

Edited by hipreet - 17 years ago

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davia389 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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witingg to read the chap 1 pls contyinue soon lookign intersting
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Here is the first part.........hope u like it

Part 1

It has been 4 years since Bani has gone to London to further her studies and now she is going back to her family. She is really eager to meet her family members especially her sister as she heard that her sister is pregnant and she is going to be a massi soon.She didn't tell anyone at home that she is coming back as she wants to give a surprise. Now as she is standing in London airport to catch her plane back to India is really excited. Just as she is turning to go to the terminal to board her plane she bumps into a man.

Ouch……..she screamed as she thought that she is gonna drop back but just on time the stranger she bumped into caught her by her waist. Her face was covered with her hair as she heard the stranger ask in his husky voice "Are u alrite miss". She felt goosebumps in her body as she heard the voice that was so masculine and on top of that his hand on her waist was also making her shiver.

Jai who was going back to India after his business meeting in London was walking to the terminal when the girl who was standing in front of him turn suddenly and bumped into him and before she could fall he caught her. Concern whether she was alrite or not as he could not see her face, he ask her the question and steadied her to stand straight.

As the stranger help her to steady her straight, she removed her hair from her face so that she could see his face and answer his question and also apologize. As Jai and Bani look at each others face for the first time, they r mesmerized witch each other that they kept staring at each other and could her this song at the backround

Aankhon Mein Teri
Ajab Si Ajab Si Adayein Hai
Hoo Aankhon Mein Teri
Ajab Si Ajab Si Adayein Hai

They r brought back to reality as they hear their flight announcement. Bani was blushing cause she has never experienced something like this before and on the other hand Jai's condition was also the same.

Bani quickly said "I'm fine and sorry" and rushed to the terminal to catch her flight while Jai was just kept standing there staring at her retiring back till he realized that he also had a flight to catch and made his way to his plane.

During their journey back, Jai and Bani kept thinking about the stranger that the bumped into till sleep overcome them.

Sorry if there is some mistakes as this is my very first time writing a ff.
Edited by hipreet - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Loved the intro and part1
plz cont soon ff without pia means ff with peace 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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please cont soon good start will wait for the next up date
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Posted: 17 years ago
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THATS REALLY NICE 😊
CANT WAIT NOW 4 2ND PART

THANX
Edited by SonamKHAN - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanx everyone for reading my ff and I will be updating the next part tonight(hopefully).
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Nice FF, I am looking forward to more from you! The characters and teh first part are written very well. 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey
taht was an awesome updat.e
reallie good.
waiting for the next update.
loved the first part.
aww jb are so cute.
hehe continue soon please
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Posted: 17 years ago
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lovely part!!!!! can't wait to read more 👏

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