FF - Neighbor’s - Complt / Thk Nt - Pg 26 - Page 8

MT,

Your ff is very different but I love it, I was waiting to read this kinda of Jai's character, I mean he's not a big man, rich but hot and handsome, fact that made Bani fall for him 😛. Everything was perfect, the characters, I like Bani's pet, poor soul bani left him tied to a tree to meet her BF and forgot him there 😆 😆...Bani is very chalu gal, I like her guts.

Continue soon.

PS. Thanks for this wonderful ff.

That was an amazing update with humor as well as sorrow. Great job...

RE, bring them back together ASAP.
Somali

Sam I am not opening my mouth...so marna mat..

and yea now I agree that Depauls coffee rocks...went there 3 times in 6 days... 😆 😆

Shruti

Waiting for the next part
plz continue ASAP

I will assuredly finish this on Sunday,

^^ 😕 😆 heheh.. what happened to that??

Originally posted by: bugs_bunny

I will assuredly finish this on Sunday,

^^ 😕 😆 heheh.. what happened to that??

That just like KS Characters, even I am suffering from OCLD...Obsessive Compulsive Lying Disorder😉😆

Nahin yaar Tanu,

I tried to wrap it off yesterday, but was really, really tired... I will try and write it out today...but thoda mushkil hain...have loads of work to do...but promise, just one more part and done!

Cheers,

MT

PS: Guys, thanks for all the comments and posts and the lovely PM's too...will get back to you one by one!😃

OCLD?😲 🤣

No problemos... take your time! 😃

Waoh… the three parts were beautiful

A teenage love story of Jai and Bani… Great… You have beautifully penned adolescent and innocent love of Jai and Bani with Durga Puja in the back ground…..

Jai and Bani are so different in this story and so different from the regular image of JB. Two young ones falling in love for the first time and experiencing many firsts fro the first time….

So, Jai and Bani have parted and that too on a bitter note … Bani has made it big in her career but not able to get away from the memories of Jai… Now what about Jai??? Where is he???

It's 7 long years and looks like now the stage is set for the reunion of Jai and Bani… Hope at the end true love wins against all odds….

Do continue soon…….