'The unfortunate Marriage'updtd pg34 9/13 - Page 24

Hi Raania,

jai really loves Bani but he made a big mistake.

I hope Bani gets better and then both Jai and Bani rediscover there love for one another.....I think it will take Bani time to trust Jai's intentions.

Please continue soon.

Nikita

Hi Raania

I caught up with all the parts of your fan fic and must congratulate you. You pen down words in such a manner that it makes the readers feel what the characters are going through. Jai and Sahil Walia have behaved totally like ass*holes. 😡 😡 I know that now they are feeling really guilty for their actions but it would take some time for both the sisters to forgive them, especially Bani. I don't want the sisters to give in that easily as both Jai and Saahil have a lot of making up to do. 😡

That was just 'Awwww'... 😭 Really nicely written down Di... 👏 Well done... 👏 Jai and his fears of meeting Bani, were nicely penned down... 👏 The way he slept next to her... 😃 Really sweet... 😳 And now Saahil's turn... 😕 Can't wait for Rano's reactions and when Bani wakes up, her reactions! 😛 Please continue soon... 👏

aww rani that was soo sweet and sad
both the bhais seem really s orry for their mistakes
lets see what happens
continue soon 😊

Hey Raania,

that was just amazing,totally loved it.seems like both Brothers are bearin the brunt of their own mistakes and both have also realized what their most precious thing is to them.its heartbreakin to see them like this,but they deserve it.now its time they both pull their act together and woo the love of their lives back.lookin forward to the next part. 😊


preet 😳

gr8 part 👏

cont. sooon

Oh so this is it? another heartbreak..another story behind this heartbreak! One misunderstanding or better to say lack of understanding between many, two at a time..led to things that are presently hurting everybody concerned. In all this, definitely two families got separated but none can deny that one led to the formation and destruction of the other i.e Jay and Bani..Hope so Saahil gets a chance, if not for being Rano's husband but being Varun's father. What Saahil did was wrong on his part but Rano's impulsive decision didn't help either. So both of them need a chance. Of course, talking of Jay and Bani, the latter can't stop herself from loving the man who cheated her but showed his love before that and again later on in life! She needs to know the truth..but what concerns me is that may be she won't like to continue the marriage since she will assume it to be a beautifully masked act of vengeance on Jay's part during their courtship days. Even Jay needs to realise his real feelings..Hope so that they feel the same as it all appeared then! I must say that you have put the situations very well..some real life...and some story wise...waiting for your next update eagerly..

Wow a good part.

Nice to see both men realising their mistakes and trying to amend them.

Please update the next part soon.

Hiya Raania,

Lovely update yaar, 👏 so both these brothers are getting down to business and sorting out what they have messed up. 😳 😆 I just wonder how Bani will take it, when she finds out the truth about Jai and his revenge. Hope it all works out, and they have there little JDD moments 😉 😆 ...

Please cont soon 😳 😃

yaar with the track KS is going on....dil nai kare ki meh write karu 😭

but i will later on today!