'The unfortunate Marriage'updtd pg34 9/13

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Hi guys

After so many pms and so many questions i finally decided to write another one for Jai & Bani! I know i have a pending fanfic "rhistey" but after all that happened i just lost touch in wanting to complete and i will request mods to close it.

This however, is something fresh that stuck in my mind and with what all is happening in the show, i decided to give it a try. If it appeals to you i will continue. let me know!

The beginning, or was it the end!

Bani got of the cab and looked at her crinkled skirt and straightened it. God how long had it been? Merely 15 months when her husband of 16 hours had thrown her out of this big mansion and laughed at her face "get out." "get out now" . It seemed like a dream yet it was reality. She had been in love with him the instant they had met and that is what she had thought was Jai's feelings towards her as well! How wrong was she? To this day it makes her want to puke when the dreadful day comes to her thoughts.

Closely her eyes and breathing deeply Bani looked up at the big house. Jai Walia had asked for her. The man who had sworn to never see her face had called for her.

Cab: mam appka change?

Bani: oh ha, thank you! Taking the change with shivering hands she put it in her bag without counting it.

The cab driver looked at her and confused asked; memsaab saab theek toh hai, bhar itni garmi hai aur aap ko thand lagrahi hai.

Bani shielding her eyes from the sun looked at the cab driver, little did he know why she was so cold all of a sudden. "nahi bhaia, meh theek hu" Pulling her handbag up her shoulder and opening the huge gate.

Breathing deep she looked at her toes and than upwards to the sky "hey bhagwaan jane aaj kya hoga" Why she had come she didn't know but all Aditya had said was "Mr Walia was involved in a very bad accident and had asked for you"

Ringing the door bell and waiting. There was a new bulter, opening the door and looking at her confused. "Yes" Bani her throat suddenly dry looked at him confused, surely Aditya had told the staff about her arrival. "I am Bani Wa, God it was so hard, she had gone back to Bani Dixit after that day even though she had never received a divorce notice but why today out of all the days was she back at saying Bani Walia? My name is Bani and Mr Walia is expecting me!

Aditya had crossed the hallway spotting Bani at the door. "Aah Mrs Walia" "please come in?"

The confused look from Bani to Aditya and than from the Butler to both didn't do much to change Aditya's attitude. A close friend and as his solicitor Jai would trust his friend eyes closed in situations like this.

Bani hesitating and smiling awkwardly stepped in "hello Aditya?"

Aditya looked at Bani "how pale she looked but still the same" Its still no news to him what happened between the two but who was he to question Jai. It was almost shock when the headlines of Monday's newspapers had read "the great Jai Walia throws his wife out of his life?" "the mystery remains untold?" Till date nobody knew the reason and Jai didn't divulge in it, not even to Aditya. Aditya had felt the level of discomfort Jai went through if ever going that direction and being a true friend Aditya had never pusued the matter.

Bani was led by Aditya across the hallway passing all the rooms. Rooms that Bani didn't even have enough chance to look at. The only one she knew was his room, the room where the master had not left in making Bani his completely merely after which he had crushed her heart in thousand pieces.

Closing her eyes "you will beg me to take you back" were his last words as she had stood outside the big door of the mansion and looked at him with hurt and hatred in her eyes. "I will never" was her reply " I will never ever come back to you". Jai had yet again laughed at her comment and looked at her with blood shot eyes "you will not survive out there Bani Walia" "or should I say Bani Dixit?" "by now you should have figured it out " "I married you only to make you mine, nothing more or less and now that I have" looking her up and down as if she was a piece of rag. That had hurt Bani more than anything. She had looked at him that last day and the last 14 months or so she had got up everyday cursing how much she hated him and how much she hated herself for believing in him.

Aditya opened the door to another room 'thank god Bani heaved a sigh of relief" she didn't think should could handle all those memories again!

Before leading her in "his in pretty bad shape, with bruises and bandages" Hesitating for a second. "He was unconscious for sometime after the accident and now that his conscious, the past year or so is a lost memory to him". "its only temporary but he needs time to regain all back" "He might seem a bit lost at first but he might or might not recognize you". Bani looked up at him afraid of what his reaction might be? "What happened Aditya?" Aditya looked at Bani a bit confused but cutting her off "it doesn't matter" opening the door. "Just don't say anything, his asleep"!

Bani sucked in a deep breath as she saw him laying on the bed, sheets half covering up to his chest with bandages on his head and shoulder. Bruises in blue and purle visible on his hands and chest!. He was always so strong and so full of energy and life, a man of action. Seeing him like that just took a bit of her heart wanting to hold him and cradle him close to her chest. Bani didn't know why was she feeling like this, every night she wished to hate him more than anything and today seeing him; it just took her back to square one. Why did she love this man so much? And why couldn't she hate him?

Bani looked at Aditya with blurred vision "how is he?" a whisper barely leaving her mouth. Aditya more confused at the raw emotion in Bani's face and the whole body language. She was shaking. "he has survived Bani". "Can I please sit with him?" Aditya looked a bit worried as Bani looked at him with hopeful eyes. "oh please God don't let him say no?" her knees were getting weak and she couldn't manage to stand up much longer!

Aditya almost saying no and than hesitating "okay" "but don't wake him" Bani heaved a sigh, "yes I wont".

Aditya closing the door behind leaving as Bani collapsed on the chair next to the bed. "oh jai?' she whispered a huge sigh, straightened the sheets afraid to touch him. "what happened to you?" he was never a reckless driver than how did this happen?

Looking at his sleeping frame was one of the hardest thing Bani did. She still remembered the first time when she had laid eyes on him. Across the many beautiful faces that day at the show his eyes were only on her. She was overwhelmed at his interest in her and excited when he had asked her for a coffee. Coffee led to lunches and lunches to dinners when one day he had just popped the questions. Two months into their relationship, Bani had become Mrs Walia but only for those 16 hours or so~

Jai moved. Was he waking up, looking anxiously at him. He stirred again and this time she saw his eyelids move. "Jai" as the words left her mouth. Looking at him as he opened his eyes and trying to focus on the beautiful face in front of him. Was she his angel? Bani clearing her throat "Mr Walia?"

Jai looked up at her finally realizing and managing in a raw voice, heavy and deep just as Bani heard her name so many times "and where the hell have you been?" Bani watched astonished as the words left his mouth.

Bani: I….

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melonie thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Me First 😃...

Really a beautiful start Raaina🤗👍🏼...Something very different😃😳.....Atleast for now I don't like this Jai😡....He used Bani only to fulfill his lusty desires😡, threw her away after 16hrs of marriage😡😡....Bani seems to be a real angel😳, even after all the emotions she had to go through she still came to see him and her heart mealted seing him in this condition😭😭😭....She really loves him a lot😳😃, I only hope Jai is intelligent enough to realise that😡....And again his last line made me want to kill him😡😡😡....he is such a arrogant, rude man....Pls cont soon,will be eagerly waiting😳 😃😛....

Mel.

Edited by melonie - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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me 2nd 😃

wonderful begining raania and story sounds interesting😉

married only for 16 hrs😲 did i read that part correct???😲

jai only married her because he wanted her body only😡 how disgusting😡

i hope now jai will realise when bani will look after him😳

continue hun very good story i must say👏

Aysha

Edited by patooki - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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😆 😆

Great start Raania. Glad that you started a new FF again. Wondering what was the reason when Jai threw his newly wed bride Bani out of his life after 16 hours of his marriage😕. Please continue soon.

👏

Edited by khushboo2006 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow..u started another FF 😛 ..gr8 update. 👏 .hope to read soem JB romance!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Oh! He thinks Bani is still his wife , I think!😛 And hav they got a divorce? Coz Adi called her, 'Mrs Walia'.

A great start👏👏... Really interesting.

Really looking forward to the next part. Hope you update soon😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
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great start dear... 👏 👏

a really different story. lets see what happens next

continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Grt start........hmmmm wonder what jbs past is....wonderful part !!!!!!!!! continue soon !!!!!!!!! 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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A very good beginning Raania 👏 👏 👏

And the story seems very interesting. What might have really happened so as to make thrown Bani out?

Please update soon. 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Great starting.
very different and interesting.
wondering why Jai throw Bani out like that...what made him do that.
plz cont. soon.

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