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Posted: 18 years ago
#71
Sheena, that was a wonderful update. It made my day....Thanks


-Rimpy
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Posted: 18 years ago
#72
hello shobakka h was ur vacation hope u enjoyed it!! and thks so so much for dedicating this part to me 🤗
can't let u h happy i am today u really made my day akka!!

ok nw for the ff!! wht a update as usually mindblowing love the way bani make thing clear to jai hat off u bani dear here!!! 👏. As for ranveer wht welcome did u get man one from his rohan and jai tooooooooo good
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Posted: 18 years ago
#73
SwatiNarang:

Hi Sherni, I knew that you would like this independent Bani ! Poor Ranveer, he is getting it from everyone even though it wasn't entirely his fault. Rohan is indeed a very cute little man.

Stonex: Thank you very much for breaking the silence and commenting, really appreciate it! I am glad you are liking the FF.

Ammu: Hey Ammu, hope your vacation is going well. yeah, lot of things happening all at once. Hope it meets all your expectations.

Jigna_07: Sush di says thanks, my dear Jiggles (People must be wondering we are crazy, with all the nicknames we are coming up for each other, LOL) - Bani has become very independent and Ranveer is getting the brunt of it from everyone around.

Divan: Hey Divan, I love Maya Angelou's poems too! RanRan need to sort out the details. Jai needs wield a lot of power to get Bani, let's see if his wooing will work.

Soodr: Ria, thanks for breaking the silence, that must be a lot of reading, all at once - over 300 pages! Hope I didn't bore you too much! Thanks for liking it.

Khushboo2006: Bani is liking this bossing around bit, let's see if JW is going to let her have full control for too long. Ran is in big trouble. Jigs is in deep doo doo.

Bugs_Bunny: Tanu, thanks - Jigs is a witch and played with every one's emotions and lives. Rohan is a cutie, I think Bani is going to let Jai know she is not a weakling anymore.

Nancy_89: You are welcome, chutki (in Tazo's words) - LOL, you guys have good books in portugal, M.A is one of favorite poets...JW is a bad boy, but don't worry Bani dear is just the person who is going to bring him to his knees, of will she? Jiggy is gaining a lot of enemies. Rohan is the man in Rano's life.

Thanks about the third thread, I don't know whether it's an accomplishment though...

Pooja_1_76: Hey Pooja, thanks for your comments. Ranveer will be devastated to hear that he missed out his son's life because of his mother. Jigs bhi na? JW needs to slow down a bit.

Shahni4: Hey Nina, Poor JW, it's 6 years of torture and here she is at arm's length and does not want him to be anywhere near her. It will be fun to see what he will be up to. Rohan is a cutie and he will win hearts very easily. Now Rano on the other hand will have a hard time explaining to Ranveer about Rohan. Nina, I am going to take the FF towards it's natural end, but it has to come to an end someday...
😆 😆

Rivya: Rivs, you are welcome! Ranveer had it bad, so many hits from all direction, poor guy - he needs buy an armor to protect himself.

ag06: Ananya: Thanks sweety, I like a strong Bani without her being the obnoxious Durga, JW wooing Bani would be a delight to watch, I hope he does that in KS...

South_River: SR, thanks for the comments, appreciate them.

jnawaz: Jaz, thanks - can I join in the happy dance too? Ranveer on his a** is a sight to watch, poor guy...JW needs to control his temper and passion - that guy is too much! And I will send Ranveer your way for nursing...

😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
#74
Hey Sheena,
I started reading your FF recently and I have finally caught up!!!
Absolutely adore it.. Can't wait for the next part!! Aaawwww poor Ranveer though is really getting it from everyone!!! My poor darling needs some serious TLC.. If rano ain't upto it, send him to me... ;))
Plz update soon...
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Posted: 18 years ago
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How I love a battle of wits with underlying s**ual tension......6 yrs back it was R&R battling it out,now I guess JnB will be putting their most aggressive foot forward ,and with Jigs to spice up it'll sure be be one helluva ride .....really looking forward to it. Now why do I get the feeling RnR will have, well for the lack of a better word,a certain mellowness,softness in their relationship. It'll be quite interesting to read how Rohan and Ranveer bond and how Jigs reacts to an unexpected grandchild.

Splendid progression of story. Thanks for the read.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey...how was your trip??? even i was holidaying in Canada so didn't get to read the updates...i surely missed out on many things...the updates are great as usual loved the way Jai punched ranveer (the tikka man) hmm wat else the say...yeah the way u portrayed the chemistry between jai and bani is awesome...loved it...for you 👏
continue soon
take care and enjoy
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Posted: 18 years ago
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cn i read the nxt part soon????? 😃
i cnt close down this page today cos its very interesting to read it over n over again.. i love the part where ranveer enter the story
now he is going to go mad 😆
i cnt wait to read the nxt part... 😆
im still thinking...wht will happen to jigs??????
sry for the late reply
these days i had to stop reading lot of FFs cos of my holidays n this 1 of the few FFs tht i can nt stop reading....😳 s
keep up the good wrk..... 😕 i think i say this all the time 😆 😆 😆 😆
continue sooooooooooooooooooooooooooon 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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That was an excellent part Sheena 👏 👏 👏

JB scene was really well written. Though it started to become HOT n STEAMY, but the way it lead to their conversation was neatly penned. Bani's desire, love, passion, anger, frustration..all emotions was beautifully penned. Jai's reaction was worth it. 👍🏼 👍🏼

Loved the whole convo between Ranveer n Rohan. The "Tikka man" is really cute. Rohan is really enthu in meeting Ranveer n knowing that his Jai uncle is the "Tikka Man's" mamaji. Loved the little kiddo..

Ranveer is really in for the biggest shock of his life. Jai couldnt help himself punching the day lights of Ranveer.

Pls continue ASAP as want to see Ranveers' reaction. Rohan is going to be one jolly kiddo after knowing that his "Tikka Man" is his dad..I really felt bad when he told Ranveer that Reya has a father, but I don't. 😭 😭 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Taz234:

Tazo jaan, Yaar, you like the ahem parts - yes, many more coming soon, but slow...not as steamy as KDKP, this is a slow boiler!😆😆😆I thought I would use that football just like your story....Jai needs to seriously control his temper and Rano is in big trouble with Ranveer - Thanks darling for the lambi comments....

Big Fan:
Dishita, thanks hun!!

Miss_Diey:
Hey Diey (That rhymed!!) Glad you approve of Bani, she doesn't want to make it easy for Jai. Ranveer has his mama-ji's temper. ANd Jai will be Jealous, trust me!

Sanam84:
Hum Dil De Chuke Sanam...I am wondering why I was thinking of that song today, I remembered, I know this ladki with the name of Sanam...who gets angry when I call her Sanam...so OK baba! I started calling her Sammy whammy....Yeh cough cough kya kar rahi ho? Attak gayi kya?? Yep, udhar tum Tarun ko pitwaya, aur mein idhar Ranveer ko pitwaya!! We are even. Boom Boom, I think Jigs is going to fly off on a broom...that's what!!

RidhiJai:

Hey Ridhi, Howdy? Bani has grown into a different woman altogether and she is going to give Jai run for his money. Jigs will defo get a big Jhatka!! Rano is in big doo doo!

JohnAngad:
Hey J.A. Thanks for liking this Bani. Ranveer is going to be livid with Rano.

Hkaurk22:

Harvs, you are welcome sweety! Bani is going to melt Jai into hot chocolate...mmmm~~Ran is getting abused by everyone, poor chap~ pity him. Thanks for the comments!

Nikita28:
Nikita, thanks sweety, hey what happened to your FF? U stopped? The lamb has become a little tigress....and Jai loves Rano like a little sister! He is defo going to take care of her. Reya and Rohan are two cuties...

MB101:
Maro, Thanks - Vacation was great! Bani is growing wise, Rano did play unfairly with Ranveer, so he is going to be mad with her for some time to come. It's shock for Ranveer.

Rooj-i:
Rooj-i darling, how are you? The endurance game is going to be tough for both of them, I think both will be losers in the end if they pursue retribution. RanRohan are so cute together. The punch was unfair to the poor guy....

pkbains:
Pushpinder, hello!! Thanks dear, I hope Bani and Jai both ease up a little, they are both duffers of the royal kind. Oh Yes, Jai is not going to sit around waiting Bani to take the blame for being pregnant...he will make sure he gets respect for her from everyone. Patakas are going to go off, Jigs , I am waiting for the right time...it will come definitely.


Edited by Sheena_Row - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Pooks:

Pooks, You are welcome about the dedication and I am glad you enjoyed the fireworks. LOL, I like the same line you liked. JW better get used to being treated like an ordinary mortal, varna he will be in big trouble with Bani dearest. Poor Ranveer, he had no idea why he was punched for asking Rano out for dinner. Thanks for liking the ending too!!

Coolgurl_2005: Hey Preet, thanks sweety! I liked all the cool adjectives~ Bani is a formidable foe, poor JW - he is going to be in big trouble with her~and Ranveer - I pity the poor man, actually both of them, the dixit sisters are going to be big trouble.

Punjabi#1: Rimpy, thanks yaar, good to see you on the forum after so many days!

J&B84: Hima, the vacation was wonderful. You are welcome about the dedication and your comments.

ships_2006: Ship, thanks for coming on board - OK, no pun intended (Ships, on board...😉) thanks for your comments. Ranveer needs TLC! I heard 2 more volunteers raising their hands to help him out, Jaz and Sheen...LOL - join the club!

India06: India, sorry for not replying to your comment couple of chapters back, yes the dedication was for you! I want some interesting stuff happening between JB, like the beginning of KS, R and R will have to fend their way through the mess they made of their lives, and with Jigs in the picture, it will be interesting.

Menal: Hey Menal: Thanks sweety, the vacation was great!~ You were in Canada, where abouts? I loved Victoria and Vancouver! Beautiful gardens. I am happy that you like the JANI moments....

ash9: Ash, yes! You may read the latest update today! Thanks for re-reading it!! Makes me feel special!! 😳😳 Ranveer is a bechaara, he needs to figure out fast what he is going to do! Lots of things will happen to Jigs, just wait and see!

Ofcourse: Hey Rama: Thanks sweety, JANI are what makes all our FFs a pleasure to read. They both have such strong and likeable characters, well at least they used to!😕 Glad you like RanRohan's interactions. Ranveer is definitely in shock and doesn't yet know how to deal with things. Yep, it was sad when Rohan says he doesn't have a dad! But guess what, Rohan - your daddy is here!!




Edited by Sheena_Row - 18 years ago

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