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Posted: 18 years ago
hi
awesome part 👏
guess JB ve a long nite til da party finishes lol!!!! 😆
cont. sooon
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Posted: 18 years ago
👏 👏 👏 They've both said 'i Love you' woohoo!! thats calls for another update, 😆

Love Uncle Vishy's advice to the children...🤣 😆 😆

BTW.. we still voting? coz i say Costa Rica again! 😉 (im going to make it win) 😆

Continue soon! 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
Aww...what a sweet update, thanx shoba 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
Tanu, if u can say Costa Rica twice, I say Italy, Italy & Italy!!!!! 😆

Sheena, nice romantic update...aww...one-woman man - so sexy - no wonder Bani doesn't want to talk!!! And then he says "fallen in love with you once again, heedlessly, irrevocably, inescapably, inexorably and permanently" - arre, isse bhi AD ka rog lag gaya hai, slightly modified version though..

But J needs to remember he is a Papa now 😡 like Anu said, he needs to find a room 😆 Rohan's dialog was 🤣
Your writing has never been insipid Sheena....
👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
Sheena di 😆 😆 😆 (I am calling you di too, like every one else)

That was a very loving and beautiful part. I loved JW coming down and finally accepting his love for her.

This Rohan bhi na? Sucking faces...at 5 - this kid will go to places...
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Posted: 18 years ago
Hey Billi no. 1! 😆 Mioewww....kitna mushy mushy part likha tha 😳 😳 😳 ...do dimwits ko pyaar ka ehsaas poori tarah se hogaya 👏 👏 ...confessed their feelings for one another 😳 😳 😳

Awwwww....Jai admiting to all the mistakes he made and how he can't live without Bani. Then a tear fell from his eyes....awwww....that part was really touching. 😭

Rohan and Riya watching with their eyes wide open! 😲 Arre jab parents ko sharam nahin...kahin bhi shuru ho jaate hai... toh bacche toh besharam thode se honge! 😉 😉 😆

Lovely update it was not bad at all 👏 👏 ...i know its difficult to write these days ..even with my update...may come later today...i couldn't get my head round it...AD-DDg news has just put me off big time. 😡 😡

Anyways continue soon...another romance shomance wala part coming up i see! 😉 😳 😳

Too good my pyaari billi keep it up! 👏 👏 👏

Tazo! 🤗
Edited by Taz234 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
finally the declaration of love! when will tomorrow come???????????/ 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
di that was an awesome part!
finally he said he loved and she said she loved him
awwww both seemed to have realized their love a while ago
hehe daughter and nephew 😆 😆 😆
i know this comment is not that great but you have literally grilled, fried, broiled my bheja with your puzzle
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Posted: 18 years ago
Hey Sheena Di,


that was just mindblowing,amazing update.declaration of Love finally.it was so beautiful and touching. both of them came out with their feelings and you have penned down so wonderfully.Rohan is another Rano for sure,too cute and really funny.loved it.looking forward to the next part.cant wait. 😊


preet 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
Very very mature theme, if you are underaged, squeamish about lovemaking and have reservation of reading erotic scenes, then don't! If you do, then don't complain!!

Asked and requested by several readers! so here you go!

Part 49B

"How long do you think we have to suffer this party before we go upstairs and find our room?" Jai sounded desperate to be alone with her.

It was only 8:30pm, in Mumbai, the party was just starting. He wanted to kill some one, firstly Anu for interrupting, and then whoever it was for letting the kids loose on the unsuspecting parents.

Bani tried to adjust her veil and hide her reddened face behind it.

"Kids, let's go inside, I will give you your dinner" Bani tried to change the subject and freed herself from Jai's hold.

"Momma, we already ate, badi dadi and badi maasi fed us." Reya replied to her carelessly. She suddenly remembered her sleeping arrangements with Pia and Anu. "Momma, we are having a pajama party in Piya Maasi's room, badi dadi, badi maasi, Anu didi are all coming, are you going to come too?" she asked her innocently. "You know what?, we are all going to play games with Uncle Pushkar, Uncle Sahil, Uncle Vikrum and Uncle Vishesh. They are all sleeping over! I want to play candyland and chutes and ladder" she looked positively delighted at the prospect of playing games all night. The only problem was that she always wanted to win. She gave a fulminating look at Rohan who groaned and made faces at her.

"No!!" Jai hastened to correct her. "Your momma is busy tonight and this whole month!" Bani blushed as Anu and Rohit fidgeted with embarrassment. Bani punished him with a look that could kill. "I have plans of my own with her!" He whispered in her ear. Her stomach flipped at the sensuous way his eyes caressed her. She wrenched her gaze from him to glance at the little girl who looked like an angel sitting on the swing. For the most part she was!

Rohan launched into his own plans for the night about playing video games and cars. They listened to the kids for a little while until Bani caught her daughter was staring at Jai with fascination.

"Why are you looking at papa like that, Reya?" Bani was curious at the way Reya was looking at Jai.

"When I get married, I want to marry some one just like him!" She continued staring at him without batting her eyelids.

Jai's massive chest pumped with pride. Her next statement deflated his ego immediately.

"or may be some one like uncle Vishy…" She rested her chin in her small hands dreaming.

"We better look for some one closer to her age…that boy is bad influence, he rides motorbikes and he is a jock" Jai muttered under his breath.

Bani and Anu laughed. "Mama-ji, aap ke paas bhi ek motorbike tha, aur we think you are a regular jock too!" She received a glare from him and cowered behind Rohit laughingly.

"Let's go inside and get rid of you first! Rohit, are you sure you want to marry this girl?" Jai joked with Rohit, receiving a pout from Anu.

They went inside to see couples dancing to a fast beat. Pia and Pushkar were at the center stage, along with Tarun and Rashi who seemed to have hit it off with Tarun. Ranveer was ogling at Rano with looks that were positively blazing as she danced to the fast beat with Vikram. Vishesh and Sahil were doing some hip-hop and pulled Rohan and Reya asking them to join him on the floor. Ranveer didn't know how to do fast dances and he was burning with jealousy.

Mohan was trying to coax Roshni who looked bored with his often-tried one-liners. Jai assessed the situation carefully and bristled as he saw Bernali walking towards Roshni. She was dressed to kill in a designer sari and had a malicious look on her face. She was always jealous of what Jai made of himself.

Out of the corner of his eye he saw Aparajit eyeing Bernali as if he was in a trance. He walked with Bani non-chalantly to Aparajit and laid a hand on his shoulder.

AD came out of his reverie to look at Jai. "Wow, yeh apurv, ati sundar, adbhut apsarasa kaun hai?"

Jai looked at Nachiketh who was standing in the sideline ignoring the girls who were requesting him for a dance. Jai knew he had to address the situation with his estranged brother. Jai hailed the boy to come toward them. Nachiketh trudged and walked nervously toward his half brother. He was always in awe of his brother and he wasn't sure how his reaction would be to his presence at the Walia mansion.

Jai smiled at his brother, for the first time, he cared genuinely for the young man. Having Reya and Rohan born and brought up as illegitimate, Jai realized it was never the children's fault to come into this world in those circumstances.

"Aparajit, meet my brother Nachiketh" he put a hand on the boy's shoulder and squeezed him lightly.

"Of course, Walia! Nice meeting you Mr. Walia" Aparajit shook hands with Nachiketh, barely glancing at the boy and dismissing him almost immediately.

Nachiketh threw a grateful glance at Jai.

"The apsarasa is his mother Bernali, a successful woman in her own right. Nachiketh will be joining me in my business, as a Walia, his place is here with me, in this house." He was taking a calculated risk with Nachiketh, but his intuition told him that Nachiketh was not happy with his mother right now.

Jai touched Bani's cheek gently and asked her to make sure that her guest had everything he needed before taking Nachiketh with him to introduce to the rest of the family. Bani's eyes welled with tears; that was a cue that he trusted her implicitly. It took a lot to let her go and leave her with Aparajit.

Bani looked at his departing back with all her love shining in her smiling eyes.

"Earth back to Bani! Earth back to Bani" Aparajit said half-jokingly and half-seriously.

She looked guiltily at him. "I am sorry! Mr. Dev." Her eyes reflected the apology on her lips.

"Is he going to make you happy, Bani?" he asked with a husky tone.

She nodded, her eyelashes draping on her cheeks.

"Good, let me know if I can do something for you! I guess Aparajit is not lucky in love, this is his second strike, a third one will take him out of the game." His lips twisted semi bitterly. He always talked in third person, and it amused Bani to hear him talk that way.

"I need a favor from you, for an old friend, would you do it for me?" Bani asked in a gentle tone. Aparajit rubbed his fingers on his clean shaven upper lip framing a non-existent moustache. He nodded slowly.

"I need you to set up Bernali and Roshni chopra!" Bani was blunt.

"You have an axe to grind with Jai's choti ma and his ex-girlfriend?" Aparajit raised an eyebrow. "And you are asking me to help?"

"Yes! And Bernali is not Jai's chhoti ma, his father never married Bernali" Bani was not surprised at the man's quick assessment. He is after all a good businessman. If Aparajit was surprised at Jai's generosity in accepting Nachiketh as his brother, he did not show it.

"I would like you to get these two women to invest heavily into a venture and then you back out of it and let every other investor withdraw from it, I want them to be penniless and live like paupers" Bani crossed her arms and looked at Aparajit challengingly.

"And why would I do that? What's in it for me?" Aparajit was equally blunt.

"Mr. Dev, let me see, you are rich, you are successful, you are bored out of your mind and you like to play games" she elaborated the incident in Malaysia and how Roshni and Bernali played a dirty game to keep Jai and her apart. She crossed her fingers that Aparajit would side with her, somehow she knew that AD liked playing games, and she knew that he had a soft corner for her.
Aparajit looked at Bani and threw his head back and laughed. "You are brave, Mrs. Walia – and conniving! Like me, we would have made a great pair! If you ever lose your interest in Walia, let me know – I will fix him too, and believe me, it will give me great pleasure to do it!" He turned and sauntered toward Bernali with a faade that exuded charm.

The Bani of six years ago, was reborn, and this one knew how to handle her enemies.

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Jai announced the engagement of Anu with Rohit and asked Rohit to work in Dubai, effectively cutting off the influence of Ranvijay and Roshni from the young couple. He told Ranvijay in no uncertain terms, Rashi was not going to be a bride for either Ranveer and Sahil and he wished that she would find a good suitor, deliberately looking at a smiling and pleased Tarun.

Jai spoke about Ranveer and Rano's wedding and wished them good luck.

He made Bani remain by his side throughout the night, not letting her go even for a single moment. She felt giddy with pleasure, her every nerve tingling as he paused to look at her, to smile at her with his crinkled eyes and sensuously curved lips.

He danced with her, pulling her so close to him, so that there was not even an inch between them. She felt every sinew and every muscle in his body, and by the time each dance finished, she thought she would faint with the sheer desire he evoked in her.

Jai in turn, knew that he was acting like a teenager around her, but he didn't care, he fed her morsels of food from his plate, he kept touching her with some excuse or the other. Twice he pulled her into the darkened corridor behind the Roman columns on the marble floor and kissed her senseless. By the time, the last guest bid goodbye, they were both in flames, relentless, fiery and raging.

She was a quivering mass of nerves and he was heady with a gnawing desire that ate at his gut.

He urged her to go to bed and that he would come in a few minutes. As she reluctantly let him go to the bar, he watched her go upstairs, each foot weighing heavily. He helped himself a stiff drink to calm his nerves and practiced breathing evenly, taking huge gulps of air in to his constricted lungs. He swayed slightly as he got up from the barstool eventually and walked to where his Stradivari model violin lay. He picked the case and walked upstairs, unknowingly walking the same way as Bani did, slowly and scared.

He paused before turning the knob and entering his bedroom, their bedroom. The smell of the flowers hailed his senses druggingly and he was dazzled to see the numerous candles lit up in the room. The incandescent glow from the candles threw the room into long shadows as the light danced in between them. The bed was decorated with flowers, lilies, jasmines from the canopy and pale pink and red rose petals on the Egyptian white cotton sheets.

Amongst the sheets, sat his bride, the veil hiding her face partially, he could see her teeth worrying her luscious bottom lip. It was all he could do to stop himself from rushing to her side. Control was something he was trying to attain but was having a hard time.

As she heard the door click, she wanted to look up at him, but her head bowed and her heavy eyelids dropped shyly. She couldn't bring herself to look at him. She wondered if he could see the palpitations on her pulse points and hear her racing heartbeats. When she heard the absolute silence, she looked up at his tall frame standing at the foot of the bed. He looked slightly incongruous, his legs slightly apart, a violin in his hand. He let go of the case on the footchest, and took a step toward her.

It seemed like eons before he came and sat next to her.

He lifted her veil and unpinned it with a shaking hand. Unknowingly a Ghalib's couplet popped into his head.

"Jab woh jamaal-e-dil firoz,
surat-e-meher-e-neem roz,
kya aap hi ho nazaaraaye soz,
toh parde mein moh chupaye kyun"

His baritone voice translated the words into English,

"when you are a sweet heart,
your face is beautiful like a half visible moon,
you are the most delighting scenery,
why do you hide your face in veil?"

She blushed as he caressed her cheek with the back of his hand. She looked ethereal in her beauty; her long curling lashes spread shadows on her transculent skin. He bent to kiss her eyelids one at a time, shutting them and drawing an uncontrollable shiver from her body.

"You are so bewitching, and your lack of awareness in your own se*uality makes it all the more alluring to me" he divested her of the maang tikka and the other ornaments, one at a time. He kissed her forehead and whispered,

"Sadgi o purkari bekhudi o hushyari
Husn ko taghaful men jurrat azma paya" repeating in English as his lips traveled to her temple and then her cheekbones.

"Deceptingly innocent, alert in rapture
I found the beauty daring me in her unmindfulness"

His fingers pried open her lips that were quivering like soft rose petals in a light breeze.

"Hale dil nahin malum, lekin is qadar yani ham ne barha dhunda, tum ne barha paya"

"Surely, the whereabouts of my heart are not known, but even, as I searched for it over and over, you found it, again and again."

He found her lips again and again, soft and tenderly at first, and with increasing urgency as he tasted the honeyed sweetness inside and couldn't get enough.


She looked at him with all the passion and love, her clear eyes locking with his and matching his ardor.

"Bani, don't look at me like that!" He whispered softly. "I feel like I am drowning in a tormented ocean!"

"TU MUJHEY ITNEY PYAR SE MAT DEKH (Ali Sardar Jafri)
TERI PALKOn KE NARM SAAYE MEIn
DOBTI CHAAnDINI SI LAGTI HAI
AUR MUJHEY ITNI DOOR JAANAA HAI"

"Don't look at me so lovingly.
In the soft shadow of your eyelashes
Moonlight looks like drowning
And I've to go a long way"

He opened the dories of her choli, his fingers slipping inside and kneading the flesh that he uncovered. She arched her back in mute response to his touch.

"The cool cotton sheets are burning, the desires of my heart
Flare up like cinders
I want this look of love to last and never to vanish
Don't look at me so lovingly,
For I am your slave and the bewitched"

The choli was divested ever so slowly, sliding and slipping over her shoulders, scraping her oversensitive skin. She shivered again as the cold air touched her sensitized br**sts.

She stared at him though eyes that were hidden behind half closed eyelids. He traced a finger on the curve of her small br**st, and under. He groaned sharply as she bit her lip and pulled back slightly.

"Don't, I need to see you, touch you, feel you! You look so beautiful, even more so than you were six years ago" he bent his head to kiss the underside of her br**st and grazed his teeth on the curve until he finally reached the light pink aureole of her n***le, slowly taking it into his mouth and rolling it with his tongue, savoring it. Her br***sts were fuller than before, probably because of the motherhood. When she arched her back and pulled his head closer, he willingly let her do it, obliging her by suckling on it sharply. Her senses clamored with a need that spiraled out of control.

She dragged his mouth up to passionately kiss him, her palms cradling his face. She wanted to feel his body warm and responsive to her every touch, and right now he was wearing too many clothes. Her hands assumed a free will of their own and without the accord of her fogged up brain, she begged him to take off his clothes, whimpering that she needed to feel his body next to hers without the layers of his clothes. He let her go to get up and take his clothes off in a rush and dropped them carelessly on the ground and pulled her to remove her skirt, as it slid to the bottom, he picked her from the ground to place her in front of him.

They stared at each other for interminable moments and moved into each other's arms without a thought. He kissed her everywhere, starting with her ankles, traversing to her calves, thighs, the curve of hip and waist and then he laid her gently on the bed and came down next to her.

He let her fingers trace the hairline that started at his chest and move down to his stomach. The crispness of his body hair sensitized the nerve ending of her finger pads. She bent her head slowly to kiss his steely abdomen lingeringly and moved up to his broad chest. She ignored the increased palpitations of his heart as her curiosity to explore the feel and strength of his muscles took over. His body tightened as if he was made from iron and steel.

She leaned forward to place a feather like kiss on his lips. Jai pushed his fingers into her long, silky hair and held her face and took the control of the kiss. His hands ensnared her and she felt her head resting on the pillow as he reversed their positions. Her eyes opened hazily, as his hard lips captured hers in a devastating kiss. She returned his kisses with a single minded determination, giving and taking, oblivious to anything around them.

His eyes darkened with a passion that scared him as much as her. He never felt so out of control than today.

He suckled on her b****s reverently, his grazing teeth and marauding tongue tormenting her as he took his time to caress each. Her back arched involuntarily, every muscle in her slight body craving for his attention. A delicious sigh escaped her as he covered her body with his.

The heavy body lying on her was warm, hard, and slick with sweat. Her hands felt the smooth skin on his back and she reveled in the broadness of his shoulder blades.

He pulled his head back slightly to look at her eyes that were closed halfway. His own were dilated and brimming with a passion that spiraled out of control. The perspiration that dripped from his forehead and upper lip mingled with her own, his breathing constricted as she gave in to the pleasure of digging her nails in his back.He rewarded her by kissing her on her concave stomach and nipping her on the curve of waist.

"I love you Bani, with all my heart!" He murmured as he came back against her lips.

She answered him by pulling his head up and kissing him deeply and repeating his declaration. When she reached out to touch him, he pushed her away with a gasp.

"Bani, it's been too long, and I need you so much! I feel like I am going to erupt any second" As he closed his eyes, tortured, the sweet agony ripping his self control to shreds, she kissed his vulnerable mouth.

"Then, I want you to loose control!" she beckoned, her body arching like a siren.

He didn't need a second invitation, their bodies meshed urgently. For the first time, Jai Walia was no longer in control of his emotions, his body or his heart. Their ardor took them higher and higher until they reached the crescendo and fell over gently from the great heights. She kissed the corner of his mouth as he took a deep breath to get back some semblance of control.

They cradled each other in their arms and slept, sated for the time being.

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Please do write the comments...would love to read them. For staying awake till 5:00 am to do this update, OK? I will probably hear about my lack of sleep from hubby and mom for the next two days...
Edited by Sheena_Row - 18 years ago

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