SS: Never Too Late: Last Part Pg 15 - Page 9

Nice part...Update soon..
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Hi Bristy! 😊
Welcome back dear....hope everything is well now
Great part yaar but too short na 😉 😛
Felt bad for little Krissy 😭 😭
Indrajeet Roy is creating misunderstanding between JB 😡
Wondering how Bani is going to know about the calls Jai has been making 😕
Please don't keep us waiting anymore 😆 😆

gr8 part 👏
hope JB's misunderstanding is cleared soon
n thy get to knw abt mr roy 😡
cont. soon

great parts, please continue soon

swati

Originally posted by: ofcourse

Yaaaaaayyyyy...me first..saving..Oh God..the nerve of that stupid director IR 😡 ..SO its been him who is doing all this idiotic things to separate Jai n Bani 😊 yes, you're the first one...😛..hmm stupid director

Poor Krishna, 😭 ..But even if Jai has been calling her n not able to get thro her, atleast Bani can call him rite? I mean she is a mother n ofcourse she will love to talk abt her daughter rite? Why is she acting as if she is not even concerned abt Jai n her daughter? your answer is on the next chapter, hope you like it
Looks like there is a very big misunderstanding between these two, n courtesy: ofcourse our IR😡😡😡
Glad u r ok now n back to normalcy. Welcome back!! yeah, there's pretty big misunderstanding going on here. Thanks hunn, for the support and I'll definately try to stay here as a writer 😉

Originally posted by: siumi

Poor Krishna, she is mising her mamma 😭, there r still things that are mystery 😕, they have misunderstanding 😕 😕 😕 jai n bani?? hm, there are still many things to clearify
and whose that Indrojeet Roy 😡 he's the director of Bani's running film

continue soon plz 😃 😃 😃 will try to do so

Originally posted by: ash9

omg..so its nt her fault??? tht IR 😡 hmm, it is not actually her fault but it is everybody's fault 😊
tht mean hemust hv done sumthing...thts y jai is nt talking to bani nw 😡 you guessed it right 😛

Originally posted by: damilola

omg this mr roy !!!!!!!

evil little man !!!!! yeah, but who told you he's little? 😕 well, he is but how did you guess? 😉

he is aking bani look like an evil mother !!! hmm, think of a punishment for him Dammy dear

awww bless poor krishna she wantz her mum !!!
great update thank you jaan
and do plz ctn soon !! will try to do so

- dammy

Originally posted by: momtajbegum1

its brilliant u updated 😛 thanks Taj darling, its great to hear it again after this long 😊

this mr roy i think he is behind j&b breakup. 😡 your think is correct dear 😉

plz cont soon will try to do so

Taj

Originally posted by: btkr

Nice part...Update soon.. thanks BT, will try to do so
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Originally posted by: khushboo2006

Hi Bristy! 😊
Welcome back dear....hope everything is well now hmm, thank you hunn, it is obviously better now, at least for me, I'm not thinking that I'm guilty for what happened anymore 😊
Great part yaar but too short na 😉 😛 yes, it was short, sorry for that 😉
Felt bad for little Krissy 😭 😭
Indrajeet Roy is creating misunderstanding between JB 😡 yes, let's go and kill him
Wondering how Bani is going to know about the calls Jai has been making 😕
Please don't keep us waiting anymore 😆 😆 i'll try not to 😛

Originally posted by: janu_2006

gr8 part 👏
hope JB's misunderstanding is cleared soon
n thy get to knw abt mr roy 😡
cont. soon

thank you Janu, i'll try to cont soon enough 😊

Originally posted by: swatinarang

great parts, please continue soon

swati

thanks swati, will try to cont soon 😊

Originally posted by: jeenal20

plzz cont soon
gr8 part

thanks jeenal, will try to cont soon

Originally posted by: jnawaz

haye jaani...thanks khao dicho...we ared friends naa...anytime...im here for u hun... ...just hope that jaa hoyeche...tumi ar tomar family joldi tik hoye jai

thanks dibo na keno? Thanks dewa to amar moulik odhikar...aro beshi beshi kore Thank Khao...😊

haila...krushna needs her mamma...aww...poor baby...and jai...oh man...or-o toh khub koshto hoche... ...uff...bechara ar ki korbe...uff...i dont like this new guy...sorry...forgot his name ...oke dhore pitano uchit...ami aashbo naaki ...lol...uff...bani...check your phone naa...ooke=o dhore maara uchit...why is she not with her baby and jai... ...


hmm, Jai er kosto to tumi dekhtei paro na right? when i was reading your comment i was like, "Girl, i knew she's say something like this..😆...eshe poro, pitate mojai lagbe mone hoy...Bani ke marbe kina sheita tomar ichhchha 😉


ok u know i love this ff...i love all of yoru work...but for this one...i must say...joldi sesh koro...hurry and finish...i am waiting for the 'other one' after the lil part i read...haye...i cant wait...jaite tumi amake PM kore chile...amar khub bhalo laglo...it was great...haye...JB romance...lol...cant wait for next update and the 'other' update

hmm, tempting na? I'm also dying to post Rain Maker....that is my dream FF after all...glad je tumi like korechho, i was a bit tensed je ki hoy na hoy....tobe amar class shuru hoye jabe khub taratari, tokhon regular update korte parbo na...tai ajke kalker moddhe eita shesh kore felbo...



JAZ

Here's Part Four, hope you'll like it and some more things get cleared in this chapter...😊




Part Four


Bani lied in her bed quietly. She took the huge Tweety doll in her arms and hugged it tight. Since childhood she's been a great lover of Tweety and when Jai came to know about it…God!



She smiled. He bought everything that crossed his roads regarding Tweety, she was so full of Tweety dolls, bags, key-ring etc. But the best thing he gave her was their daughter.



Bani let go the doll and picked up a photo frame from the bed side table. It was of the two people she loves most. Tweety and her Dad, both smiling at each other while Krishna is trying to pull her father's ear. Bani looked at the picture and kissed it.




"Are you these happy without me that you don't even call me once?" she said sadly at the picture. Sighing she picked up her phone and dialed a number.




"Hello?"




"Jigs Didi? Kaise hain aap? Aur meri beti kaisi hain?" she asked eagerly.




"I'm alright Bani, aru Krishna bhi theek hain, she is really happy, sleeping peacefully with her father." Jigs laughed, "Why don't you come and visit her?"




Bani sighed, "You know why I can't. Di..woh kaisi hain?"




"wo kaun? Jai? Theek hai, in fact, itna khush maine usse bahut din nehi dekha.."




Though Bani was relieved knowing that both Jai and Krishna was ok, she couldn't help but feel a sharp pang in her heart.



So, they don't even need her. She wiped the tear drops and fell into a disturbed sleep.




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"Mausi, Krishna so gayi?" asked Jai tiredly. Mausi gave a glare to him,


"Jai, tumhe bohut achhi tara pata hain ki Krishna won't sleep until you make her sleep."




Jai sighed, "Where is she?"




"Anu ki saath hain, go and take her." Mausi said still angry with Jai for yelling at Krishna.




Jai went to Anu's room to pick Krishna who seemed to be cross with her Dad. She didn't call him Paa..Paa but threw her arms in the air. She was sleepy and her eyes were tired. Jai picked her up and found that she was still sobbing a little.



"Tweety, apni papa se naraj ho beti?" he asked as he carried her to his room.




She blinked her eyes and said, "Taaaitee cry.."




"Don't cry hunn, Papa loves you, nah? We should sleep now or Mausi will be after us right?"




Hearing Mausi's name Krishna's face lit up, "Missi….love…taaaiteeee.."




"Off course she does, we all do." Said Jai as he tickled her and put her down in the bed, settling her down with pillows and side pillows. He kissed her forehead. Krishna giggled. Jai tucked her in with a small blanket. Krishna yawned.




"Goodnight Sweety."




"Taiteee."




"Ok, Tweety." Jai smiled at her. She also smiled and closed her eyes. She kept murmuring something. Jai bent down to hear what she was saying. His heart ached when he heard her,..



"Mamma…taaaiteee…nehi chahte…."



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Jigs and Karuna were chatting at the breakfast table. Everyone has had their breakfast except these two as they were late risers.



Jigs: Bani called last night.



Karuna: Jigs, I don't understand why do you keep contact with Bani.



Jigs: Karuna, samjha karo, if I don't make her belief that everyone is happy without her here, she might contact with Mausi or Anu, even she can come back here. Better still, I keep good contact with her and let her know that her daughter and husband is alright. I don't want her back in this house.




Karuna: Ooo, that's why. I was confused myself that why she doesn't contact with anyone else. You never told Jai that she calls, right?



Jigs: do you think I'm stupid?




Mausi who came to pick the milk bottle for Krishna from the dining table overheard the conversation and her jaws tightened. So, that's the reason.


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"Bani M'aam, there's an elderly lady to see you." Said the bell boy to Bani who was taking make-up. "Who can come," she wondered. "Take her in" she said.




Bani was shocked to see Mausi. "Mausi aap?"




"Bani, tell me one thing, don't you want to see your daughter for once? What kind of mother are you?" Mausi asked angrily.




"Mausi, since she is alright, I don't think they need me." Replied Bani.




"Alright? Kya matlab tumhara? Tumhari beti 8 din tak hospital me pari rahi aur doctors ne puch te raha, where is the mother, where is the mother. Aur tum keh rahi ho sab theek hain?"




Bani dropped the eye shadow box from her hand, "Hospital? Kya hua meri beti ko? Kaise hain wo?"




"main tumhe nehi bataungi. Tumhe janna hain to ghar jake dekh ao." Mausi replied.




"Lekin Mausi, Jigs Didi ne to kaha tha…" she was unable to finish her words as Mausi replied,


"Bohut achhi insaan ki baat pe bharosa karti ho tum Bani…" and she was gone.






Ok, there's no need to kill me now guys, there is going to be only one chapter left and then it will be ended..Hope you are liking it...pls let me know about your opinion....

great part dear, so all this was plan of 3 witches, i just hope that Jw and bani will give great lesson to witches and throw them on street soon

please continue soon

swati

Just caught with the last two parts ! 😊

They were really beautiful, very well written ! 👏

Jigs is a real devil !! 😡thank God Massi is here, now bani will go back to WM ! 😊

Poor tweety she's missing her mom and jai is helpless ! 😭

Please continue ASAP, this ff is really good ! 👏

Humera. 🤗

OMG..Jigs n Karuna are there her also? But whats the prob? Jigs usually dont like people who r poor..but Bani si a good actress n is very rich..n whats this karuna doing?

Bani pls listen to massi n go n see ur daughter n hubby..they really need u..Give a big tamacha on Jigs, Karuna's n that directors gaal..

Thanks for the PM dear..