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Posted: 18 years ago
#41

nice you put it in a story

Edited by idfan - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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This part was written by Ziddi, Guli, Divan, Neetusxm, Bugs_Bunny, Cute1228, Bani& Jai, Candyz, Idfan

Part10
Next Morning

Its beautiful sunny day, where Jai and Bani are cuddled into each other arms and they are sleeping peacefully when..
Jai opens his eyes and smiles and looks at bani!! he comes closer and starts to kiss her!!
She is stirring in her sleep, and not opening her eyes.

Jai is: I won't let you sleep peaceful not after last night

Bani: is like go to work and let me sleep

Jai: no and bend his head and kisses her lips which makes her eyes open.

Bani: Uff….Mr. Walia theek hai, aap bistar me lete rahe mai office jaongi. She storms off to the bathroom to get ready and came back later dressed in business suit.

Jai: Bani tell Tony to bring me my coffee.

Bani: Why don't you tell him, the phone is right next to you?

Jai: Will you be coming home for lunch or shall I bring it to the office.

Bani: I will get my own lunch. I think I will take the girls at the office out to lunch.

Jai: Bani are you going to office to work or for lunch date with your girlfriends.

Bani: Are you jealous? I can do both, work and have lunch date. See you tonight and oh don't forget to look after the kids.

She walks out the door blowing him a kiss.

Jai:Bani Bani kahan kho gayi?

Bani : for one minute i imagined that i went to the office and you took care of the kids at home...

Jai: Oh no! Jai ran to the bathroom before Bani made her thought of hers a reality

Jai came out of the shower...hair dripping of water droplets, clad in a towel. Bani looked at him, all shy and was about to leave the room when Jai held her wrist and pulled her in embrace and whispered,

Jai: Last night you were a wild cat and now you are shy? Haye mein to tumhare in roop pe pagal ho gaya hoon!

Bani left his embrace and ran out of the door giggling.
Jai said to himself where are you running to? Tonight I will make you blush again

meanwhile bani has made her way to the kitchen and is preapring breakfast.
she stops when she hears a strange noise

Bani: Aaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh, mouse, Jai, help.

Jai comes runnin

Jai: Wat happened

Bani: Mouseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

Jai: Its a mouse not goin 2 eat u.

Bani: Noooooooooooooo.

bani.plz i,m so scared of mouse,

jai.koi baat nahi baani kutch nahi hoga.

bani.can you plz make the break fast for me and kids,i,m leaving because i,m to scared of mouse.

jai.bani wo main

Bani is standing on the chair and she's like get rid of it!!!!!!!

and she's screaming

jai is like any louder and i will go deaf!

and she's like stop blabbering and get rid of it!

Bani: says sumtimez the people we love forget to love us bk

Jai picks bani up from the chair shes standing on and takes her out of there, but once outside every1 looks at them n giggle.

Jai: Massi she sprained her ankle and i am taking her to the doctor. Looking at Bani who is like what?

Massi: Wat, r u kk (lookin at Bani)

Bani: Yes, I m just...

Jai: Comin with me, kk need 2 take her 2 the hospital before they could reach the hospital Jai kissed her on the lips and then drove her to the hospital.😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#43
hey mamta
loved the update..
aww jai is so cute..
me confused why r they going to hospital again..
as she didnt break her ankle right???
sorry if this is a dumb question it is just that i am slow today..

continue ASAP
please

cheers
❤️Niralixxx
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Posted: 18 years ago
#44
i cant wait to finish reading this....kaafi zabardast ending hai 😉 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
#45
great story so far....loved part 8 the most 🤣
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Posted: 18 years ago
#46
Very SWEET! 😳 But it's so short... 😭
Anyways, please continue soon... 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
#47
sorry guys will update before going to bed
was busy with skool work
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: ziddi

sorry guys will update before going to bed
was busy with skool work

its k mumz u take your time...if it is left uneditted...i know what happens😉😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
#49
o its k but cant wait even though i noe wat will happen!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#50
Awesome ff as well as hilarious 😆 ...please continue soon 😊

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