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Sheena

@Sheena_Row

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+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#61

I am back with my comments.....

😲 Oh Lordy, Lordy!!
They did what?? They lost their what?? What's the world coming to? Girls, these days...bahut tez chal rahe hai.... 😆

OK, OK! I am just kidding....

And baba, MR. Deb...yeh hona hi tha!! Dhamki and contempt doesn't work, so try reasoning! Poor Jai, felt so sad for him. 😭 Totally not fair!

And the arguments! Feel so bad for both of them, they don't mean it but they are both angry with each other.

Bani is rendered to being 'No-good' for other men!! 😳 😳 😳 Yeh, being in love with JW does that, I guess!

He goes to Dubai with locking up the house, I hope he comes back rich, successful and all powerful and takes on the Debs, mom, dad, Peehu, Aparajit and takes off with Shona...

Loved the update, sweetheart! Really did! I think it was awesome!

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Urooj

@rooj-i

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+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#62

Didi,
I got a share for you for this part:

Zindagi ki yeh dastaan puri hai,
Aao sunnu eik kahani khulli hai,
Hansi ke saath rulati hai,
rullane ke saath hansati hai,
chahe jo bhi ho, koi bhi ho annd mein,
sirf tumhari rah di khati hia

I hopoe that says it all and if not then here's more...
I love the update especially the part between Jai and Prof. Deb. i mean it was intense and yet so heart-felt. I mean you are feeling for both of them and i couldn't pick a side.

And then the way JB said good-bye and also how both knew that they can't love anyone else but eachother. but i don't like how Bani is a little too proud because it seems like tha she doesn't want to Jai to succeed...but i could be wrong in the way you have portrayed her but thats how she seemed like to me.

anyways i love the udpate di...plz continue soon
rooj

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Nabila

@Tomiko

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+ 5

Posted: 17 years ago

#63

Aaahh; no!

He actually left her!😭

Not fair Rekha.......please tell me that 7 years later, Jai Walia is more than a college dropout and suited for Bani!😃

The ahem ahem scene was very steamy!😉😆........Sorry, sorry......it was very sweet; two young lovers taking one step into adulthood!😳

And Lmao; Jai talking to his plants!😆.......

Waiting eagerly for the ending!😛

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btkr

@btkr

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#64

Hi MT,
Mazaa aa gaya...so natural for Bani to accuse him of losing his interest once he "had his way" with her...and poor Jai, his pride and self-respect at war with his love for the nearly Miss-Perfect next door..
I like how your Banis usually have an attitude - kya zabaan chalati hai - love it!
👏 👏 👏

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bugs_bunny

@bugs_bunny

Rocker

Posted: 17 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: sanam84

And Reena was class…both the gardner n the driver…I bet she was imagining them singing "dard-e-disco' with six pack body…coming out of water….eeeewwwwww…I mean I am ok wid SRK but thought he looked eeewww in that song…(I hope I wont get jotas 😆 )

Dont say anything about SRK!!😲 Leave the guy alone!!

Back to the SS- loved reading the parts MT..👏

Bani;s the confident one here,😛 and I love to see Jai blushing...😳 so cute!😳

Prof. Deb ruined it for them, coupled with Jai's insecurities!

Will be looking forward to part 3!😊

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swati

@swatinarang

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Posted: 17 years ago

#66

wow MT dear u have started a new SS, that's really great.

wow u made bani a doctor working in holy angels, if i remember correctly dear u shld have posted her in gangaram/batra/apollo/fortis, why u have selected holy angels any particular reason 😉 , now i got it she must be in south delhi as she lives in

kya naam hai kaibee, oh god MT u have made her daughter of MR. Deb great yaar tussi great ho MT ji. 😆 dear deb ko psychiatric banana tha na as they themselves are half psycho 😆 actually AD was not professor from any angle but psychiatric must have been good (hope u won't mind my silly joke)

oh got asiad village reminding me of shopper's stop, but yaar how come that walia was able to have property in that posh locality 😉

wow what a contrast b/w JB yaar. dear just read part 1, will be back after reading other parts too.

swati

Edited by swatinarang - 17 years ago

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Sangita

@sangitadas

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+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#67

MT

Can't thank you enough for this wonderful FF. 👏

Really, love can do wonders to people but it can also render them helpless. I hope at the end of the day their love wins.

Please update soon.

Sangs

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janvi

@janu_2006

Rocker

Posted: 17 years ago

#68

hey MT
awesome parts 👏
cont.soooon

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Sanam

@sanam84

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+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#69

MT yaar...dekho ye Sheena, shrut aur Tanu mera band baja rahin hai...maine itne dil se comment kiya tha 😆

now I will do one liners...sumthin like...'great part...cont soon'

Sheena tub nahin bhara...balti se kaam chalya 😆

Shrut...I sure know wot u wanna say n if u say u r dead...if u dont u r still dead...marna to tenu mere haath hi hai 😆

Tanu i like SRK...but not in that song 😉

MT read part 2 great part....cont soon 🤣 ok ok jk hav not read will read 2morrow mornin...abhi if i read will do longer blabberin...am in a hyper mood 😆

P.S - I have haunted CP, Janpath n BM for many years...haila still miss the coffee at De'Pauls...n the dheri wala's in Janpath😆

Edited by sanam84 - 17 years ago

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khushboo2006

@khushboo2006

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#70

Hi Rekha,

Haila!!!! 😲 Bani yeh tune kya kiya….kambakht ishq 😉 😳 😆 . It says,

Kambakth Ishq Hai Jo, Saara Jahaan Hai Voh
Kab Aata Hai, Kab Jaata Hai
Par Rehta Hai Jab Tak Yeh Kambakth Jannat Dikhaata Hai

There's no villain 😕 ...huh 🤔 😆 😆 .....toh yeh Mr. Typical-Baba Deb and Mr. Insecured-Complex -Jai Walia……yeh kaun hai 😕 😆 .....felt bad for Jai 😆

And that arguments between JB ...got them separated....althogh they didn't mean those words for each other....."Sigh" 😛

So Bani still can't forget her "First love" and gave up to give a try anymore 😛 ....Good girl 👏 👏 ....hold your breath in till Jai is in the picture again 😳 😳 😆

Hope to see a Mr. All-Achieved-in-life-But-Love-Jai Walia is back and going to meet love of his life Ms. Pefect on the day of Bisharjon 😃 😆

Waiting for Part-3. Enjoyed reading this part 😊 Thanks dear.
👏

Edited by khushboo2006 - 17 years ago

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