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Posted: 18 years ago
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Excellent start Archi...Looks cool...So Bani hates ND...Cos he is the reason for her mother's death... Feel bad for Bani...Loved the way Bani is doing anchoring to annoy her father... 😆 Anyways...Please continue soon... 👏 Her two besties seem REALLY nice... 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hi
gr8 story line 👏
cont. sooon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#13
The story looks verry interesting.
I can't wait to see the next part in order to know what will happen next. 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
#14
Hey Archi,
A New FF 😉
Loved the first part. It was penned down beautifully.
Bani and her life.
Thank god Pia is good!!
Continue soon,
want to know how the story goes on.
Jai will have a tough time,
He is a business tycoon and Bani hates that!
lolz...
👏
Edited by archita_59 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey guyz thanks for all the comments. Sry, wasn't on IF the whole weekend so couldn't post this part. Hope you like it!!

Part 2

Jai Walia, known for his arrogant behavior and his huge success in the business world. At just the age of 27, he took over his father's business, and built the whole Walia empire single handedly. His egoistic character is well known to everyone and yet, he is the idol to many.

His looks buy him the company of all girls. All head just turn to him whether or not they known his true identity. He was well built man, with a handsome face. His eyes were muddy brown and as deep as an ocean. He always dressed in his trade mark colour, Black and many actually love the dark colour because is now 'Jai Walia's colour'.

No matter how much people admire this young, but ruthless business man, nobody understood his troubles till date. Is it easy managing at huge empire at the age of 27?? Well, no. When his father passed away in a heart attack, Jai took care of his won family. Giving them support, but having no one to console him. And so, he learned things the tough way. Creating an empire that is worth billions is not an easy task… and more than that, managing it and keeping it always on number is even more difficult.

His family mainly consisted of his motherly figure Massi, who he loved more than anything. She was like a second mother and father. His elder sister Jigyasa, married and settled with his best friend Aditya Bali. She has three children: Pushkar, Ranveer and the darling of the house Anu. Adi's mom, who is called Dadi by everyone also stays in the Walia Mansion, with this small, but lovely family.

And in spite of having success by his side at a young age, Jai Walia never had an 'love affairs'. It was common in the business world, to have top industrialists use woman like there clothes. But yet, Jai Walia was different even in that category. Even though he attracted the top models, he never committed to anyone. However, rumors do fly around and the media stated recently that he was dating a girl named Roshini Chopra.

But when was the media ever right about anything? Picking up some rumors that the public spreads. Go our with Roshini for a business related lunch, and it is in the news paper the next morning, giving the whole meeting a different meeting. No that Jai ever cared, but sometimes he does get irritated at the fact that the media is always tailing him… hunting him for juicy news. Its not like, he was the only successful business man in the country.

And on one of those fowl days, when Jai read a stupid article about him and Roshini, he was really annoyed; He was in one his mood swings. He yelled at all his employees, who dared to come to him for things and kept only to himself for the whole day. To top it all of, Roshini was not even bothered by this news. In fact, she called him and said she was glad that the media was printing about them.

Jai reached his anger point that evening, when Roshini asked to out for dinner. He didn't want to give the media anymore chances. And more than that, he wasn't entertained in the company of Roshini. She irritated him with her ignorance and her thinking that money is everything. But luck wasn't with him, on this matter. He was forced to go with her to sign some papers, even though they could have been done in the office.

And so, both of them went to the famous hotel beside the beach. It had an excelled view of the scenery, from its huge glass windows and the food was enjoyable, even Jai preferred home made food. He was dressed in his colour black, causing many heads to turn towards him, when he entered the restaurant. Roshini was in a mini skirt, trying to impress Jai, even though it was irritating him and a having her make up over done, like always.

One thing that Jai never really understood about girls is their thinking that make up will give them beauty. In fact, Jai though putting too much make like, Roshini is right now, will make the person lose their natural beauty and make them look ugly. And all girls, who he met so far in parties and functions, were always decked up in costly designer sarees and having their make up done, more than required.

Beauty comes naturally to people. If you can't accept your appearance, how will others accept your fake beauty?? But apparently, Roshini doesn't give for her natural beauty and believes that you have to make yourself pretty. That is the way of the world, she said to him once. And Jai replied to her coolly, that beauty comes from the heart and clearly you don't have it.

His Massi insisted him that he should get married now, as he was nearing his thirties. But her never found the right girl. Every single girl he met, were all like his sister. Dressing themselves more than required, thinking money is everything. But, his sister is better than those girls in a way. She had a good heart, which is what everyone else was lacking. All they cared about was his money and his huge empire.

In fact, his nephews, who were more like his best friends, concluded jokingly that he would never get married if he kept going this way. Looking for a simple girl, who would be beautiful at heart. Apparently to them, no one simple could take on the title as 'Mrs. Jai Walia'. But Jai just brushed both Pushkar and Ranveer away saying that they better look at themselves first.

And so, Jai sat at the restaurant, looking out the window at the peaceful night, while Roshini blabbered on. He was not interested in her or talk. He just came here cause she forced him to. But little did he know, that his evening would not as boring as it seems. He didn't notice a beautiful girl, dressed in jeans and a cute white top, coming in and taking a seat with two other girls.

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plzz ignore the mistakes... next part JB meet... will be looking forward to your comments....

Archi 😉
Edited by achiever_libra - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great part!!!!!!!!

loved your intro about jai!!!

roshni 😡

cant wait to see how jai and bani will meet

please cont soon
thanks
sunju


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Posted: 18 years ago
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archi...main tumse baath nahin kaar rahi hoon... 😭 tumne naya ff shuru kiya...and u didnt even tell me...haye...kya dosti hai yaar... ...lol...emotional blackmail...i know 😉

great beginning...read two updates in one go...cant wait for part 3 with the JB meeting...i think jai will see his simple girl that will become 'mrs. jai walia'...and bani will see her prince charming too naa...lol...
JAZ
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Posted: 18 years ago
#18
Great part.
liked it.
owww this JW soundes just arrogant yet....gosh don't even have words for him. 😳 😆 😆
oh man Roshni 😡 😡 😡...good that Jai don't pay any heed to her. 😃
wow ooohhh....he saw Bani...didn't he 😉 😆
plz cont. soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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doing great with this ff also
look forward to jai and bani meeting
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Posted: 18 years ago
#20
Awesome Archi... 👏 A cute young girl...Bani!!! 😃 Wow...Jai seems an awesome character...Can't wait for JB's meeting... 😳 Please continue soon... 👏

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