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Posted: 17 years ago
Hi,

Great update, keep writing.. ;)
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Posted: 17 years ago
Awwww..sooo emotional Mj..sachii...loved Jai's proportionss...awww..love JB's relationship.. 😳

I luv you too..☺️☺️
Edited by ~Pachu*n*Abhi~ - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Piku, you penned the emotions of both Jai and Bani bautifully in this part. Jai had the guts to turn up at Bani's door even though knowing how he had acted like a jerk in the past and then Bani let him pick up Asha...she sure does have a big heart. All in all, I am very glad that Jai finally let his defences down and told Bani the complete truth of his past and accepted his despicable behaviour and apologized profusely...a person needs to have his wits about to set things right and I am glad Jai took this upon himself..Bani had every right to be angry on him and lash out at him but for now she's at leasta greed to be his friend and has made him realize that she will not compromise on their relationship or just marry him for Asha's sake 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
PIIIIKKKKUUUUU!!!.. great part hun.. i was crying... awwwnnn so jai realised his mistake, he even propsed and cleared their misunderstandings.. wow this jai is very quick i tell ya.. lol.. u noe wat they say that most men r slow.. sorry no personal offence to anyone.. lol.. great part hun.. continue soooooooon
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey great part
i thought bani might forgive him and get together with him 😕 oh well guess they wil take it slowly 😆

plz cont

Taj
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Posted: 17 years ago

Hai Piku,
Loved the update...it was absolutely beautiful 👏 .

Loved the whole interaction between Jai and Asha...it was very cute and sweet 😃 .

Glad that Jai told Bani about his past and what his wife did in the past 😭 ....at least there wasn't any hide and seek game there 😳 .

Awwwwwwww....Jai proposed...that was the sweetest thing ever 😍 .....so happy that things are turning out good 😳 .


Pls cont soon 😃 .



P.S. If I get more time, I will write another FF/SS....It was very sweet of you 😳 😳 😳

Edited by melonie - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Awwww, such an emotional update...............

Loved the conversation between Jai and Bani and the promise ring too..................

Awesome Pikssss 👏

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Posted: 17 years ago

Hey first let me thank you for sending me the PM link piku dear😊 😊 😊

Finally JB have become friends one step at a time npt bad

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Posted: 17 years ago
Thanks Nir, Mitu, Nruba, Amiee, Hima, Nimmie1'2, Pachu, Pooks, phool527, jeenal20, Taj, Melonie, Cheeze, Perveen, and Janu_2006

Phool527: guys are really slow, but i had to make Jai fast because he already wasted 8months, and its better if he is fast, then slow and behind.😆😆😆

I wished that Ekta mayi, also and always cleared JB misunderstanding like i did in my ff. No playing games or no hide and seek just confrontation and leading to an nice hug.😳


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Posted: 17 years ago
Previous Part 7 pg 21

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Part 8 (Last Part)

A Second Chance

Most are fortunate to
have one true love in
their lives, but for others
it comes again like a gentle
breeze,caressing the tendrils
of life.

Love stirs the soul,opening
it to the beauty of special
moments and feelings sublime.
The heart is enriched,and made
whole as the rapture of love
encases it, holding tight, to
be etched forever in the tabloids
of time...
Author Anonymous



Since December the relationship between Jai and Bani had improved and they had become friends. Both of them were talking about their work, sharing problems, hanging out, or watching and movie. Even Bani's family had given Jai an second chance, but Nishikant still gave cold glares to Jai. Which Ranveer told Jai to ignore and told him.

"Welcome to the family, and get use to it, as I have since I married Rano."

Rano had also forgave Jai, but she told him not to hurt her niece or her baby sister, or she would really use her gun and chase Jai with it.

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The branches of the trees were bare making it look the grasses were uncut and tall, spooky in the rainy April afternoon sky in Florida.. As , he always had hated visiting the cemetery since he was the child but today he had came here to bid farewell to two people who he loved dearly and will always remained closed to his heart, no matter where he is at.

As he put the violets in front of his mom grave and kneeled down, his eyes averted from her tombstone.

"Hey mom, I have come here to ask your blessing before I get married to Bani Dixit, she is an wonderful, if you were alive, you would had also liked her. Bani and I have an beautiful five month daughter name Asha Jyoti.

Mom, I want you to forgive me, his gaze meant the tombstone, I had been such an jerk to Bani, and treated her like tissue paper, and I know you and dad both had taught all three of your sons to show respect to woman and treat them nice, like how you wanted your mothers and sisters to be treated. So mom, I hope you forgive me. Tears were forming in his eyes.

He heard an thunder in the sky. Winds were blowing softly as he felt, like someone had tapped his shoulders, when he looked up he saw no one, but saw an feather fly up and land on the flowers than the brought for his mother, as if indicating that she has forgave him.
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"Hey champ, here is your favorite flower, an yellow daisy, I remember you used to always run into moms garden and pick yellow daisy's and hand them to her, and she always used to have an biggest smile on her face. You will used to say Jello, pretty daisy's, see I haven't forgotten about your flowers all these years. "

An moment of silence passed by and Jai looked up and read his son tombstone that said in the beloved memory of Om J. Walia the son of Jai Walia, and Meera Walia Gupta. No matter how mad he was, Jai couldn't change who his child mother was, and after all she had brought him into the world, and he couldn't take her rights away.

Om, I haven't visited you for 7 long years, but it doesn't mean I haven't forgotten you buddy. You will always remain in my heart and in my memory no matter what. I wanted to tell you have an beautiful sister name Asha, she resembles a lot like you."

I hope I able to be an good father to Asha like I was to you. He wiped his tears rolling down his cheeks, with his fingers, and light sprinkles from the clouds started pouring down to the grounds.

"You will are a wonderful father Jai" said

Few feet away from him, he was surprise to see Bani, holding an umbrella and walking towards him, and in one hand she was carrying two roses, one in white and one in yellow.

Bani, you here? He asked in surprise.

Why should I be? As she kneeled down next to him

shouldn't you be at my house? He looked at her.

"No, I should be with you and give my support. Besides I also wanted to meet your mom and Om as she got up and place an white rose on Jai's mom grave.

"Krishna Mom, you have raised and wonderful son, whom I dearly love and promise to take care of him with all my heart" As she placed her hand over her heart.

Hi Om, how are you?

Well my name is Bani Dixit, and I am going to be your Dad's second wife, she place an yellow rose on his tombstone which resembles friendship. I have bought you something, taking small packet and unwrapping it. It showed an family picture of Jai, Asha, and Bani, which taken during Christmas. Jai placed his hand on Bani, and his eyes told her he appreciated her gestures.

I thought you might enjoy an family picture, and when my daughter grows up I will tell you about an elder brother she never got the chance to meet.

The light rained at stopped an rainbow appeared in the sky. Hand in hand, they both walked out of the cemetery to start and new beginning with each other, and somewhere up in heaven Krishna Walia was playing with her grandson Om Walia, and cuddling and loving him like Mukesh Walia is loving and pampering Asha Walia.



Happy Reading😛
The End

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This is the last part of Loving the Wrong person.

Thanks everyone for commenting and bearing with my updates.

Silent Readers and everyone else leave your wonderful comments they would really encourage me.😳

Well I couldn't think of an ending for this story, when I was doing an report on an author for my English class I read an book by Nora Roberts called Carolina Moonlight, and I loved her ending, so I borrowed it and ended Jai and Bani and all my wordings are original. 😆😆😆

Edited by *Piku* - 17 years ago

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