FF: Ek Rishta Pyar Ka Note on Pg 9

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Hey guyz... a new idea popped up into my mind out of the blue. I am still continuing Pyar Ki Ek Kahaani... and i just hope you guyz will like just as much!

Part 1

Pia: Bani hurry up!! We are waiting for you…

Bani: yeah yeah… I am coming in ten minutes…

Bani smiled as she put down the phone. She, Pia and Rano, who were also the best of friends decided to go out for dinner at a famous hotel beside the beach. It had a beautiful view and the food was amazing. It was one of the three girls' favourite place and since Bani was caught up with her work for the past few days, all of them decided to go out for the evening.

Bani was an anchor in a talk show, where she interviewed famous people in the society, including woman from kitty parties to big bold business men. Her show was quite popular but the only thing that mattered to her was that she was enjoying her work, even though it had no connection with her education. Bani did her masters in Business (just go with it) and was suppose to go into the ruthless business world and make a position for herself. But one thing she hated in the world more than anything, is Business and more than that egoistic business men.

The only reason behind this is her father, her only remaining relative in the world. Bani disliked him, no absouletly loathed him. Nishikant Dixit, was one of the top business men in India, living in Mumbai with his only daughter, who refuses to even look at him, forget talking. However, he, as a father fulfilled all his responsibilities and loved his daughter more than anything in the world. His wife, Kiran Dixit died almost 12 years ago, leaving her daughter in the care of her father.

Bani, on the other hand did nothing to fulfill her duties as a good daughter. When ever both of them sat down together, it would always turn out into a fight. The reason Bani hated her father was unknown to many, except her two best friends and obviously her father. When Bani was twelve, she saw many fights between her parents. She later spent many days seeing her depressed and sad mother, who would lock herself in her room, refusing to let anyone in.

And that was how her childhood went by. She would witness the fights between both her parents and she being closer to her mother, as her father is always too busy in his business deals, would notice how distressed she used to be. Then one day, her father came up to her and lovingly placed his hand on her head. When she asked the whereabouts of her mother, he replied in a cold tone that she was gone… gone from the world.

And as she grew up, more questions started to pop in her head. Even though her father never used to look into her eyes, while giving the answers, she found out one thing; her father wanted to divorce her mother and therefore she suicided. This gave Bani grief to no end. And hence, she hated her father. He was reason her mother was dead.

She remembered the cold and dark nights, where she spent in her room, crying her eyes out. No one came to her support then. And over the years, she started to hate everything of her father. His business, which she would have to take over, his parties, where she was warned to be on her best behaviour and pose for the media as the daughter of the famous Nishikant Dixit.

She loathed it… every bit of it. And even though she got her degree in business, she purposely took her job as an achor. To annoy her father and stay away from the business stuff. Of course after a while the media stop questioning, why she didn't take on her father's business, why she chose something else, why this why that. And so Bani settled in her own life.

Pia and Rano were friends of her since college. All three of them got on like fire. Nobody would even guess that they were not real sisters, even though they acted like it. Pia was a fashionable person. All she cared about was her looks and beauty. And Bani had to accept that she was pretty. All guys fell head over heels for her… but she never said yes to someone. No matter what, inside she is really sweet and lovely. She loves her two best friends and could give anything for them.

Rano, was different in a way. She too looked beautiful. Of course, she was the total opposite of Pia… she loved a quiet and simple life. Reading books, spending quality time with her friends. She couldn't care less for her looks… however, it is a different point that Pia drags her, along with Bani to salons, shopping and stuff like that. But from the inside, she cared for her two friends and would even give up her life for them.

Bani, on the other hand, was a bit of both. She loved shopping and also at the same time have a simple life. Her looks were amazing and Pai made sure that Bani takes care of her appereance. She loved and cared for her friends more than anything in the world, after all they were her life… they were like a family, which she never exactly had. Both of them respected her decisions and were with her through thick and thin…

Bani parked her car and quickly made her way into the restaurant. Pia and Rano were definitely going to kill her… she was more than an hour late. But it was not her fault. She couldn't pack up early… she just prayed that they wouldn't be too mad at her…

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Would be looking forward to your comments... our handsome Jai Walia, would be introduced in the next chapter... and Pia is actually nice and cares for Bani... not like in KS 😡

Archi😊

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xxainy thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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me first

sound good cont..soon

Edited by xxainy - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow!!!!

sounds interesting!!!!!!!!

cant wait to see how bani and jai meet!!!!

i hope that bani and her father's relationship gets better over time!!

love the relationship between pia and rano and bani!!hope it never changes!!

please cont soon
thanks
sunju

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Posted: 18 years ago
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archi that was ana wesome start
poor bani seemed to have a miserable childhood but she did find friendship in two great people 😃
now please continue soon 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey Archi,I am so happy to see a another ff.really exicted. 😃

fabalous start,the intro to all the character was penned down beautiful.the way you have shown Bani's life to be is very sad and u have protrayed its really well.lookin forward to the next part. 😊


preet 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey archi 😃 story sounds amazing and offcourse different.

bani hates her father whoops 😛 that's something new to read 😃 always jai hated his father but now bani amazing 😆
and pia positive and caring😲 haila why cant i digest this 😆 🤣

continue soon hun

Aysha
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great start 👏 👏

bani hates her dad
dats sad

and pia is good ? 😆 😆 😆
cnt wait to read the nxt part
ctn soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Awesome start Archi 👏

Sounds interesting 👏 😳
So bani hates the world of business , well that'd be hard for jai 😆
Pia is good, what a change 😃
and rano as usual sweet and simple
Bani seems to be a vivd person 😊

Please continue Soon

Humera 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Awesome start.
liked it.
plz cont. soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome start!
love pia's character..especially because she is good!!!😃😃
amazing part...please continue soon! 😊
Edited by ~devi~ - 18 years ago

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