Candle In The Wind © (3)-End-Pg85-9/5 - Page 10

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hi Shoba! 😊

As usual great part 👏 👏 .....loved to see all the truth is out in the open......so it's a " Bali-Walia's Truth Day"....what a celebration 😉 ....good to see how Pia gave it to Jai.....but it doesn't mean I would change my verdict .....loved father-daughter interaction...haila! Reya gave Jai a candy woh bhi Rohan found it....good good....you deserved it Jai Walia the duffer....it's very hard for Jai to control his passion when Bani is around....wondering how long he could resist....waiting very impatiently to witness Jig's punishment 😃 .....please continue soon😆
Edited by khushboo2006 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#92

Hey Sheena,how are you? 🤗
I know I'm commenting on your brilliant ff after a longgg time but I just didn't have enough time to dedicate to reading as I would've liked ...until now. And I didn't think it was fair to just rush through it after all the hard work you put in writing it! So I spent all week catching up from pts 30A- 41. They were FaNtAsTiC pts dear...thoroughly enjoyed reading them!
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Where did you learn to write like that? I hope you won't mind sharing some of your knowledge with us? 😛
The father daughter bonding was cute! 😉
Looking fwd to Jiggy Poo's punishment!! 😈 😈

V.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#93
Sheena, u updated again!!!! Abhi pehle waale ke comments bhi dene hai... Will be back!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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keep it going finaly everything going okay cant wait for jigs punishment and lets see what rano and ranveer have to say to one another 👏
Edited by perveen - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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that was an awesome update!! me favourite line had to be : "Just use protection! We don't want any little Shuklas running around without you getting married first!"
that was so funny! i burst out laughing in the middle! 😆 😆
and when reya told jai that aboutt he candy!! 😆 😆 i can soo imagine the look on his face! 😆 😆

So im guessing pia and pushkar are going to get closer!

and i love pia's frankness with both Ranveer and Jai! 😊
can't wait for jig's punishment! and thanks for the dedication! 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#96
Hey Sheena 😃 ....u captured the intense attraction between JB reallyyyy beautifully !! 😛..hehe..Baniz jealous of Reya!! 😳 😉
What more can I say than I want more 😉 I am truly out of words... 😳 ...jaldi update karde pleeeeez 😃 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wah wah sheenu...dusri update...woh bhi itni jaldi jaldi...wah wah...let me do my happy dance... feel free to join in any time...😉...lol...

omg...what r u saying...filler...totally loved the update...ranveer and rohan...awww....they are so cute 😃...rohan yelling at 'tikka man' and totally calling in on his joke...lol...i was all 😆...that boy is a heart melter...just like papa 😳...

ok i get why ranveer is pissed at rano...he thinks she didnt tell him and didnt want him to know...stupid jigs 😡...but why is jai sitll stuck on it...didnt bani already explain what happned...i thought jai understood that...but maybe i missed something......those tests really had me for a while...😛😛😛...

omg...i was all 🤣 when reya gave jai the playground candy bar...🤣...but jai kitna aacha papa hai...aww...to cute...😳...and reya...all prim...so funny...kya style hai...speaking of style...pushy...wah wah...kya baath hai...pia ko dekh kar...dil mein kuch kuch hota hai kya...😉...lol...

cant wait for next update...im so so so excited...RanRan talk adn jiggy-poo gets what she deserves....cant wait to see what you have planned for KS's resident evil witch...😡...
JAZ
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hi sheena…my pyaaaaaaaariiiiiii…Billiiiiiiiiii 🤗
My!my!! what a part that was… fun or what? Really enjoyed that 😃 😃 😃 everyone and everybody was in that.
RanRan confrontation….Ranveer was mad…very mad a rano dear for hiding her pregnancy…and he had a right too…he would have supported her.

Rohan asking Pia if Tikka man was his dad….awwww…cho chweet!! He is such a darling!! 🤗 Ranveer just had to introduce himself varna that Tikka Man would have stayed for good! 😆 Nice of Ranveer to ask if he could go to his school... Rohan seemed happy..as long no kissy wissy and hugs! 😆

Jai seemed highly upset with how everything was unfolding… but when Bani entered…JDD JDD JDD 😳 That infamous eye lock we all love!!! 😉 😉 😆 Wish we see some scenes like that again…minus the daari Jai sporting 😕 …that really needs to go before JB unite in KS. Hey that just got me thinking I wonder if Rams daughter Sia has an issue with that daari…🤔 apna papa ko samjhao baby!!! 😆

And Pushy has arrived..i was wondering where he got to, I thought he was supposed to go along with Ranveer…but it seems he found someone to hit on. 😉 Though once he saw Pia he went all gaga!!! 😆

Oh God that Car scene was hilarious and sweet at the same time. Jai making conversation with his daughter about what awards she has etc…and when she offered his candy…🤣 bechara Jai didn't know that candy was picked by Rohan on the playground. 🤢 🤣 🤣Bani just wanted to laugh her guts out at that…but then seeing the candy on his lips…kuch aur hi dimaag mein chal raha tha!! 😳

My god can't wait for next part now…RanRan convo and Jigyasa's punishment Yahaoooooooo!!! I know its gonna be good!!!! I'm too excited! Bani and the rest will be living in the outhouse right…I guess Jai ought to move in there too…I somehow think he will to be close to his daughter and wife! 😉

Bahut zordaar update tha 👏 👏 👏…even though u say it was a filler...mera pait bhar gaya!!! 😆

Fab!! 👍🏼
Tazo Billi!!!! 🤗

btw way Sheena aren't we two lucky billis to cuddle up with Thakraal!! 😳 Mioewwww….swati sure thinks we're lucky. 🤣 🤣
Edited by Taz234 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#99
Shabaash Sheena Di 😆 another update this week, would have been better if we had another update tomorrow 😉 😆

LOL Rano's dialogue in the beginning, "Yes, I did" sounded so funny 😆... Poor Ranveer, I think he is still shocked with the latest news.
Oh and once again they couldn't have a convo about why Rano did like that. Obviously Pia ko beeche mein bolna tha 😕 along with Jiggy you could do a special treat for her 😛
Awww what a sight Jai in black and his girls in pink 😳 😳 shoo sweet of him he ate that candy even knowing she found it on the playground 😆
Pushy should check his eyes. He liked Pia 🤢
Great part 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
Hey Sheena. 😛 😛 ..another update... ohooooo..thanks dear..
OMG, Rano is not even able to look into his eyes..Ranveer is seething with anger..Thank god, Jai was there in the room to control him incase things got out of control..
I so definitely support Ranveer here..Poor guy had full rights to know that she was preggy..He would have definitely helped her through out the process...But Rano chose the other way so that he accomplishes his dreams.. 😕 😕

Rohan is a cute kiddo..he is so happy to know that Ranveer wants to come to his school n he is so very proud of himself n his various awards..Oh my darling sweeto.. 🤗 🤗 🤗..
Liked the way he asked Ranveer "Who is Rohan Kanhai? My name is Rohan Bali" he put his hands on his waist and looked at Ranveer belligerently. "If you are my dad, how come you don't know my name?"
He is full of life n is very happy that the "Tikka Man" is his dad.

As I had already mentioned earlier, Pia is one who knows how to tackle the situations..Not very emotional n very strong enuf to give back JW n Ranveer. Liked the way she puts them on spot. She is going to give a hell of mind to these 2 guys so that her sisters dont fall into the trap again. Well done Pia 👏 👏 👏

Aagaya, hamara Pushy..He is the same nautanki wala..As soon as he saw Pia, saari hawa khul gayi 😆 😆 😆 Trying to charm her now. Their chemistry is great.

The car scene was lovely. The interaction between the father n daughter is beautifully written. The emotions Jai is experiencing while talking to Reya is very well penned.
Similarly the emotions which both Bani n Jai went through in the hotel room before leaving to the school was also mind blowing 👍🏼 👍🏼
Awaiting the next aprt dear..Would love to see how Ranveer n Rano react now..Its going to be so very uncomfortable for Ranveer now, that he knows that he also has a full fledged family now.
JIGYASA 😡 😡 😡 pack ur bags now..Run away before ur beloved son does something horrid..

Ok buddy, now I will go n stuff something..need some energy u know.. after such a loooooooong comment😉😉

Rama
Edited by ofcourse - 18 years ago

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