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Posted: 18 years ago


Part Ten



Dancing in the moonlight; Singing in the rain;
Oh, it's good to be back home again





Rano looked nervously at Sarika who suddenly pretended to be very busy with some hair pins. Rano swallowed, "Umm…I don't know." she groaned inwardly. By the look Bani gave her, she realized that Bani hasn't believed it.



Rano glanced at her friend helplessly. When in the morning, Pri went to her and almost snatched the contract from her only to burn it in the kitchen fire, Rano was confused like hell. When asked Pri only replied that, "I'm preventing my best friend to end up doing something stupid." And she was gone.




Rano got suspicious and discussed with Sarika. It was a matter of time for Sarika to make Pri confess the truth. They had a huge show-down. While Sarika openly blamed Pri for coming between her best friend's love life, Rano supported Pri. In the climax of all these, Sarika ended up slapping Rano.




In the end, it was decided that Pri had better avoid the program of engagement.



Poor Bani, she didn't know that on the happiest day of her life, the four friends, whose
Friendship made others envy, split up in most unwanted and unexpected fashion.


……………………….




The day was going like hell for Pri. After the argument with her friends and the conversation with Puskar, she was feeling drained out. Puskar's view didn't help her a bit. Was he a fool? She thought. How can anyone destroy their best friend's life, for their own happiness? Work, is the only solace, she decided later and asked for some extra duty hours in the evening much to the CMO's astonishment.


As she was attending a patient with a broken rib, she found her cell phone vibrating. Bani was flashing there. She slowly dislocated the SIM card out of the place.


………………………..




Bani threw her phone in frustration and turned towards Rano and Sarika. They know, she thought, off course they know. A dread was filling her mind. Has anything happened to her?




"what do you know that I don't? what's wrong with her?" she almost growled at her friends.




Just then, there was a huge commotion downstairs which saved both Rano and Sarika.




"Perhaps, your Jai has arrived, we're going to check."




And they went away as quick as air.


……………………….




The hall was decorated beautifully and people were praising the gorgeous white and pink decoration. There was no lacking in the arrangements and people were talking among themselves that how wonderfully it was managed even in the short notice.




The whole attention was drawn as soon as Jai entered the hall. He himself was a bit surprised to see that much gathering. Really, the Dixits and his mom hasn't left any chance to invite people. he smiled to himself, what are they going to do when the wedding will come.




He was greeted by Nihan by a bear hug. Then it was all like a constant buzz to him. Everyone coming and talking to him - some his relatives, some his friends, some whom he hasn't seen for years, some whom he even didn't know. but his eyes were only waiting for one woman, though he knew very well that she's not there yet.




As he coolly shook hands with people, received hugs from the well wishers, he grew impatient. When she's going to make an appearance, was all he could think. He couldn't wait to see her. He heard some girls giggling and whispering among themselves that Bani is so lucky to have such a handsome lover.




True, in his dark grayish black prince coat with a light gray shirt underneath, he was looking like he's never looked before. The stone border of the collar and the button lines were shining, just like his eyes were shining and the smile, which refused to leave his mouth for a second. He even smiled, when someone asked him that if he's always been this good looking or the upcoming marriage is making him like this.



The constant romantic songs were not helping either. He finally got himself excused from the entire crowd in order to have a drink, when the whole hall started to move with the sizzling music.



Jaadu hain, nasha hain, madhoshian…

Tujhko bhulake aabh jau kaha…





It took Jai a few seconds to realize that suddenly the place was free of all the buzzing noise except the music.



Jaadu hain, nasha hain, madhoshian…

Tujhko bhulake aabh jau kaha…




And all of a sudden, it was filled back with the noise and whispers of Ooohs and Aaahs and Wows. He looked up to the stairs and at once knew that now the people know who the lucky one of tonight is.


Dekhti Hai Jis Tarah Se Teri Nazrein Mujhe

Main Khud Ko Chupaao Kahan


Bani took slow and nervous steps to downwards. She was looking magnificent in the saree, her hair curled covered her back which was bare except the few doris. She was nervous, never in her life, she's felt this nervous to be appear in public. She felt the reassuring squeeze of her Bhabi in her left side. She felt the right side bare, where her best friend was supposed to be. A dark thought covered her mind for a moment, until her gaze fell on Jai.



Jaadu hain, nasha hain, madhoshian…

Tujhko bhulake aabh jau kaha…




Jai was sure that he's never experienced this kind of beauty in his whole life. The way she looked, the way she glanced at him, the way she's nervous…hell…he's nervous as well. To tell the truth, he's more nervous than she was.


Dekhti Hai Jis Tarah Se Teri Nazrein Mujhe


Main Khud Ko Chupaao Kahan




They both were unaware of the steps they took towards each other. As they stood just a few inches apart, looking at each other, mesmerized by the other one, the crowd finally realized that, actually they have been lucky to experience such a couple.



As Jai kneeled down in front of her, Bani gave him her hands. No words were needed to transform the feeling. Getting up very slowly, Jai slipped the ring through her finger, caressing it in the process. He looked at her, and then bend down to kiss the finger making Bani shiver a bit. The track was changed in the meantime….



Maula Mere, Maula Mere Maula Mere, Maula Mere

Maula Mere, Maula Mere Maula Mere, Maula Mere

Maula Mere, Maula Mere Maula Mere, Maula Mere

Maula Mere, Maula Mere Maula Mere, Maula Mere



Jai lost the track of time and happenings. he never knew how Bani managed to make him wear the ring which her Bhabi offered her and how the crowd broke in cheers and claps. All he know was her eyes, and the love he saw in them…


Aankhein Teri - Aakhein teri, Kitni Haseen

Ki Inkaa Aashiq, Mein Ban Gayaa Hoon

Mujhako Basaa Le, Iname Tu



Bani was in the same situation, the only thing, she knew in world was him, nothing else.


(ishq Hai)


Maula Mere, Maula Mere Maula Mere, Maula Mere


Maula Mere, Maula Mere Maula Mere, Maula Mere



(ishq Hai)


Maula Mere, Maula Mere Maula Mere, Maula Mere


Maula Mere, Maula Mere Maula Mere, Maula Mere




He offered his hands for dance and she accepted gratefully. In a soft motion of him, she was in his arms. The room got darkened, couples joined them in the dance floor, removing their attention from the new couple, offering them some privacy.


Ki Inakaa Aashiq, Mein Ban Gayaa Hoon

Mujhako Basaa Le, Iname Tu

Mujhase Yeh Har Ghadi, Meraa Dil Kahe

Tum Hi Ho Usaki Aarzoo

Mujhase Yeh Har Ghadi, Mere Lab Kahe

Teri Hi Ho Sab Guftagoo



Bani felt his hand in her bare waist and got tensed, but as soon as she felt his other hand touching her face, she relaxed and joined her hand with his, swaying within his arms.


Baatein Teri Itni Haseen, Main Yaad Inko Jab Kartaa Hoon

Phoolon Si Aaye, Khushaboo




Bani placed her head over his chest and closed her eyes. She felt him engulfing her with his arms. Throughout her life, she's never felt this safe and warm anytime soon. She lifted her head up to look in his eyes which were fixed upon her face. She smiled as he bend his head down to kiss her forhead softly.



Rakh Loon Chhupaa Ke Main Kahin Tujhako

Saayaa Bhi Teraa Naa Main Doon

Rakh Loon Banaa Ke Kahin Ghar, Main Tujhe

Saath Tere, Main Hi Rahoon



Bani's suddenly jerked up from the position as she felt his hand on her back, roaming slowly there under the camouflage of her long black hair.



Julfen Teri, Itni Ghani

Dekh Ke Inako, Yeh Sochataa Hoon

Saaye Me, Inake Main Jiyoon




She slowly snaked her arms around his neck and pulled him closer. Their forhead touched, their nose clashed until softly and very gently their lips met.


(ishq Hai)

Maula Mere, Maula Mere Maula Mere, Maula Mere

Maula Mere, Maula Mere Maula Mere, Maula Mere


meraa Dil Yahi Bolaa, Meraa Dil Yahi Bolaa,

Yaara Raaj Yeh Usane Hai Mujh Par Kholaa

Ki Hai Ishq Mohabbat, Jiske Dil Mein

Usko Pasand Karta Hai Maulaa


meraa Dil Yahi Bolaa, Meraa Dil Yahi Bolaa,

Yaara Raaj Yeh Usane Hai Mujh Par Kholaa

Ki Hai Ishq Mohabbat, Jiske Dil Mein

Usko Pasand Karta Hai Maulaa Mere


meraa Dil Yahi Bolaa, Meraa Dil Yahi Bolaa,

Yaara Raaj Yeh Usane Hai Mujh Par Kholaa

Ki Hai Ishq Mohabbat, Jiske Dil Mein

Usko Pasand Karta Hai Maulaa……



…………………….



I know you're probably bored to hell...I tried to make it romantic...it's not my fault that I s**k at romantic scenes....I'm good at troublemaking...😔....so please bear with me and leave me your lovely comments....(or the threats for belans....)



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Posted: 18 years ago
it let me get here
saved 😃

okie i am back
oushkar should never be a counselor
ever ever ever
sigh their friendship is breaking.....
funny thing love is
now bristy what are you talking about,...that was very romantic
it was beauitful how jai proposed ot her and they danced
now continue soon😃
Edited by jigna_07 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
u r good at trouble making??? nw im scared 😛
pushkar is very bad at giving advice
1 good thing is tht pri didnt take him seriously

nw dnt break tht friendship jst like tht
its sad to c 4 close frnds break up cos of 1 guy
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Posted: 18 years ago
Great update 👏 👏
good thing that pri didnt take pushkars advice.
And dont u dare break up their friendship missy
cont. soon
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Posted: 18 years ago

Ash


Aww...didn't you know? Ree has started calling me Troublemaker...😆


Puskar can't think properly yaar...adat hi nehi hai aisa....😉


hmm...it's sad off course..but not everything is happy in real life right?



Sakura


Thank you...😳


Oh no! What are you people doing with me..."Don't break up Jai and Bani" "don't break up Pri and Pusky" "don't break the friendship"


Then what shall i do..I'm good at writing troubled and sad parts....😆😆😆..


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Posted: 18 years ago
Brishty that was a very romantic part. The way Bani glided down the stairs and Jai's eyes constantly followed her. The surge of emotions they both were feeling, everything.

The only sad part was the falling out of the four friends. Poor Bani does not even know the true reason
And I can't believe Rano would be dumd enough to side with Pri. Thank God Pri didn't listen to that iodt Pushkar's advice and burnt the damn contrcat and asked for extra hours at the hospital. Now I seriously hope, Bani does not do anything stupid as to back off when she finds out Pri has feeling for Jai.
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Posted: 18 years ago
Hi Bristy!!

Beautiful scene of JB's engagement n dance 👏 romantic n hot 😛 😉

Thank god that Pri didn't took Puskar's advice but kinda feel lil bad for her only ... she is loosing her best friend's one of the best moments of life and she had do this not to break her friendship with Bani but her heart but Pushkar hai nah 😛

But I think would end up knowing this stupid truth before her marriage 😕

continue soon 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago

great part bristy 👏
aww bless jai and bani are so cute !
it was a very romantic prt 😆

omg !!!!!!!!
lets kill pri !!!
reli shes will to break up her friendship wit her best mate for a guy dat doesnt even love her
dats crap 😕

and rano
i cannt believe her
she deserves a slap for taking pri's side

awesome part
😉 ctn soon

ps: i lurveeee dat song !!!!- maula mere

great choice

Edited by damilola - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
Birstyyyyyyyyyy !!!! I'm dead 😆
I just cant believe it how did u manage to write such a beautiful part 👏
I'm ur fan yaar , ur write is so well , Hats off 👏 👏 I know i always say that to u but ur writing style impresses me a lot 😳
Poor Rano , she ends up with a slap from Pri and Sarika 😆 But Sarika was right to say to Pri that she was coming in betwen Jai and Bani 😊 👏

I love teh way u desribed the ceremony, the atmoshpere, teh dresses , and oh my god even the songs were matching perfectly 👏 👏 😳

I simply loved ur romantic atmosphere 😳
Please continue ASAP 😉
And Keep writing romantic parts like this 😳 😳
Lots of jhappiz 🤗
Humera. 🤗
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Posted: 18 years ago

Bristy!!! That was an awesome part!! You wrote it very well!!👏👏👏

You dont s**k at writng romance.. so beatuful!

Pri did the right thing, but i do feel bad for her. Hopefully Pushkar will cheer her up😳

But I have this feeling that maybe Bani might find out before the wedding somehow.

Great part hun!👏👏

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