Candle In The Wind © (3)-End-Pg85-9/5 - Page 52

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Posted: 18 years ago

Hey sheenu...tazo is here...have read half of ur update...will come later with my lambi comments as usual! 😊 😊 Abhi khichdi bana ne jaa rahi hoon!! 😆

Ok i am back..hehe...khichdi ban bhi gayi aur kha bhi gayi!😆😆 Really enjoyed the update...👏👏👏 Jai aur Bani ki bechaini thruout the party...haila...couldn't keep their hands off one another😳😳...kahin bhi shuru ho rahe the...behind the pillars and all. 😲

That scene with the kids outside was too good!!! It had me laughing like anything 🤣...especially what Reya said


"When I get married, I want to marry some one just like him!" She continued staring at him without batting her eyelids. So true!!! 😍 U know Reya reminded me of my young cousin. When i went for a wedding few years back to india...my young cousin...i think she was six around that time...was so in love with her new uncle...she said it in front of everyone.."ke mein kab badi ho jauoon aur inke jaisa good looking husband mile" 😆 Bacche i tell u ...kya kya sapne dekh te hai aaj kal! 🤣

Jai's massive chest pumped with pride. Her next statement deflated his ego immediately. Jai must have felt on top of the world with that comment...and from his daughter too

"or may be some one like uncle Vishy…" She rested her chin in her small hands dreaming. yeh lo...kar diya na apne baap ka kachra! 😆
👏 Superb part.

So the girls are having a pyjama party...Reya was wondering if Bani was gonna be part of it...beta....Mama ke liye Papa ne kuch alag type ka pyjama party organize ki hai 😉 😆

Adbhoot and his A's....😆 Bani telling him to ruin Barnali and Roshni...👏👏 loved that bit...they need to be taught a good lesson😡😡

JB's big night finally came!!😳😳😳 Both a little scared but desparate for one another...Jai and his shayari...haila ghalib!!! Irshaad!!! 😳😆

"Jab woh jamaal-e-dil firoz,
surat-e-meher-e-neem roz,
kya aap hi ho nazaaraaye soz,
toh parde mein moh chupaye kyun"

👏👏Kya baat hai!!!...Wah!!Thanx for the translation too...
Jai...husky voice...and shayari...haiiiiii...deadly combination!!! 😍😳

Fab update Sheenu superbly written as always...captured the feelings of JB to the T.👏👏👏

Keep it coming!!

Tazoo! 🤗

Edited by Taz234 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
Great part.
loved it.
A long night where the two lovers become one once again...with all the love and passion...lovely...beautifully written.
plz cont. soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
What a lovely, mellow part Sheenu 👏 👏 👏

Must congratulate you. 👍🏼

Loved Reya's comment that she wished to marry someone like his Father 😊 . JW must have been so happy then only to be presented with another worthy opponent, Uncle Vishy. 😆 😆 😆

In this FF, Pia is behaving for time being. Hope she stays like this only. Even in KS, she wasn't a bad character to begin with. She was the one who opened her mouth against others for her sisters and now they have turned her into an insensitive being.

Coming back to the story, the desire and longing of JnB to finally and fully belong to each other has been beautifully written. Loved reading it.

Remembered a Celine Dion song called Seduces Me -

Ev'rything you are
Ev'rything you'll be
Touches the current of love
So deep in me
Ev'ry sigh in the night
Ev'ry tear that you cry
Seduces me

And all that I am
And all that I'll be
Means nothing at all
If you can't be with me
Your most innocent kiss
Or your sweetest caress
Seduces me

I don't care about tomorrow
I've given up on yesterday
Here and now is all that matters
Right here with you is where I'll stay

Ev'rything in this world
Ev'ry voice in the night
Ev'ry little thing of beauty
Comes shining through in your eyes
And all that is you
Becomes part of me, too
'Cause all you do
Seduces me

And if I should die tomorrow
I'd go down with a smile on my face, oh
I thank God I've ever known you
I fall down on my knees
For all the love we've made

Ev'ry sigh in the night
Ev'ry tear that you cry
Seduces me
Oh, seduces me
And all that you do
Seduces me

👏 Please update soon.
Edited by sangitadas - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
Shobha
What a FANTABULOUS part!!

the want, need, desire so beautifully penned for these two passionate lovers!!

And your Bani is planning an apt revenge on the two witches!!

Love the suhaag raat.....and Reya wanting to marry a man like her dad, so cute!!!

continue soon

Nina
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Posted: 18 years ago


Sheena sorry hav not read last few parts...but promise will do it on mon...or tues...please forgive...mugh nanhi si jaan pe abhi duniya bhar ka bojgh hai n its 1.30 here...just got out of the kitchen ...now gonna zzzzzzzz....how i hate cooking...bhagwaan ne pet(stomach) kyon banaya...aur banaya to itne bhookhar dost kyon diye...haila.. 😆

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: sanam84



Sheena sorry hav not read last few parts...but promise will do it on mon...or tues...please forgive...mugh nanhi si jaan pe abhi duniya bhar ka bojgh hai n its 1.30 here...just got out of the kitchen ...now gonna zzzzzzzz....how i hate cooking...bhagwaan ne pet(stomach) kyon banaya...aur banaya to itne bhookhar dost kyon diye...haila.. 😆



LOL, Dallas!!

My sentiments exactly, I too hate cooking, if someone else cooks, eating is no problem....but yeah, sometimes I wonder why my family is always so hungry too!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
😳
Thats for JB

😈

Thats for Bani taking revenge

👏
Thats for Sheena for writing a fabulous part!


(heeheeheeeheee)
Edited by Hkaurk22 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
very very nice update
thanks alot
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Posted: 18 years ago
Dear readers,

I just want to say thank you to all of you for your incredible support through out, I have been bad with replying individually to each of you, but honestly, I read every one of your comments and I feel blessed that you have been so nice to me and that you are enjoying this ff.

I can't see thank you enough! For all the readers, silent or otherwise - especially the regular commenters, without your encouragement, I would never have continued to write this fiction.

Special thanks to all the people who have commented.
Tanu (Bugs Bunny)
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Sangitadas (Thanks Sangs, that Celine Dion song was awesome)
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From the bottom of my heart...dhanyavad and a big thank you!
Edited by Sheena_Row - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
Sheena Di,

that was just amazing,man this kids are so cheeky.Reya is total doll,she wants to marry someone like her daddy.so sweet. 😃 😃 I love AD here,Bani is smart women.I am so exicted to see what AD does to those two.hehe.Jai and Bani's love for one another was described so well.Finally a union of two hearts and souls,wonderfully written.I am blushin beetroot 😳 😳 😳 just loved it.I will eagerly waitin for the next part. 😊


preet 😳

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