FF: Rain Maker (Epi & A/N - Pg 82)

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sonu4ever

@sonu4ever

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+ 2

Posted: 18 years ago

#311

Bristy meri jaan 😊
Dont be upset about that, actually i'll tell u something i was so in love with ur romantic atmosphere that i forgot Pri in it 😆
And besides i thought that it was ur twist to show us some scene where Pri came in between Jai and Bani , so if u had written that i wouldnt have mind because i know u are a truly JB fan and u'd have unite them whatever may happened 😉
As for now i 'm gald that u confirmed that she wont come in bteween JB 😃
Please continue this ff as it's a very beautiful one, the way u desribed a true love story and a beautiful freindship 👏 👏
Love ya hun 🤗
Humera. 😊

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pooks

@pooks

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Posted: 18 years ago

#312

Brishty, you better not stop writing this fan fic warna I'll run after you with my belan 😆 But jokes apart, this fan fic is beautiful, I mean one can feel those emotions by simply closing their eyes after reading a part and letting imagination take over.

I was extremely happy after the last part cause you had clearly shown that Pri valued her friendship more. Please keep on writing more parts ahead 👏

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bugs_bunny

@bugs_bunny

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Posted: 18 years ago

#313

Are you just trying to get out of writing this?? 😉 😆 Coz noope, we dont think its runied!
😃
Continue soon sweetie! 😉

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Jazmin

@jnawaz

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Posted: 18 years ago

#314

aare yaar...atho serious khano hoye gela...its cool...im happy that it was just a mess up and that pri is not coming between JB...now that the confusion is clear...its good...keep going...khobordar jodi tumi ar update naa koro...ami kintu marbo... 😉 😉 😉 ...hope u do update...we all love your ff...shobai mistake kore...beshi chinta khoro naa...
JAZ

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mad

@*mad*

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Posted: 18 years ago

#315

😆
we all get confused sometimes... dnt worry

nw where is the nxt update?? 😃

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khushboo2006

@khushboo2006

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Posted: 18 years ago

#316

Hey Bristy!!! 😊
Update soon cos we want you to keep writing RM and other ff in future as well. Don't worry at all 😃

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amisha

@amiee

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#317

hey Bristy dont worry so what if you missed one paragraph no big deal glad that pri is not pia type girl and she values friendship more than her own love and i m sure she also realizes that her love is one sided so why come in bertweeen the people who truly love each other
please dont give up on writing we love to read your ff pls cont soon..........

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Momtaj

@momtajbegum1

Voyager

Posted: 18 years ago

#318

hey
ohh thats ok its only a mistake it happens 😊 im glad that Pri ain't coming in between Jai and Bani 😉
plz dont stop writting ur ff is one of the best one out there 😃

plz update soon

Taj

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Bristy

@the_rain

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Posted: 18 years ago

#319

I can't begin to tell you how relieved I am..

It'd be hard for me if I had to stop it right here, it's really great that you considered my mistake and want to read more even then. I'm reallly grateful to all of you for supporting me.

Thank you all

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Bristy

@the_rain

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Posted: 18 years ago

#320

Part Eleven

Komlo Megheder Ojon, Bristy bole Proyojon take…..

Je Khoje Amake……

(..the clouds became weightless, Rain comes to find those
Who searches for rain….)

Jai stared intensely at her fingers as he caressed it slowly. The ring was shining, he smiled. She was leaning against a tree while he was leaning against her sideways, his head touching her one and holding her hand. They both were tired. After the exchange of rings, everyone went crazy and congratulated them.

It took hours for them to finish receiving the compliments. They only got excused when the food was served. And in the meantime, they sneaked out the party, desperate to have some time alone. Jai looked at her face and slowly kissed her left cheek. She smiled but didn't turn. Instead, she moved closer to him, now almost snuggling with him.

Gosh! She looks so beautiful.

A single hair lock fell over Bani's face. Jai tucked it in. Bani's smile grew and she swiftly came into his arms, hugging him properly.

I love you Jai. she thought.

Bani rested her head on top of his heart, hearing the heart beats. He placed his head on top of her head. The silence was so blissful that neither dared to break it. Finally, Jai spoke up, "Jaan?"

"mmm?"

Jai smiled to himself, he loved the way she said mmm or Umm or Hmm to most of his questions.

"May I ask something?"

"Okay…." Bani replied softly.

"What's bothering you?"

Bani looked up to see his face, "What can be bothering me Jai? why are you asking?"

"Something is definitely bothering you Bani..I've noticed from earlier on. You are getting unmindful every 15 minutes. What's wrong Bani, come on tell me."

Bani sighed, that's what she loved about him most. None noticed by he did that she was unmindful. She knew there's no point arguing with him, "I'm worried about my best friend."

"What about her?" asked Jai.

"She's not here." Replied Bani frustrated, "and she's not taking calls. I'm worried that something has happened to her."

Jai frowned, "is there anything I can do?"

Bani sighed again, "I think no…let's get inside. Everyone will be looking for us."

…………………….... .....

When they re-entered the party, Jai was dragged away by his friends. Bani was looking for Rano and Sarika to extract the truth from them, then she saw her. Dressed in a sleeveless white kameez and pink churidar, matching dupatta wrapped around the hands, talking with Auditi, actually giggling with Nirjon. Bani heaved a sigh of relief watching her best friend. Almost in the same time, anger flashed in her mind. She approached them.

"Bhabi, what's she doing here?" she asked angrily to Auditi.

Pri smiled guiltily at her, "Bani…sorry yaar. But I got caught up in an operation."

"Hmph…very good, but why did you bother anyways, after all, you has such a busy schedule. You've so much important things to do rather than coming to your best friend's engagement." Bani replied sarcastically.

"Bani…Sowwiiee.." Pri hugged her side-ways and made a puppy face. Bani scowled.

"You should've called once at least. I was worried to hell." Complained Bani. "Forget calling, you never received my ones."

Pri scratched her head, "I lost my cell phone Bani."

"Liar!" Bani protested at once. "It's still with you, I know it is. Let me search your purse."

Pri pretended to keep her purse away from Bani but Bani snatched it anyways and took out the cell phone and smirked, "what it is?" I know it isn't lost, you can never lie to me…" she stopped at the smug look at Pri's face.

"You are behaving like normal that means you're not angry anymore." Said Pri cheerfully, "and you are dying to laugh, aren't you? And you are taking pathetic attempt to hide your laughter."

"Bhaag!" Bani mocked at her and they burst out laughing.

Pri hugged her, "Congrats yaar! I'm so happy for you."

…………………….... ........

Pri has been sitting alone in her desk when a woman came to meet her. She wasn't expecting her. The woman, though was pretty, gave her a bitchy smile.

"Oh Doctor, can you tell me what happened to my heart? It's too happy today…I'm so worried."

"What do you want Pia?" Pri was annoyed..she's got enough for a day…now she don't need this.

Pia flicked her hair, "I heard today is Bani's engagement. And I see her best friend sulking here all alone in a dark hospital room……what else can make Pia happy than this?" she cackled her annoying laugh.

"See Pia, I don't know what happened to your heart, cause I'm not a cardiac expert. But I certainly know what happened in your head….it lacks brain cells…that's why it's so empty."

Pia's face flushed, "You think you are so smart right? Wait till I tell Bani everything…I've been waiting for this day for so long."

She gave a mean look at her and left. Pri panicked. If Bani comes to know, her life will be destroyed, Jai's life will be destroyed. I can't let this happen. I should act normal. I have to go to the party.

……………………..

"I don't want to eat." Bani shook her head.

"Bani, don't be stubborn, I know you've not eaten whole day. Just eat before I force you." warned Pri taking the spoonful of fried rice in front of Bani's mouth.

Bani opened her mouth to say something, but Pri fed her in the opportunity. Bani scowled at her.

"What did I thought when I made friends with you?" Bani complained as Pri almost forced her to eat the whole plate.

"Nothing I guess," replied Pri, "then again, you need your good for nothing friend to take care of you. I don't see any well wishers of yours asking you to eat." She added watching Rano and Sarika.

Bani was confused, "Hey what's up? Did you have fight? They are acting weird…."

"If they are weird, ask them, why me?" replied Pri a bit haughtily as she went to dispose the plate. Bani didn't get the time to think, as she felt Jai holding her shoulders, "Hey beautiful, why are you standing alone, with that worth dying cute confused look on your face."

"Jai! guess what? My best friend has at last arrived." Bani said happily to him.

"Oh…so it's your best friend that matters, not me?" Jai frowned sounding a bit jealous.

Bani pinched his cheek. "You've to bear her Mister. She's the only one whom I love more than you."

"I already hate her." Said Jai making Bani blush.

Pri re appeared and stopped in her tracks to see Jai. it was what she was dreading the most. Bani didn't notice that, she pulled her. "Pri…meet my Jai. Jai, it's my best friend Priyanka."

Jai's jaws dropped, "Tum?"

…………………........... .......

Aparajeet Deb sat there sulking. He hated night duties, right now, he hated everything. Tonight, Bani was getting engaged, he didn't even have the chance to know her and she's already….duh! Life is always very unfair with him.

He tired to calm his mind, "Andekha, Anjana, Adbhoot……" he muttered to himself. He was disturbed when he heard someone giggling.

He scowled at the girl, "Don't you have manners?"

The girl pretended to gasp, "OMG, you said a full sentence without A word. I might be really special then."

He scowled more, "What are you doing here?"

"Hey don't offend me, I'm also a flight lieutenant, I'm doing exactly what you are doing." Said the girl.

"Great," muttered AD, "I've got a flirty girl with me."

"I heard it." She snapped.

"So what? Do you think I'm afraid of you? Andekha, anjana, anokha, ajooba, ati mahan, adbhoot Aparajeet is not afraid of anyone."

"You think you are really good at this huh? Then listen, Andhera Raat me Akeli Aparajeet ko Ande chori karte waqt Admio ne pakar ke Ananad ke sath Adhi raat tak Aise pitai ki, uski Aant Aa gaya. " (In the dark night, People caught Aparjeet Alone while stealing eggs and they beat him till end with lots of fun)

AD is like 😕 , "main kya Adbhoot hu, ye to mujhse bara adbhoot nikla…" 😕

"Aha, ho gayi na chutti, Abh Ayinda Dammy ke saath Adbhoot giri mat dikhane ana." She winked at him and left.

Here you go Dammy, I promised you'll be there. 😃......all of you please let me know what do you think of this, and also let me know if I've confused you again...

Edited by the_rain - 18 years ago

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