Short FF:Rishta(Updated last chap: pg 11) - Page 7

my hand's sleepin.. i can't type 😆 k now where do i start from.. first let me tell u.. u gonna get me killed divu.. i swear.. i mean ur unfinished ff.. leaves me blushin and grinnin☺️ and this one made me cry😭

im a true JB fan😳.. i mean for me its JB😉😉.. and u just don't pair them wit anyone else😕😕.. but i was all senti when sonali died😭😭😭.. i mean in a way that's the only way Jai can marry Bani😕😕😕.. but they were so happy and.. u killed her😭😭😭.. well i alwayz liked sonali🤔🤔🤔.. maybe that's why d tears in my eyes😆

but man.. do u know how to make the story sentimental or wattt😭.. i mean i simply love how u explain Jai and Bani's feelings😳😳😳.. Bani's more -- as she's in that position and place where her sister once was.. and due to tanu😳😳😳.. how life changes.. i mean yes they had a cool relationship wit teasin and masti 😃😃😃buttt never imagined it to be this

and haila a year passed away.. shows that they both luv and respect sonali😳😳... i mean.. u know wat i mean😕.. and now masi and her fallin sick.. got them to go that step further and yett..to some extent he stayed within limits.. 😳 im so 😭 for them

i'd luv to have a comedy commento but ur ff's far to serious😳😳😳.. and i don't wanna ruin it by corny jokes.. it's written so well👏👏👏.. and each moment that takes place.. especially when its life changing😳.. is really shown😭😭😭.. like when tanu calls bani 'mamma'😭😭😭.. how special that must've been.. 😭

i just simply lovedddd it😳😳😳.. very touchy😳😳😳.. emotional story.. very well written👏

sorry about the delay.. but uni and laziness keeps me busy😆 will be waitin for the nxt part.. loveddddddddddd it 👏

P.S. d boxers and d whole thing was quiet cute and funny😳.. till bani's realization strikes.. then its all bac to 😭😭😭 i can't wait to see wat happens next😳😃 how .. if they're gonna fall for in 'love' happens😃..

P.P.S. i would've fainted😆😆 but d part meant a lot more😳😳😳.. so no faints.. it was blushin☺️☺️☺️ and then.. haila wat must they be going thru 😭😭😭

just fabulous 👏 sorry for any mishtooks.. i have to go to class now.. so can't re-read😃😃😃

Hey Divya,

That was a very touching part. Felt bad for JB. Hope they get over the guilt soon.Loved the way you described JB emotions over the issue.

Pls continue soon.

Kiran

Great part.
liked it.
very emotional and touching part....can totally understand JB's pain....hope soon they both will overcome their guilt and become a happy couple...it is needed for the future even if it pains.
plz cont. soon

Great part Divya... the feelings of the charcters were very put!! 👏 👏

Awkwardness is still there between them, but will they ever accept each ohter completely-- i hope so! 😃

Will be waiting for the next part

Great story Divya. Love the way you have portrayed the compulsions forcing JB to move into a new phase of their relationship. BTW in many parts of rural India when the elder sister dies, the younger sister is married to the Jeeja, simply coz the families are familiar and the kids if any, have a known person to be their mom.
Somali

awesome divs... please continue soon 😛

haila!! that was an awesome part!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i loved it!!!!! but wow!!!... that was something

awww..... too bad i feel bad for them!

cant wait for last part!!!!!! 👏 👏 👏

hey divya
gr8 part 👏
cont. sooon

divs that was an awesome written part
it was soo emotional and saddening
continue soon 😃

hi
that was great exploration of emotion, pleasure and regret. it was fantastic i have read ur other ff that it was mind blowing how i wish u were the creative head of the KS.
we all will eagerly await for your next updates.

take care.