'The unfortunate Marriage'updtd pg34 9/13 - Page 6

Raania Di...That was one fabulous part... 👏 Really loved it once again... 😛 Still confused though... 😕 😆 I understand that Jai is confused at the moment but what had gotten into him on their wedding night... 😕 Hmmm...Can't wait to find out... 😉 But loving these little scenes between them... 😳 Bani can't seem to forget her past... 😭 She says she doesn't love Jai but those tears said it all... 😳 Well done Di... 👏 Really nice work... 😛 Please continue soon... 😃

Hey Raania Di,thanx for the double treat. 😃

that was just fabalous,the story is getting more and more interesting.Bani's pain was penned down so well,along with Jai's confused state of mind.seems like he is goin to woo his wife back.very sweet.lookin forward to the next part. 😊


preet 😳

Gripping part...can't wait for more..
👏 👏 👏

Hi Raania!!

Awesome updates, thanks for 2 chaps 😃 😃

I don't know what to say, it's going very good the story, Jai is treating Bani like a wife now unlike in the past, I'm glad but what will happen when he remembers everything that happened in one year ... the accident that Jai had, it seemed that he was missing/regretting what he did to Bani on the one day of their marriage which become the end of their relationship, was he missing her??? 😕 😕 😕

Please continue Asap!!!

I'm dieing to read next update 😳 😃 😃

Heya Rani!
Well...I wanted to post this yesterday but couldn't! Your ff, for some reason, reminded me of this song ( it is a very very old song)!
There is this one line that reminds me so much of B: "Some say love is a razor that leaves your soul to bleed". 😭


The Rose lyrics by Westlife.

Some say love it is a river
that drowns the tender reed
Some say love it is a razor
that leaves your soul to bleed

Some say love it is a hunger
an endless aching need
I say love it is a flower
and you it's only seed

It's the heart afraid of breaking
that never learns to dance
It's the dream afraid of waking that never takes the chance
It's the one who won't be taken
who cannot seem to give
and the soul afraid of dying that never learns to live

When the night has been too lonely
and the road has been too long
and you think that love is only
for the lucky and the strong
Just remember in the winter far beneath the bitter snows
lies the seed
that with the sun's love
in the spring
becomes the rose

Lots of love
Your sweety sweetu
p.s update kar naa 😳

Originally posted by: sweetu144

Heya Rani!
Well...I wanted to post this yesterday but couldn't! Your ff, for some reason, reminded me of this song ( it is a very very old song)!
There is this one line that reminds me so much of B: "Some say love is a razor that leaves your soul to bleed". 😭


The Rose lyrics by Westlife.

Some say love it is a river
that drowns the tender reed
Some say love it is a razor
that leaves your soul to bleed

Some say love it is a hunger
an endless aching need
I say love it is a flower
and you it's only seed

It's the heart afraid of breaking
that never learns to dance
It's the dream afraid of waking that never takes the chance
It's the one who won't be taken
who cannot seem to give
and the soul afraid of dying that never learns to live

When the night has been too lonely
and the road has been too long
and you think that love is only
for the lucky and the strong
Just remember in the winter far beneath the bitter snows
lies the seed
that with the sun's love
in the spring
becomes the rose

Lots of love
Your sweety sweetu
p.s update kar naa 😳

that is so sweet sweetu😳...yes yaar you are right ....love is such! i will update soon!

Originally posted by: Raania

that is so sweet sweetu😳...yes yaar you are right ....love is such! i will update soon!

I am going to a dinner sweety...so I might not be first or even second to post my comments😭. How sad....reserve a place pour moi!

Update soon...will be waiting, or hope that it will be up by the time I am back ( well that is going to be really late😆). So I hope I get a double treat😃

😭 Ok I think I am going insane trying to get through 😆 ! Meneh doh baar try kiya magar...no reply !
Ok well...when you have time...do try 😉

aur...update karo naa! 😛
Luv ya
mwah
sweetu 😳
p.s. please answer....i tried again

The story is moving really well with lots of undershadowed emotions between the two.

Very interesting 👏 👏 👏 . Please update soon.

Rani that was amazing!
so he finally figured out that she is his wife
but poor guy still can't remember when they got married...who she is or anything else
bani still loves him soo much!
i am still trying to sit here and think of what did he do???
continue soon 😊