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Posted: 17 years ago
waitihng for ur next part
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Posted: 17 years ago
awwwwwnnnn.. piks that was soo sweet.. i loved the interaction between both mother and daughters.. heheh yes i am one of ur silent readers.. and just cuz u said it encourages u i am finally writing a comment.. lol.. 😉 😉 😆 .. anywayz great part plzz continue soon..
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hiya,

Great part. Asha Jyoti sounds perfect.

Please continue soon.

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Posted: 17 years ago
Thanks Phool and Nikita
Previous Part 5B pg15
Part 6

Asha, was an very good baby who only woke up once at the night time for her changing and feeding, during the day time, when she was awake she was very demanding baby, just like her father Bani thought.


Christmas decorations, lights were put up on her parents' house both outside and inside, her dad had gotten and Christmas decorated, and purchase lots of Christmas figurines. Asha loved the songs of Christmas carols, she would just give an glowing smile.

I'm dreaming of a white Christmas
Just like the ones I used to know
Where the treetops glisten
and children listen
To hear sleigh bells in the snow.
As the Christmas song played, Bani looked outside her apartment windows, she remembered her last Christmas that she had spent with Jai in New York. He had to attend an seminar, so he had invited her, both of them had great time together.


December 2006, Flashback
After the conference, Jai called Bani cell.

"Hello"

"Hi, Bani, get ready, we are going out!"

"Where?"

"Anywhere, in the city. Get ready, and where warm clothes, don't wan't you getting sick" He said with an mischief.

"Don't worry Jai, i have Dr. Walia, you would take care of me, if i am sick." She said boldly. Before I catch an cold, let me take an warm hot shower, and get ready for our date. Do you want to join me? she asked with an smile.

"Uh, what," he choked on his coffee, making the members of the conference look at him.

"What happened?" Bani asked suppressing her laughter.

"You witch, be ready withing one hour."

"Bye"

She disconnected the phone. What should I wear? She looked at her suitcase.
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After an hour, she was ready wearing an redeasy breezy in a trapeze shape with boat neck and beltsleeves sweater with an Christie fit flare navy pants. and waiting in the lobby for Jai. 30minutes he is late, she mumbled to herself.

As she turned around she bumped into a very strong muscular wall, who she realized belonged to Jai, and meant his eyes. He held her in her arms, looked at her from top to bottom, telling her, he liked the way she looked, making an an sold shiver run down her spine.

"Are you ready to go?" She nodded, do you have your mittens, and scarf?" He asked, has he extended his arm, and she linked it with hers.

"Of course, how was your conference?"

"Boring but it went ok, until I had and distraction. "

"What's kind of distraction?" She asked, as they walked toward the exist, knowing dam well that she was the reason behind it.

"I was imagining, you taking an shower, he whispered huskily into her ear, making her blush in the deep shade of cherry tomato matching the color of her top." Jai, she pinched him.

"What?"

"We are in the public."

"SO what its not an crime" he whispered back. As they existed and entered the busy street.

Bani saw as the cab, passed right them, and she didn't chaset he cab. She started at him. "Are you getting a cab."

"No," he shook his head, "we are not taking cab nor we are walking, we are going to ride on that." He pointed with his finger, and she followed, and gasps at the site.

"OMG," she exclaimed, with her both of hands on the side of her cheeks. Jai that's and carriage." Yup, he nodded with his head.


"May I take the lady, for an ride?" he held his front of hers.

"You certainly may", as he helped her climbed into the carriage, and told the driver where to go.

Bani snuggled, closer inside his arms, and rested her head on his shoulders, enjoying their carriage ride in the city of Manhattan

The carriage stop in front of the Rockefeller center Bani and Jai took an carriage ride to the Rockefeller Center, where an huge Christmas tree was put.Christmas carols were playing, children, couples, and friends were ice skating, along with family. .





"Bani have you ever ice skated?" He asked her

Ice skated? No, never, she shook her hands.

"Do you wanted to learn? "

"Ice skating, you mean right now?" She looked at him, like he was joking, but he was serious. He went and rented an two pairs of skates, one for him and one for her.

After putting his skates, he had helped her put the skates on.

"Jai I am not sure about this, what if I fall and break my bone."

"Sweetheart, don't forget your boyfriend is a doctor, and i won't mind looking after you, and just trust me."

Trust, is what she did with him. He took her hands, and started ice skating with her slowing, after an 30minutes she got used to skating, as it was similar to ice skating.

As the carol before lighting up the Christmas tree came to the end, everyone watched, the huge Christmas tree being lighting up, and then they heard an lady scream. All the members eyes were turned onto the couple.

The guy on front of her was kneel down, and he proposed to her. And she expected his proposal saying "Yes Kevin I will marry you" and everyone clapped, and some who were near the couple congratulated them.

"How romantic" she said to herself

"What romantic about that"

"Her boyfriend without caring of the world proposed to her."

"What a show off"

"Jai that's mean" Jai when will you propose to me, she asked inside her head, i know i am in an relationship without having commitment.

Her mind got distracted, when an teenager said.

"Hey you guys are under the mistletoe, you should kiss your girlfriend."

Jai and Bani looked at each other, Bani felt her lips dry, as she felt the cold breeze blow pass them, she licked her lips, making Jai swear under his breath, before he bended down, and captured his lips with hers.

His tongue coaxed her, and slowly entered her, and she held on into his arms, not trusting her knees, as she would collapse on the cold floor. The sound of whistling and cheers made them broke their kiss, making about of them catch their breaths, she saw his eyes were on her that was promising her much more for later, his eyes were red and filled with passion.😳

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After the ice skating they went and had an dinner at one of the finest Italian restaurants, exchanging pleasant conversations with one another. Jai wrapped his arms around Bani, keeping her safe from the cold, and she snuggled in his arms.

When they returned to their hotels, Jai had finished his kiss, from the center, and claiming Bani his and only his.

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Their rest of the trip was pleasant, Jai and Bani went for walks near the hotels. Visit Jai's elder brother Aparjit, and his family, and she meant Jai's father Mukesh.

Jai's family liked Bani the minute they saw her with Jai.

"What an lovely couple" Jai's bhabi had said

"After an long time, Jai had brought one of his girlfriends" bani felt touched by elder Mr. Walia's words.

After the dinner, Bani and Jai's two nephews had a snow ball fight against, Jai and Aparjeet, Mukesh also joined Bani and his grandkids.

"We like you Ms. Dixit, i hope Uncle Jai, comes with you more often" Neel said to her.

"Well you can visit me in California, and I will take you to Monterey, Santa Cruz "

"Really"

"Of course" as she ruffled Nitin's hair. And meant the eyes of Jai, who had an emotions playing in eyes, that she never seen, which made her wonder what was the real Jai Walia like.

The doorbell and Asha's cry made Bani came out of her sweet beautiful moments that she had spent with the father of her child and the first love.

Coming she called to Asha and the person on the other side of the door.

As she quickly went to open the door, to meet the impatiently person on the other side, her eyes grew big, and heart beat was beating fast.

Tum, she said dryly, looking at the person.

Happy Reading😛

The End

Don't forget to leave your comments whether good or back. Silent readers to make comments, as its encourages me to write.





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Posted: 17 years ago
great part, liked the flashback a lot....

Jai at the door?....please update soon coz I really can't wait for the next part 😉 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
hi sweety u have updated tt so sweet of u... wow wht a nice flashback, i hope the person at the door is jai..

pls update soon yar..

👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
I loved the Christmas memories! Hope, it is Jai at the door! Waiting for your next update.
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Posted: 17 years ago
The flashback portion of Bani's life was penned beautifully. Jai taking Bani on a carriage ride and then teaching her to ice skate...totally beautiful. But I guess certain memories just always stay in the back of our minds.

I guess Bani has just seen Jai at her doorstep. Would now like to see Jai how Jai tries to woo her back and undo his mistakes.
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Posted: 17 years ago
great part!!!

i want to go on a carraige ride too.

i wonder who is at the door?? Jai??

please cont soon
thanks
sanju
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Posted: 17 years ago
gr88 part
plz cont soon
who the person on the door is
is it jai?
plz cont soon

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