Short FF:Rishta(Updated last chap: pg 11)

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sabsj

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Posted: 17 years ago

#81

Divoo, lovely end to a lovely ff........really enjoyed reading it, u did a great job 👏

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preet

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Posted: 17 years ago

#82

Me third. 😛

Divya,

that was just beautiful,the ending was just fabalous.their feelings and emotions were penned down so well.the progression of their relationship was so naturally and beautiful.an amazing ff,truly enjoyed reading it.looking forward to you next one. 😊

preet 😳

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pooks

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Posted: 17 years ago

#83

Divya, it was a sweet ending. I am so glad Bani paid heed to her mother's advice and took the initiative of telling Jai how she felt. Am sure her statements must have shocked and surprised Jai but all for the better. 😉 And Bani had a baby boy and agreed to name him tanish as her sister had thought of this name for her child...truely Bani has a big heart and loves her di a lot.

The culmination of this story with JB and coming together in the real sense was beautiful. It was simply yet signified all their emotions.

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Sangita

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Posted: 17 years ago

#84

Hey Divsy, very well written. Loved the ending and its perfect.

The way JnB's relation changed, grew and developed is such a heart-warmer.

😃

How about a new one?

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mistletoe

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Posted: 17 years ago

#85

Lovley Ending Divya,👏

Really liked the way how Jai and Bani come together in the end!

Thoroughly enjoyed reading this one and the last one too!😊

Come back with a new story soon!

Cheers,

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sonu4ever

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Posted: 17 years ago

#86

Sorry i couldnt reply to teh previous part, so here i am 😃
Part 3 : Awesome part 👏 , poor bani she had to bear all that pain for maasi, both jai and bani had to make love for making bani pregnat, i must say u described their feelings wery well 👏 👏

Perfect ending, mind blowing 👏 👏
Jai took a complete care of bani 😳
And thanks to kiran who make bani realize that she can loose her husband 👏
I simply loved the way both accepeted each other, gradually 😳
Bani delivers a boy , but didnt forget her 1st daughter Tanu 👏 👏
Bani also got a place of her own in jai's heart 😳

It was a very good ff hun, with a unique and lovely story 👏 👏

Humera. 😊

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Nandita

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Posted: 17 years ago

#87

Read all the parts …. A different and wonderful story….

This fan-fic is one emotional roller coaster ride. If Part 3 was a highly emotional one then this part was a more a matured and beautifully culminated…

By the way you made me laugh with those silly questions of Bani…"kya mein moti hogayi hu?..... kya mein abh khoobsurat nahi hu?"…. Can imagine Jai's confusion over his wife's juvenility ……

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Twinkle20

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Posted: 17 years ago

#88

Beautiful work Divs Di... 😃 You're a wonderful writer... 😛 Well done... 👏 Loved the way they developed the relationship... 😳 Bani's sulkiness was so cute... 😆 Near the end... 😳 😆 Thanks to Kiran for making her daughter realise what Bani was doing... 😃 Loved it... 😃
Fantastic work... 👏

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Rupal

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Posted: 17 years ago

#89

hey divya..................

read the whole part and it was so beautiful and touching..............

enjoyed reading every part of it and the flow was great and the way each of the characters emotions was carried out was just awesome................

loved the way jai and bani progressed from jiju sali to friends and then lastly husband and wife................

masi and jigyasa made jai and bani become one but kiran made bani realise where she was wrong and that lead to such a wondeerful life now.................

great work done divya...........