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Posted: 18 years ago



Kh


At last you made the first position...๐Ÿ˜†..told you Ei din din na aro din achhe...๐Ÿ˜ƒ


Keep wondering....I won't tell you now...๐Ÿ˜›


About A dictionary, I'm doing it for Dammy...๐Ÿ˜‰


Ash



I've seen the comments before, but when I came to reply, I was like who's *mad*...๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•...then I realized that you changed your ID..๐Ÿ˜†



Puskar is there waiting to strike...๐Ÿ˜‰




Swati


Thanks Di...๐Ÿ˜Š



Sadaf


Pooksie, it was my try to show that Pri will not allow her love coming between her friendship....as for Rano & Sarika..they're just confused and don't know what to do......they've not got the chance to think, have they?




Twikie



I stopped here, cause I felt that a cliffy will be great place to end....(ok, don't kill me...๐Ÿ˜† )....will try to continue soon



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Posted: 18 years ago


Beena


Thank you dear, I also think that it was something else...would have loved to add a full A sentence, but I'm not Adbhoot you know...๐Ÿ˜†....



Janu



Thank you yaar, will try to continue soon....



Tanu



Yeah, our Dammy hai hi kuch aisa...๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ


actually Pia lacks brain cells, that's what I think...๐Ÿ˜›



Off course he recognised her, one doesn't forget someone whom he knows since 14...



Yeppie, AD and Dammy forever....๐Ÿ˜‰



Dammy



Thank you yaar, yes brought her back to cause troubles...


Keep wondering .....


AD is here..๐Ÿ˜ƒ..this time only for you...๐Ÿ˜‰


Oh, yes she is here, I mean, you are there.....๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ....they'll have many word wars...๐Ÿ˜‰


PS. the last line means, from now on, don't come to do Adbhootgiri with Dammy...๐Ÿ˜Š..hope it helps, otherwise tell me..



PPS. Yaar, I'd have finished before I introduced you...now that you're here, how can I end it....๐Ÿ˜Š




Nikita


Thank you yaar...๐Ÿ˜Š


Pia has got nothing to do.......does she?



Thanks...I was wondering if I over did that part....Ande chori...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†


Will try to continue soon enough...




Ree


You've learnt it Ree...it really makes me feel bad when someone say "-----"...๐Ÿ˜Š



Thank you that you thought it different and you've got it right, they are exceptional....


Gosh, you can explain my story better than me....I love your descriptive replies...๐Ÿ˜Š


And you are right Ree, I'll probably show Pri confessing Jai at least. Don't know how or when, but that's bound to happen.....and it's a bit obvious that this love of Pri will always keep pestering and bothering her...Ree, it's great to have someone like you to tell me where I'm actually going...๐Ÿค—


Hmm...I don't think anyone can say such a sentence, I needed whole 6 minutes to write just that one line...๐Ÿ˜†



Actually, you found it alright cause you read it as a story and very few readers read it like the way you do.....sometimes, I forget the details which you point out or fail to notice the deeper meaning of lines which you make me see....


I'll enjoy the rain and telling you the truth, I'm glad to have a reader like you...๐Ÿค—


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Posted: 18 years ago
Hi Bristy!!

Sorry sorry late comments... ๐Ÿ˜›

Awesome update, loved JB's lil moment and they were so happey n content ๐Ÿ˜Š ... Thank god that Pri came on the engagement and Pia such a disgusting person, now surely Bani will come to know about Pri's love for Jai ...

Pushkar neither was not a good help for Pri, poor her now she'll have to pretend that she's haapy, I feel for her but I'm happy that Bani is yet to now the truth. This looks lil scary to me...

continue soon Bristy ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: siumi

Hi Bristy!!

Sorry sorry late comments... ๐Ÿ˜› that doesn't matter sweetheart...๐Ÿ˜Š


Awesome update, loved JB's lil moment and they were so happey n content ๐Ÿ˜Š ... Thank god that Pri came on the engagement and Pia such a disgusting person, now surely Bani will come to know about Pri's love for Jai ... May be or may not be ๐Ÿ˜›



Pushkar neither was not a good help for Pri, poor her now she'll have to pretend that she's haapy, I feel for her but I'm happy that Bani is yet to now the truth. This looks lil scary to me... OK, I'm a bit scary....๐Ÿ˜‰...let's see what I come up with...๐Ÿ˜†


continue soon Bristy will try to update today..if I finish writing....๐Ÿ˜‰
๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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Posted: 18 years ago


Part Twelve


Thunder only happens when it's rainingโ€ฆ.

And players only love you when they're playingโ€ฆ



Pri re appeared and stopped in her tracks to see Jai. it was what she was dreading the most. Bani didn't notice that, she pulled her. "Priโ€ฆmeet my Jai. Jai, it's my best friend Priyanka."




Jai's jaws dropped, "Tum?"




Pri tried her best to look normal and shrugged. Bani looked at Jai curiously, "You know her?"




"Know her?" Jai rolled his eyes, "How can I not know her? She's a life threat to me."


Bani frowned, "what are you speaking about? Life threat? My Pri? Never!"




Jai patted her head, "You don't know her yet Bani. She almost killed me once."




Bani's eyes almost popped out, "Jai Walia! What nonsense are you talking about? My best friend doesn't roam around the city killing peopleโ€ฆโ€ฆsince when you started to make up craps?"




"I'm not making up craps Baniโ€ฆask her if you don't believe me." Said Jai arrogantly. Bani shook of his hand from the shoulder, "I don't want to ask anyone anything, I know she never tried to kill you.." she looked at Pri who was looking a bit embarrassed. Seeing Bani's questioning look, she said sheepishly, "Bani it's true. I actually "almost" killed him once."




If it was not for Jai, Bani would've fallen and made quiet a huge scene in the party. But Jai caught her. She glared at Pri. "What the hell? You tried to kill him..? Are you mental? What did you do?"


"She locked me in a small room which was supposed to be blocked with bricksโ€ฆโ€ฆshe got the idea from Mughal-E-Ajam I guessโ€ฆ." Said Jai seriously.




"It was not like that!" protested Pri at once, "I just wanted to make you suffer. I never knew they were gonna block it!"


"Yes, why not." Said Jai mockingly.




Bani looked at both of them horrified and cried, "Someone help me! The most important two persons of my life just became mental!"


โ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆ&#82 30;.



She didn't know that she can be this angry with someone. How dare he, she fumed. Her anger flared as she remembered him touching a girl's cheek. I'll teach you a lesson; a good one.




The plan was easy, he was entering the apartment in a cheery mood when he found her crying. "Hey crybaby, what's wrong." He ruffled her hair. She flinched, "Bhaia put my favourite Teddy in that room." She pointed at the small room beside the generator which was of no use.




"So? Go get it.." Jai was confused.




"I'm afraid to go thereโ€ฆ.it's so dark." She sniffled.




Jai made a face, "Why? You think there are ghosts? "




"If you are so brave, can't you get it for me?" her eyes were big and challenging.




"Ok, crybaby, wait here."




But as soon as he's entered, Pri has locked the door from outside. "Serve you right." She thought and ran. That day Pri went to meet her grandmother. When she came back 2 days later, she got the shock of her life, the generator was surrounded by new high brick walls. Oh My God! She panicked.


Her brother made it worse for her, "wonder where Jai disappeared, haven't seen him for two days."


She burst out crying and blurted out everything to Pratik. Like a wise man, Pratik said, "then he must have died."


That night Pri got a high fever, and that didn't come down for the whole week. Both her parents became worried as none of their medicines worked on her. Exactly after 7 days, Jai came to meet her. She was shocked as if she's seen a ghost. "You!"




"I heard someone is guilty for killing me." Said Jai in his usual jovial manner. To his amusement Pri punched him hard.




"Aw..you tried to kill me now you are hitting me?"


"You areโ€ฆargh! Why did you do this to me? I thought you diedโ€ฆโ€ฆ"




"I might haveโ€ฆonly if you would have bolted the door properly." Jai shrugged.




Pri threw her arms around him almost knocking him down.




"Phew! Seems like someone is eager to get me out of the world." Commented Jai as he tried to catch his breath.




"Aaaaaah!" Pri screamed, "I hate you!"


โ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆ&#82 30;โ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆ




Auditi captured Puskar, "Puskar, it's not fair. You are standing here and the party is so boring. Why aren't you making some Dhamals? After all your best friend's wedding."


"Bhabi, a man needs some inspiration to do Dhamals, I don't find anyโ€ฆ"


"Why?" Auditi giggled, "There are so many pretty girls. What much inspiration do "You" need?"


Puskar sighed and looked around only to find Pri standing with Bani and Jai. His face broke into a wicked grin, "Bhabi, don't worry. Apko dikhate hai dhamal kaise kiya jate hain."



โ€ฆ โ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆ&#82 30;.


Bani was confused to hell as she understood nothing as Jai and Pri started their old habit of fighting and bickering. Suddenly the lights went of and music started to beat in the hall. In a moment all went crazy and many of them started to dance. Puskar in the middle.


Teri Aankhein Garam Masala
Teri Baatein Garam Msaala
Roop hai tere Gaaram Masala
Uff Yeh Nakhra Garam Masala
Mere Dil Pe Dhadkano Pe
Tune Jaadu Kar Daala
Kiss Me Baby - kiss Me Baby
Hoth Tere Mai Ka Pyala
Kiss Me Baby - kiss Me Baby
Tu Hain Mera Garam Masala
Kiss Me Baby - kiss Me Baby
Hoth Tere Mai Ka Pyala
Kiss Me Baby - kiss Me Baby
Tu Hain Mera Garam Masala



To everyone's amusement, he pulled Payel and danced around her.




Mushkil Hain Kitna Mushkil Andekha Woh Kar Paana
Dekhe Jo Tujhko Dekhe Ho Jaaye Woh Deewana
Teri Rangat Garam Masala
Rang Tera Garam Masala
Teri Chahat Garam Masala
Ang Tera Garam Masala








Puska'r next target was Auditi who giglged and danced with him much to Nihan's shock.





Mere Dil Pe Dhadkano Pe
Tune Jaadu Kar Daala
Kiss Me Baby - kiss Me Baby
Hoth Tere Mai Ka Pyala
Kiss Me Baby - kiss Me Baby
Tu Hain Mera Garam Masala




Pri stepped backwards as she saw Puskar approach her. But he was fast and grabbed her to twirl her.




Ha Yeh Teri Shokh Adaye Yeh Teri Mast Jawani
Ek Din Tu Ban Jaayegi Mere Sapno Ki Raani





And then leaving her, pulled Bani to dance with him.




Ishq Tera Garam Masala
Husn Tera Garam Masala
Tera Dil Woh Garam Masala
Jism Tera Oh Yah
Mere Dil Pe Dhadkano Pe
Tune Jaadu Kar Daala
Kiss Me Baby - Kiss Me Baby
Hoth Tere Mai Ka Pyala
Kiss Me Baby - Kiss Me Baby
Tu Hain Mera Garam Masala





Watching Puskar dancing with Bani, Pri felt relieved and relaxed her guard. To her horror, before she can move, someone pulled her by her waist and she's in Puskar's arms. He made her dance with his beat.



Teri Aankhein Garam Masala
Teri Baatein Garam Msaala
Roop hain tera Garam Masala
Uff Yeh Nakhra Garam Masala
Mere Dil Pe Dhadkano Pe
Tune Jaadu Kar Daala
kiss Me Baby - kiss Me Baby
Hoth Tere Mai Ka Pyala
Kiss Me Baby - kiss Me Baby
Tu Hain Mera Garam Masala
kiss Me Baby - kiss Me Baby
Hoth Tere Mai Ka Pyala
Kiss Me Baby - kiss Me Baby
Tu Hain Mera Garam Masala





Ok everyone, I know it's super boring without anything happening, but ahemโ€ฆmy head hurtsโ€ฆ..so that's what I came up withโ€ฆ.I made it short intentionallyโ€ฆcause otherwise I'd have added some more boring linesโ€ฆโ€ฆplease bear with meโ€ฆ..and please no belansโ€ฆ.me is not doing wellโ€ฆ.๐Ÿ˜›โ€ฆ.

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Posted: 18 years ago
Hi Bristy!!!!

Pri almost killed Jai๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ 2 days in that room, was that gal out her mind or what, idiot๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก

Pushkar is back to woo Pri๐Ÿ˜ƒ(thank god) hey songs were rocking
โญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธ

Will Pia be there in the engagement party??

continue soon๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ



Edited by siumi - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

Awww.. hope u feel better soon!

You've been in the heat too much .. getting my mithai!! ๐Ÿ˜†

Great part.. not at all boring!

Poor Bani.. in the company of two phycos! ๐Ÿ˜† Jai surely freaked her out.. she though he was dead!๐Ÿ˜† awww...

And Pushkar and Pri dancing?๐Ÿ˜‰ soo schweet!

Continue soon!

Edited by bugs_bunny - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

saving , sorry i'm late will read the 2 last parts then comment ๐Ÿ˜‰

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Me is back janu ๐Ÿ˜Š

Just caught with part 11 and 12, and i loved them ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Part 11 : Loved the JB cute scenes ๐Ÿ˜ณ , So Pri finally came to her best freind's engagement ๐Ÿ‘, she's a very good freind i had to say, and answered back to Pia really well ๐Ÿ‘, Whta did she do to jai ? ๐Ÿ˜• Dammy and AD ๐Ÿคฃ too good, Dammy serves him right , dont talk with this adhbhoot manner with Dammy ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜†

Part 12 : Man this Pri cracks me up, she almost killed him by locking him in a room ๐Ÿคฃ, poor jai ๐Ÿ˜† . I loved bani's reaction the two persons i loved the most are mental ๐Ÿคฃ, Pri and Bani are so cute, love their freindship ๐Ÿ˜ณ, Hey aya mera hero Pushkar ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ , what a song yaar Kiss me babby ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† , ab wakay mein dhamal hai iss party mein ๐Ÿ˜†

Wonderful part hun ๐Ÿ‘ love the way u wrote the flashback in ur parts ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

Please continue ASAP ๐Ÿ˜‰

Humera. ๐Ÿค—

Edited by sonu4ever - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
Hi Bristy! ๐Ÿ˜Š

Great part. Pri almost killed Jai ๐Ÿ˜ฒ . Thanks God he's saved. Loved Pushkar's dhamaal ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜† . Wish you get well soon and update sooner ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
๐Ÿ‘
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Posted: 18 years ago

ok ok...jaanti hoon...im late...lekin kya karoon...finals tha...please...maaf kore dao...๐Ÿ˜ƒ...but im here now...and im caught up...

Ch 11:
haila...jai is stealing my heart...๐Ÿ˜ณ...i mean he has most of it...might as well take the rest ๐Ÿ˜‰...lol...oh notice koreche je bani pereshan...haye...kya khayal rakta hai jai, bani ka...aye haye...pyaar ho toh aaisi...โค๏ธ...im proud of pri...she was there for her friend...good going...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ...uff...tum pia ke khano niye aashla...uff...๐Ÿ˜ก...oye metar naam shunle amar jaa rag dhore ๐Ÿ˜ก...chi...uff...mood kharap kore dila...someone smack her...and pri...bitchy is right...there is no other word...chi...๐Ÿคข...omg...i was rolling...with the AD and dammy scene...a full sentence without 'A'...๐Ÿคฃ...that ws so funny...and haila...AD se bhi bada adbhoot...omg...๐Ÿคฃ...that just made my day...๐Ÿ˜†...

Ch 12:
haila...pri and jai...omg...'life threat' ๐Ÿ˜†...haila...pri ne aaisa kya kiya...๐Ÿ˜•...omg...jai...pri...u sent jai not the stupid room..and jai...that joke on pri...๐Ÿ˜ฒ...jai khoto lokhi chilo...ki holo...๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰...lol...nad poor bani...duita toh akdom pagol...bachahi bani maje atke gelo...๐Ÿ˜†...omg...and pushy...haila...kya song hai...'garam masala'...or if u say it bangali style...'gorom moshla' ๐Ÿ˜†...oh man...nice

khub bhalo hoyeche...cant wait for next update...loved both parts...awesome...cant wait for u to update again...pls do it soon...u love me naa

JAZ

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