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khushboo2006

@khushboo2006

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Posted: 18 years ago

#31

😆 😆

Great part Raania! Loved how you portrayed the flashbacks and the present. It seemed JB went along very well but wondering why the broke up. I think something was hatched behind JB's back. Bani is making a sacrifice for Rano and Varun. Wondering how Bani is going to handle the situation when Jai is around. Please continue sooner.

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Ridhi

@ridizzz

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Posted: 18 years ago

#32

Great part.
liked it.
it seems like Jai liked Bani lot then what went wrong...why he did that.
Bani didn't know how to put makeup😆 😆 😆
plz cont. soon.

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sukhjinder kaur

@siumi

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Posted: 18 years ago

#33

Hi Raania!!!!!!

Awesome, excellent update 👏

Very well explained Bani's emotions n all the flashback and Jai's confusion👏 👏 👏

Thanks for a long part 😳 😛

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janvi

@janu_2006

Rocker

Posted: 18 years ago

#34

hi raania
just read yr ff n its gr8 👏
cont. soon

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Sangita

@sangitadas

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+ 3

Posted: 18 years ago

#35

So She's doing all this for Varun and Rano?

Good, but the heart often moves in treacherous ways, don't know how she will manage JW and the past too, given the fact that he doesn't remember anything.

Good update 👏 👏 👏

Please update soon.

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@xxainy

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Posted: 18 years ago

#36

once again a very nice part 👏
just one wondering why jai threw out bani and that he has lost his memory how is bani going to keep away for him her feeling towards jai
can't wait cont.. soon

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jigna_07

@jigna_07

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Posted: 18 years ago

#37

Rani that was awesome!
loved the flshback and that she didn't know how to wear any make up 😆 😆 😆
so jai is thinking everything is normal....
how is bani gonna control herself
please continue soon 😃

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Twinkle20

@Twinkle20

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Posted: 18 years ago

#38

Di...Another fantabulous part... 👏 Loved it... 😛 But what is with Jai... 😕 Something is surely fishy...JB used to LOVE each other by the looks of the flashbacks... 😳 But what happened... 😕 On their wedding night...He suddenly went weird...
Can't wait to find out why...Please continue soon... 😉
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Dammy

@damilola

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+ 2

Posted: 18 years ago

#39

👏 great part

jai still thinks bani is his girlfriend/fiancee

he was a major jerk to the poor woman 😡

but poor bani she will go along wit this amnesia thing cos she wants to help rano and varun

and bani not knowing how to put on make up 🤣🤣 hilarious 😆

ctn soon

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preet

@preet_2010

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Posted: 18 years ago

#40

Hey Raania Di,

another amazing update,very well written.the story is getting more and more interesting.seems like Jai use to love her the way she does,but there somethin fishy goin on here.I hope both of them are able to make this work for both of them.beautifully written,lookin forward to the next part. 😊

preet 😳

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