FF: Crazy Kiya Re by KS Members Part14p10 - Page 6

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Writers of this part are idfan, cute1228, mb, ziddi,guli, pachu, solly21, navs, shades of grey, navs

Chapter 11

Jai takes bani insted to a hotel and there. Finds out Bani is have another kid!!!

Jai - yeh kia hua? kaise hua? kab hua? jo bhi hua acha nahi hua!!!😡

Jai: Bani how could you do this and have another child?😡

Bani: what

Jai: think about my age i do not want your 9month tantrums😡

bani starts crying and says it's not my fault im pregnant. it's ur fault. 😭

jai's like o god i didnt mean to make u cry...

Jai - kiska hai yeh bacha? kahan se aya yeh bacha?? bolo bani jawab doh!😡

Bani: YOURS!this is ur child. im pregnant with ur child an ur suspecting that this is someone elses child?!!

Bani: because of ur cricket team remember?!😡

Jai - i wasnt blaming you but if you took it that way...GREAT...waise bhi kyun nahi...tum mujhe chodh kar har kisi ko firned bana leti ho bani...pushkar ko, tarun ko aur pata nahi kis kis ko apna haal suna daalti ho...

Bani is sad!!!😭😭😭

Bani: How could u say something like this??😭😭😭

She runs off crying!!!😭

and Jai is like what did i just do again? confused

ai runs his hand through is hair and is like oh shit and he runs after her.

Bani is crying and remembers the time she spend with him and their kids, and she looks down on her stomach.

Bani: sorrie mere bacha your papa doesn't want you

She goes to the abortion center to have a abortion.

Jai who was following her is shocked to see her going for an abortion. He feels like and jerk

J: Bani, stop jaan, i did not mean to say that...please dont get abortion

B: Nahin Jai, first time said things are always from heart😭

J: But jaan, you live in heart

B: Blushes
Jai comes closer and he wipes her tears and holds her hand with his.

Jai: i am sorry jaan, i did not meant it

Bani: but how can you say that

Jai: acha i am sorry holding his ears

Bani: you will make it up

Jai: how, first he kisses her forehead and says thank you for making my cricket wish come true, I hope this time we have nonogan babies together

Bani is 😲her eyes are about to pop out
Halia 9 kids😲

Jai nods his head yes then our cricket team will be complete😆

Bani holds her head and faints before that Jai catches her

J: Bani utho, kya hua jaan?

B: Nonajan ki speak karoge to faint hi hogi naa...

J: Nonaa...what?

B: Nonajan jai, nonajan

J: Oh..it sounds like ninja turtles😆😆😆

B: How? 😕

Jai: dont ask!!!!!!!!😆😆😆

but he's like dont ever do that again!!!

bani looks at him!

Bani: do want

Jai: faint

Bani: why i have the right to faint

Jai: jaan i only asked for 9 turtles i mean kids

Bani: only nine

jai nod his head and she smacks him on the shoulders with her purse

J: Ouch! Lagta hain

B: haha..itne bade aadmi ko purse hitting, hurts, funny mr.walia

J: Bani, make up ur mind, either Jai or Mr.Walia

B: Nope! Meri Marziii

J: That reminds me of a song...

Jai: This song......and he thinks and thinks and comes up with...
And he sings
dildaar ke qadmon mein -2
dil Daal ke nazraanaa
mahfil se uThaa aur ye kahne lagaa deevaanaa

*male voice*: kyaa?
ab aage teri marzi ho ho.. aage teri marzi
ho more saiyaaN, ho more balmaa bedardi
aage teri marzi
aage teri marzi sajanvaa
aage teri marzi peeharvaa aage teri marzi

Bani is like this public

Jai sing public hai to public hai and carry her out to his car and puts her in

bani is blushing like crazy!!!!

and he comes around

and he's like shall we

and she nods her head yes!

Just than Jai's phone rings Damit.

Jai: Goddammit! To hell with this phone. Now where were we -- Ahh! Quickly kissing Bani's lips.

Bani is shocked and blushed like hell. What are you doing! We are in Public Mr. Walia.

Jai: Call me Jai or I will do it again. I have absolutely no shame.

Bani: OH Jai! And blushed the deeped red

Jai just blushed the deepest red as well.

Both kept looking at each other.

bani said looking at jai in a singful tune : Sharmana Chodh Dal, Raaz dil ka khol daal, Aaju baaju mat dekh, I love you bol daal... as she giggled seeing jai blush.. it was truly a sight.. who knew.. jai walia could blush d deepest shade of red tooJai is shocked,without noticing while dancing she bumps someone trips right into Jai's arms, and they have an eye locking and then they hear the horns ringing.

They both turn around and they see a paraji

Paraji: Are Bhaiya Shaab or Bhabi ji, yeh public hai romance somance karna ho toh parade ke peeche kariye

Bani is just embrass while jai is not letting go of her.

Jai: Papaji voh kya hai na

Paraji: Kya hai

Jai: meri voti ne abhi batya hi voh ma bane wali hai

Paraji: Mubrak ho bhaiy shaab bhot muhbraka ho aur apko bi bhabi ji

Jai giving his full smile, shurkiya😃

Paraji: ap dono ko pure sau nane mune pyaar re ladka aur ladki vo, Vahi Guru Ap dono ko bhala kare. He left and told the traffic to leave.

Jai and Bani got in the car and
Bani was shocked saying Sau bache, halia i am dead.😕😭

Jai: Bani that more then a cricket team.😆😆😆

Bani is like shut up and drive.😡

The End

Written by Guli, Vedo, Divan, Cute1228, MB, ShadesofGrey, Neetusxm, Cheeze, idfan, Davia389

Part12
Jai: What i didnt say anything!!

And he's like

hmm... his idea wasnt that bad!

bani: WHAT? 😡

Jai: Arre baba, nothing!! Why are you angyr?? You're getting anyry so quick these days. It must be the hormones....

Bani: WHAT?? 😡 😡

Jai: Oh shit!
Bani: Hormones??

Jai: No i didnt say hormones!! i said... that trombone! u see that guy over there he's playing it!!!!

Bani is giving him the look

Jai: Arre i hate that look

Bani: Serves u right!

Jai: Chalo Bani, I am starving let go and eat.

Bani: Muje bhi bohot bhukh lagi hai. Umm, I think I want to eat spicy pau bhaji and mango kulfi.

Jai: But Bani I want to eat Chinese!

Bani: No! Your baby in my tummy is craving Indian food.

Jai: I think I am second thoughts about making a cricket team. I have to give in too much to your fancies. Lets go before you create a scene. He grabs her hand and pulls her along.

Wen they come back home

bani goes up

and just goes to sleep!

Jai - gr8 acha hai so gayi...dimaag ka dahi hai yeh 😡

Bani then turns around in her sleep and she looks so peaceful. Jai's anger vanishes and smiles and goes to her, kisses her forehead. He then changes and goes sleep as well.

at 3 AM Bani wakes up craving for food,

Bani: Jai get up! I am hungry

Jai just mumbles something and goes back to sleep

Bani: Jaiiiiiiii get up! I am hungry

Jai: Woke up but still sleepy (of course its 3 am 😆 ) Bani its 3 Am what do you want at this hour? You should have woken up Tony and not me!

Bani just gives him one of her glares

Jai: Ok baba dont give me that look again, tell me what you want to eat?

Bani: Mmmmm i want to eat Chinese

Jai - Good God...kitna kahti hai aur kitna pareshaan karti hai...im stroningly having second thoughts about this marriage!! 😡

Bani: what? 😭 😭 😭

Jai - you heard me...you better smarten up or else...ill have to thik about that rehab! 😛

Bani is like omg!

Bani: rehab??

She's like fine i dont want anything! and she goes back to sleep crying! 😭 😭 😭

Jai - finally....waise laaton ke bhoot baaton se nahi maante hain...and she keeps proving the saying right!!!

next morning.....

jai wakes up

and he gets ready and takes his shower

he looks at bani and turns out she is running a fever!

He quickly dials the doctor and asks her to come to the house. He thinks this all by fault, I should have kept her resting in the house yesterday instead of taking her out.

He is pacing madly in his room waiting for the doctor to come...
doc comes and checks on her

and tells her that she's running a high fever!!!

and she's weak at the moment!!!

doc gives jai to get medicines and he does!

doc says that she needs to eat something as well!!!!....

he regrets for acting like a jerk and not getting her chinese food in the night as well!!!!!

He goes out of the room thinking he has to make it up to her when * light bulb* Chinese food!! 😃

Jai gets her food, but now Bani doesnt want it.

Bani: Jai I m not hungry, I dont feel good.

Jai: U well after u eat.

Bani: No, I need sleep.

Jai: Please.

Bani: I dont, crin n sleeply.

Jai: Bani, Just eat a little bit of this chicken corn soup. You need your strenght - there is the bun in the oven to consider.

Bani: You like making me cry, don't you. Cracking jokes at my expence all the time 😭

Jai: (thinking to himself - this is not working - turns on 1/2 his charm - 100% would kill Bani and me at this stage) Bani, (in a very husky voice) if you eat 5 spoons, I will put you to sleep with a lullaby.

Bani: A lullaby, in your voice. The baby will wake up and start kicking.

Jai: (thinking to himself again - ARREE... iski hormones to over-drive me hai. Bilkul pagal ho gayi. My charm is not working on her . Before one look and she would melt)

Jai thinking I will show you...

And he starts singing

Tujhe suraj kahu ya chanda
Tujhe deep kahu ya Tara
mera naam karega raoshan
jag me mera raj dulara..

Bani is like, what happened to his besura voice then the babies krishna and karan start crying at the top of their lungs. bani gets up and rushes to her babies

In the babies rooms:

Bani: Please, stop crin, I dont feel good

Jai comes in n takes Karan

Jai: Bani go back, I'll take care of them

Bani: No, me do it

Jai: Look at u, ur sick

Bani: They need meeeeeeeee

Jai: Listen Rano will take care of them, but u need rest

B4 u know it Bani falls on the floor with Krishna n faints.

jai rushes to her and puts karan down and carries bani to the bedroom and calls the doctor and tells him that bani is very weak so the doctor advises that he should take her to the hospital...
they go to the hospital...

and she's admitted.....

and bani is just really weak!!!!

doc says that bani will have to stay here for a few days before she could go home!!!!!!!!

jai is sad!!

Bani wakes-ups:

Bani: Jai

Jai: Bani, rest

Bani: Jai, I was in the kids room Krishu was with me, y m I here?

Jai: U fainted n fell

Bani: Wat, but Krishu was in my jhands is she kk

Jai: Relax shes fine

Bani: I want 2 go home.


Jai: U cant!!! u have to stay here for a few days!!!!!

Bani is crying

and she's being stubborn and saying i dont want to be here

jai tells her its okay!!!!!!

and tells her to calm down!

Jai: Dekh

Jai: Dekho love, tumhe araam ki zarrorat hai

Bani: Lekin Mr Walia, main araam ghar parr bhi toh kar sakti hoon!

Jai: Bani, doctors ne kaha hai tumhe yahan rehna padega, aur kuch hi dino ki toh baat hai........... main bhi toh hoon na tumhare saath

Bani: Parr Mr Walia, bacche???????

Jai: Bani, ghar parr bahut log hai unka khayal rakhne ke liye, and I keep calling home to check on them, ab relax aur soh jao

o love, tumhe araam ki zarrorat hai

Bani: Lekin Mr Walia, main araam ghar parr bhi toh kar sakti hoon!

Jai: Bani, doctors ne kaha hai tumhe yahan rehna padega, aur kuch hi dino ki toh baat hai........... main bhi toh hoon na tumhare saath

Bani: Parr Mr Walia, bacche???????

Jai: Bani, ghar parr bahut log hai unka khayal rakhne ke liye, and I keep calling home to check on them, ab relax aur soh jao

Bani is crying

she doesnt want to stay there

Jai says that he will stay here with her

she wants him to

but then the kids...

but he's like nothing will happen to the kids!!!!!

and she gets satisfied and he stays there with her!!
Rano, maasi and daji comes to see her and they have brought Krishu and Karan with them.

Bani smiles and cuddles her babies. They all sit with Bani and talk and play with the babies. Time flies and it's get dark. Rano, maasi and dadi leave with the babies. Bani gets sad, but Rano promises to bring them next day.

After they have left. Jai asks her if she is hungry, he get food for her. Bani says she just wants double chocolate icecream, strawberry cheesecake and vanilla milkshake.

Jai: Bani that is a lot of sugar, do you want to get diabetes!

Bani pouts and starts crying and says: I am craving sweets and you don't want to get it for me. Why did you ask?

Jai is now on the verge of having a nervous breakdown. Thinks that's it, no more kids ever again. I am going to become celibate.....

he ends up going and getting it for her!!!!!

and she's like yay!!!!

she enjoys it very much!

and he mind feels at ease!!!

afterwards

he tells her to lie down!!!

and to go to sleep!!!!

he caresses her head and then lets go!!

he's about to walk away

she grabs his hand

he turns around

and she's like thank u!!!!!!!!
Jai kisses her forehead and tells her to go to sleep and that he is just going for a walk and he will back. Bani blows him a kiss and falls asleep.

Later Jai too falls asleep resting his head on her bed.

In the morin the sun hits Jai face n he wakes-up

Jai: I dont want 2 get-up it feels great with Bani in my arms.

After a hour B is up!!!

she looks around and jai comes to her and asks her what she wants to eat for breakfast...

Bani: Nothin

Jai: Agani, thats it, ur havin somethin... never wantin food, whan u need some

Bani: Sorry

Jai: Wat... sorry

Bani: I m goin 2 cry.

jai: oh no not again plss iam sorry.. pls dont cry...

Bani: Ur forcin me 2 eat.

no dear i just want u too be healthy.. and i am really sorry for what i did that night..

Bani: Its kk, but I really dont feel like eattin

Jai comes over 2 Bani n feels her head, her temp. is really up n she got the fever back.

Jai - y the hell are you always running a fever woman? eaither you are hungry, pregnant or running a fever!!! what in the world did i do to deserve a rinse and repeat wife like you? 😡 😆

Bani feels dizzy n faints on the bed.

jai calls the doctor and they tell him that she is taking stress and is very weak which is very bad for her pregnancy...

Jai: Y m I annoyin her like this, now I will stop.

He's sitting by her

and he's looking at her!!!

jai is like u idiot!!!!... why the heck u have to make her mad and stress her out!!!!

he's yelling at himself!

Jai to himself - this is stressing me out SHE is stressing me out! i cant believe i let her do this to me! grr...argh...BLAH....i need to divorce her! ASAP!!!


jai is like wait why am i saying this???? shoot!!!!! i dont want to divorce her!

Jai's conscience - jai get a hold of youself...this woman has made your life a living hell...drop her and move on! 😆

jai: no but... she gave me 2 great kids and one more is on the way!!!!!!!

Jai - grr that means more trouble. Jai get a hold of yourself. keep the kids kick the mom

Jai: wait no...... i want both kids and mom!!!!!!!

The End

Written by Guli, Mb and Lonely14

Part 13
Jai: wait no...... i want both kids and mom!!!!!!!

Jai - see what this woman has done to your thought process...even heroine addicts r more firm and know what to do...i say kill yourself or let go of her!

Jai thinks!!!

jai is like but if i kill myself then i wont be with her!!!!! and i cant be away from her!!

and then

bani is looking at him

and she's like what are u thinking about?

Jai - see what you are doing to me...and my thought process? you have ruined me! u hear u have ruined me!!! im thinking of killing myself rather than YOU!!!

Hearing this due to her pregnancy and her fragile nature, Bani "Faints"

jai rushes her to the hospital...this time he was serious...he could potentialy lose her!

As soon as they reach the hospital, the doctors start her check up to make sure nothing is wrong with her, and with Jai breathing down their neck they had no other choice.

they kicked hai out and did thorough check up and told jai to get tests done!

Jai was getting impatient as it was taking longer than presumed.

when the tests came the dr analysed and said "mr walia im sorry to inform but your wife has brain tumour...that is why she has been fainting alot and having fevers. she has onyl 1 month to live! we have diagnose dit too late!

Jai was left aghast hearing about his wife. He then enquired if anything could be done to save his wife, and questioned the doctor about his kid.

Dr - i suggest we try chemo but we must d a c-section as it will affect the baby. we have to try all we can mr. walia...bani is 7 months pregnant. the child will be premature but nromal!

Jai didn't know how to react, whether to be happy that his wait is finally over and he will be able to see the child, or whether to be sad that he might lose his wife.

Jai to himself - Snap out of it...this is the only way. you have to go through with this. or you may lose bani!
to dr- dr im ready. plz do n e thing to save my precious!

The doctors then got ready to operate Bani, and deliver the kid. After a while Jai could hear a faint cry from the OT, when the doctors came and announced that he was blessed with a son.

Jai - bani kaisi hai dr? as he took the child
Dr - she is fine we will send her in recovery ina few min then tw morning we will prep her for chemo.

Jai on the phone - massi its a boy, im namig him dev.

Masi was ecstatic to hear that Her munna had a son, and she was thrilled by the name "Avinash". They decided to register the name now, and have a naming ceremony after Bani gets better. Meanwhile in the Hospital room, Bani was prespiring lke no other, when Jai rushed to the doctor to see what's going on.

Jai - dr wats going? is bani ok? plz help her dr.

Dr- we r trying her pulse is going down. mr walia plz go out of the room we need to do this

Jai - dr money is no object plzz do somehting for her!

Doc - Mr. Walia, not everything is about the money, Please leave the room while we take care of Mrs. Walia.

Jai - Please doctor do everything to save her.

and jai quietly leaves as the doctors prepare to operate Bani.

Dr. - Nurse get her ready for the operation. and call dr mehta from neuro dpt.

Dr. mehta arrived and was shon bani's test results and "x-rays"

Dr. mehta- we have to try to get the tumour out befor eit bursts...looks like she almsot had a stroke which aggrivated her tumour.

Before the doctors could do anything, Bani's blood pressure was rising constantly, now it reached almost to 230. Her brain started bleeding, and she was suffering from a brain hemarrage while the doctors were trying to stop the bleeding.

The monitor's beeping went steady as the dr. lost her pulse. they tried everything but she was a flat liner. dr walked out wiping seat off his forehead and jai gets up from the seat.

Jai was very hyper when he saw the doctor, before giving the doctor a chance to speak, jai started questioning him.... "doctor is bani okay" "was the operation successful?" "Can i meet her?"

Doc - Mr. Walia, i am sorry to say that but we couldnt' save Mrs. Walia. Not only did she have a tumor but at the last minute she suffered a stroke, her brain didn't stop bleeding, and her heart also gave up. Before we could react, her pulse was gone.

Jai dropped on the ground and started to cry. he was devasted just yesterday he wanted to divorce her but now he cant. he just realised he got what he wanted bani out of his life.
Jai went home with the baby and informed everyone of the situation.

Hoping against hopes, Jai wished that this could be a desi drama where People just come out of dead, but after seeing Bani pass away in front of him, he had no choice but to accept the harsh reality. Now he had to live for his son. An ambulance followed Jai to his house which carried Bani's body.

Massi was devastated by the news and sight so was everyone else. Jai went straight to arrange for bani's kirya karam.

great part please continue soon.

then jai gets up from his dreams saaying nahi mein uske bina nahi reh saktrhi.. bani askk kya hua mr walia .. bura sapna dekha.. on seeing her he sayss haan bahut bura tha wo sapna.. i am sorry bani and starts to cry... and both hug..
davia

Originally posted by: davia389

then jai gets up from his dreams saaying nahi mein uske bina nahi reh saktrhi.. bani askk kya hua mr walia .. bura sapna dekha.. on seeing her he sayss haan bahut bura tha wo sapna.. i am sorry bani and starts to cry... and both hug..
davia

aree davia voh ending nahi hai😆😆😆
there is an grande ending tomorrow😉

Part 14 Written By ziddi

The approaching siren of the ambulance toward the Walia Mansion drew near and it took out Bani's body from the stretcher. Everyone was standing there watching them place Bani's body on the floor, they were all crying as she was the perfect daughter, bahu, wife and mother. Each member of the mansion gets the flashback with the moment spent with her. Rano is trying to clam the wailing new born baby Aviansh who wants his mother's milk and wants to be in her protective arms. Rano is helpless she can't do anything for her sister who was like a mother.

She some how is manging to clam him down and to make him drink his milk and she puts the baby to sleep, who resembles his dad but has his mom's eyes and lips.

Meanwhile in the living room

Women and Men have come all dressed in white and they are sitting in front of her body and her portrait. Jai comes down stairs dressed in white his face looks all pale with dark circles under his eyes, he looks like his age as grown in the past 24 hours.

He goes and sits next to Adi and Ranveer and they hug him and comfort him. Ranveer is holding Varun. Jai is looking at Bani's portrait from the sangeet where she wear her dark green saree and smiling. He remembers all the moment spent with her from the june 19th to previous.

He is lost looking in her potrait when his distraction are broken away from a soft tap on his hand and he looks down to see his 1yr 3months daughter krishna who resembles her mom, her dark brown eyes, that is sparkling and looks up at her father with questions, he wipes his tears and picks his daughter up. Meri beti mera bacha, and hugs her and kisses her.

She giggles, and he hugs her, even though bani won't be here he will always find her in the forum of his two kids Karan and Krishna their first born twins. He remembers how excited he was when he found out that Bani has given birth too two beautiful healthy twins one boy and one girl. He didn't go to work for one month did everything from work making sure nothing was missed, making sure bani was taking rest, and making sure his kids were well acquainted with their father.

The excitement he had with his twins birth he did not feel the same with the birth of his and Bani's son Avinash Dev he smirks at the meaning of his youngest nones name the god of destruction. his youngest son didn't bring happiness like his two previous children blessed them with happiness, joy and money. His youngest son took away the happiness of the family his precious darling wife, that he cherished loved and wanted to spend not just his entire life but the next seven life times.

Jai is broken by his thoughts when he hears something Pa, Pa, and Pa, he looks and see where this beautiful child voice is coming from, and then he looks down at his daugther who is pointing to her mom's potrait and ba, and ba she is pointing to her twin brother karan who is by his mom side, his small hands patting her, and screaming ma, ma in his child toddler voice.

Jai with Krissy in his arms goes and kneels down in front of her dead's body and places his hand on the son, who looks at hss dad.

Jai can sense that his son face his asking question like why is not my mom waking up, why isn't she opening her eyes, why is she lying on the ground. He picks his son and comforts him, and says.

Jai with tears in his eyes, "beta it will be the four of us you, me, krissy and your brother Avinash"

Karan: ma, ma, mama.

He is doing best to clam his son down, and he just realize what a eventful day it has been, the day were he and bani were suppose to enjoy and hug each other when their daughter and son say their first words.
Its the day that her body will leave for the final rites, and she is not by his side but she is with him in spirit, in the forum of their children he can feel her appearance. Her appearance in filled in each corner of his house.

Like Magic the winds are blown into the mansion, the chandeliers are shattering, and then all the guest and him hears a loud bang.

Before he can blink is eyes, he sees the potrait of his Bani, the mother of his children and his soul mater is shattered into tiny pieces.

Bani, he says, Bani,

He puts his daughter and son down, while Massi and Dadi come and take the toddlers.

He goes kneel down in front of her portrait and body where the thousand glass pieces are shattered by.

He yells Bani, and Bani.

The End


Please leave your comment then i will continue

There is two more parts than the ff will end.

ye kya.... bani ko marrdiya... really not fair ekta se bhii bura hogaya yahaan.. 😭
davia