Candle In The Wind © (3)-End-Pg85-9/5 - Page 53

Sheena...it was fantabulous update yaar Dil khush ho gaya 😃 Reya is such a cutie pie....innocently asking her Mommy to join them for a slumber party, little realizing that Daddy dearest has big plans lined up for her Mommy 😉 😳 And then Jai blurting out that "your mother is busy tonight and for the rest of the month" made me laugh so much. Little did Jai realize that his desperation for having Bani simply came out of his mouth in this sentence and was not lost on all adults present. 😆😆😉

As for Bani, joining forces with ADBHOOT to bring down the two bitches Roshini and Bernali, I would simply like to appluad this stance 👏 Bani should have dones something about these two hags earlier but still its better late then never.

The union of Jai and Bani was simply mind-blowing. Aestheically penned and each and every moment described beautifully.😳😳😳 Jai's control was bound to snap cause he's been without Bani for 6 years. Their union brought two hearts back together and their declaration of love again and again signified that now no one can separate them again.

Just a request Sheena. Can we have the milan of RanRan as well in the next installment.

Sheena,

First all, a big applaud for putting your wonderful effort into CITW. 👏

Now I finally read the last part today. 😃

I found it very fascinating at the beginning, the middle was delightful and more trickery the last two part I should say. Moreover, temperate lovers, is all I can say, both the main characters.

It was truly a treat to read, all the way from first part to the last one. 😳

People have individually their own view... so what only matters is that, your own view of right or wrong.

Keep writing and entertaining all of us, this is a master piece work. I plan to read regularly as you update and comment soon after.

God bless,

Jojo

Awesome... 👏 Reya was so cute...She wants to marry someone like her Papa... 😳 Awww...She is so sweet... 😃 AD is such a weirdo here...😕 (Just like in KS... 😉 😆) Nice character though... 😃 Wow...Bani seems to have planned up this Roshni-Bernali thing very well... 😆 So she is not the Bani she was 6 years ago...Hmmm...Another Durga-ish...? 😉 😆
Well done Di... 😃 I got to call you that... 😉 You said your 'HUBBY' and Mom will get mad... 😲 Uh-oh... 😕 Didn't know you were SO much older than me... 😳
The last-ish part was all...I don't know... 😳

Once again, an excellent piece of work... 😛
Well done... 😛

Dear Shobha, Have been trying to pm you but they've been bouncing back. I had'nt commented on the last few parts, partly coz of lack of time and partly coz I was upset with the news of the impending AD/DDG marriage. Just wanted to tell you that you write so well, the jealousy, the angst, the impatience, the passion, every nuance of your JB relationship is well explored. And I love the know it all brats, 'sucking face' indeed. Great work.
Somali

Wohoo, I'm very happy that I decided to attend my friend's wedding otherwise I had missed JB's suhaag raat 😳 😳 wow I'm a tamatar at the moment ☺️☺️☺️ it was perfect (the way you have written, LOL)
How can I disagree with Reya?!! Every girl would want a hubby like Jai 😳
What have you done with BD?! (I love the story at the moment but I miss those days, the racings, etc... ) This girl is getting smarter (she is learning from her hubby 😳 ) wants to fix someone with Barnali and Roshni 👏
Good that AD realises that Bani is only meant for Jai 😉
Blushing and great part 😆

Originally posted by: Sheena_Row

LOL, Dallas!!

My sentiments exactly, I too hate cooking, if someone else cooks, eating is no problem....but yeah, sometimes I wonder why my family is always so hungry too!!

My sentiments too ... why do we really have to cook so much? And why is junk food so harmful for health?

And yes, why is everyone so hungry when you have cooked almost nothing? Any answers.

Originally posted by: sangitadas

My sentiments too ... why do we really have to cook so much? And why is junk food so harmful for health?

And yes, why is everyone so hungry when you have cooked almost nothing? Any answers.

I have the same questions. I would like to know the answers too. Why Why. I wish we don't feel hungry at all then we don't need to cook

Hi Sheena,

Great update 😳.

I'm so glad that Jai and Bani have finally admitted there feelings to one another....what a way to come together.

Please update soon.

Nikita

Dear Readers, thank you once again....so many wonderful comments, I am glad you liked the update.

Bugs (Tanu) - Thanks so much, glad you liked this part...
bina (btkr) - LOL, I didn't tell them that I stayed up till 5:00, what they don't know will not hurt them!! 😆 😆 😆
scifichick - Thanks sweety, yep, he was totally out of control, their passion stems from their love for each other.
Fruit Cobbler - Yes, dear! I know stayed up till 5:00am, sorry baba!!
ShiyaNasreen - Shiya, thank you for your lovely comments
Divan - Glad you like Ghalib's verses and Bani's revenge is going to be sweet, she is hurting them where it matters (to them!)
JohnAngad - Thanks, it is truly going to be hard for her to find some one like her papa.
Janu_2006 - Thanks
Jigna_07 - Janu, I know that you are busy with MOTW, I will forgive you!
Tazoooo - LOL, it's just like little girls to worship their fathers...glad you liked Reya's comment and AD's A words... 😆
Ridhijai - Thanks Ridhi, Yes, those two needed it very much!
Sangita - Thanks Sangita, loved the song and your comments too - it's sort of a subdued reunion...or is it?
Nina (Shahni4) - Thanks Nina, I am glad you enjoyed this part
Sammy - I will wait for your comments honey...
HKaur22 - Harvs, I loved my emoticons, thanks buddy
Stonex - You are welcome!
Preet (Coolgurl2005) - thank you preet, yes, you are right, it's more than a union of bodies, it's the union of their souls and hearts.

More thanks later....I have to go!

hello akka!! so sorry for nt comments for last 4 to 5 part was bit busy with my office work.. just nw fine reading all the part wht say akka they where all mindblowing!! love the way jai was ready to flight to AD and their confession to each other and rohan & reya was sooooooo cute there....n the last part was 😳

lovely update akka!! had a gr8 time reading time. take care and update again soon

love u