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@culgal86

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Posted: 17 years ago

#51

hey MT................

lovely parts....................

happy dushera to u too...............

update soon

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Shruti Chopra

@shrutichopra

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Posted: 17 years ago

#52

Sam, I want to maroo a comment here, but you will pakka kill me for it so I am going to refrain...
But itna detailed comment...must be the most detailed one ever...Sunday ko...woh bhi subah subah 😆

Coming back to your part Rekha, I'll just use one line to describe it,

A smile on my lips and sadness in my eyes...
that is what I had on my face when I finished reading the last word of this part...

I am amazed by how well you write, had always heard a lot about your writing from friends but never thought it would be this good...brilliant writing and getting across the emotions...you are truly a natural 👏 😭 👏

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Benazir

@mohabbat_bs

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Posted: 17 years ago

#53

hey MT,
tht was very beautifully written, d emotions of both Bani n Jai

n also i feel tht Bani's dad needs a special mention i dont think tht he did nethin wrong as every father is concerned abt the future of his daughter n there was a big contrast in Jai n Bani
i mean Bani was already enroute to a bright future while Jai could only try his best to reach there (mayb... mayb not)

waitin for Jai to cum back
benazir

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suwas

@suwas

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Posted: 17 years ago

#54

Another great update.

Loved their relationship & felt bad for them.

But may be it was for their own good. I bet Jai has worked hard & is successful now.BAni's dad is justified in what he did as a concerned father.

Waiting for next update. Want to see how they meet again & what happens then.

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nikita28

@nikita28

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Posted: 17 years ago

#55

Hi MT,

Great part. Even though Jai and Bani are poles apart from one another, still they seem so perfect for one another.

The way in which you portrayed Jai and Bani's first time together was wonderful.

Jai must have been so heartbroken to actually end the relationship himself....I hope the last part brings happiness.

Please continue soon.

Nikita

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divan

@divan

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Posted: 17 years ago

#56

I am at loss of words. The Prof Deb's concern. The choice that Jai makes and how Bani reacts to that choice. Some things in life are better left alone.

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johnangad

@johnangad

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Posted: 17 years ago

#57

awwwwwwwwwww! pls make jai super rich and back in bani's life! luv their chemistry!

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angelhair

@angelhair

Beginner

Posted: 17 years ago

#58

great part, thanks. loved it loads.

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watsonmamu

@watsonmamu

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Posted: 17 years ago

#59

Awesome part again, MT!! Beautifully penned!! Jai's emotions portrayed so nicely. I am glad he met with Bani before he left as he could easily have disappeared into thin air. It was sad to see them separating (and the way they did)! And the way Bani, being Bani, loved life itself but realized that it was fruitless dating other men. I really hope she finds out at this Durga Puja that it was because of her father that Jai sacrificed his love!!!

Thank you for a truly beautiful FF!!!

Edited by watsonmamu - 17 years ago

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Jazmin

@jnawaz

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Posted: 17 years ago

#60

hi Mt,
oh my god...yeh kya hogaya...stupid dad uff...why did he have to put his bif fat nose into bani and jai's business... 😡 uff...kabab mein hadi kahin kaa 😡 😡 😡 ...omg...jai and bani...haila... 😳 😳 😳 june 19th...omg...but it was great...loved the update...i cant wait to see what happens...i just cant wait
JAZ

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