SS loving the Wrong Person end pg23

ofcourse

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Posted: 17 years ago

#131

The flashback was penned beautifully Mamta..It was very romantic..The carriage, christmas carol, ice-skating...

So is it Jai at the door? It will be good to see Jai wooing her back..Pls continue soon dear..
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Janoo

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Posted: 17 years ago

#132

Awesome part it was sooo sweet! Hey y did u stop it there pleaseeeee continue soon...

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Pachu.P

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Posted: 17 years ago

#133

😳 The Flasback rocked MJ!! 😳

You got red writing that??? Benn...that's nothing!! You can do BETTER!! 😉 😳 😆

Please Continue SOON and make us not wait that long 😃

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Mamta Singh

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Posted: 17 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: ~Pachu*n*Abhi~

You got red writing that??? Benn...that's nothing!! You can do BETTER!! 😉 😳 😆

Paj i took it out, because i am very good girl😉, so i saved it for something else😉

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amisha

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Posted: 17 years ago

#135

wonderful part loved it so beautiful and romantic please can we have another update too cant wait to read more 😃

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Niroo

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Posted: 17 years ago

#136

hey piks.
that is really. not cool at all.
u cant stop there.
that is not nice.
nir is going to cry 😭

btw.. is that jai..
omg omg omgom
continue soon please please pretty please

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Binish

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Posted: 17 years ago

#137

awwwwnnn.. piku????.. wait its jai at the door isnt it.... wow.. i wonder wats gonna happen..first i hope she gives him a piece ofher mind then finally sees the truth in his eyes and accepts him.. awwwnnn.. great part hun..plzz continue soon.. cant wait for the next part.. lol 😉 btw.. r u from NY.. just wondering....

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mitali patel

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Posted: 17 years ago

#138

Awwwwww, babys really adorable. Can I have her? Carriage ride, I want it. Really want 2 ice skate, then fall. The guy Kevin his sweet, Jai will get a kick in his a*s by me. Wow, they kiss hehehe. Christmas is the best. Mostly cause Mitalis birthday is like 3 days after. Yo, write more please. Cont. soon.

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melonie

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Posted: 17 years ago

#139

Hai Piku,

See I am no more first in this FF 😭 ..... *sign* I had gotten three in a row 😃 😃 😃 ....and now 😭.

Read the missed parts and all of them were very well written 👏 .

So glad that you didn't stretch the coma thing 👍🏼 .

Jai's flashback was quite depressing 😭 but I still don't approve his behaviour towards Bani 😡 😡 ....Meera was like that so he hurt Bani 😒 😔 😭.

Jai and Bani's flash back was lovely 😳 ....Newyork....Christmas.....ice.....it was beautiful 😍 .

Now I wonder who is TUM 😊 😃 ......

Pls cont soon 😃

Edited by melonie - 17 years ago

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