FF: Crazy Kiya Re by KS Members Part14p10 - Page 2

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Posted: 18 years ago
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👏 😳 😆 awesome parts 👏

carry on mamta do post the other parts 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#12
Awww, it's very sweet... 😳 Please continue soon... 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#13
Awesome ff.
very 😆
plz cont. soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Awesome yarr... 👏 and funny 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thanks everyone i am glad you liked the SHort Story GOTW ff Cray Kiya Re by KS Members, go and participate to make it more crazy its fun.

I am just putting it together like a ff its more then one writer. In the beginning of each part the all the writers names are mention.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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this is so cool.. a first eva ff by KS'ians 👏 .. will read once i get home.. got class now and will edit commento 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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😆

Too good Piku dear. Just loved it and great idea dear.👏

😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Note This part is written by Bugs_Bunny Dk's Jaanu Guli, Idfan, Divan, Cheeze, Cute1228, Davia389, and Ziddi

Part 6

Jai: oh my god what should i do. today bani will have the best night with me to finish my cricket team but how should i pacify her

Jai thinks....

he leaves work early and he comes home .

Bani's upstairs in the room . Jai comes inside but sees bani in there crying he quickly rushes to her...

He comes up behind her and holds out big bouquet of lilies that he has got for her.

Bani turns around and pushes him and walks away.

Bani: I am not talking to you Mr. Walia(she calls him this when she is mad) you shouted at me.

Jai comes to her and hugs her and says: I am sorry darling, but I was having a difficult meeting.

Bani: that's no reason to shout at your wife.

Jai: Sorry, what can I do to make up to you..........

Bani: Just leave me alone!!! 😡 😡 😡

Jai: but... 🤔

Bani: No leave!!! 😡

Jai: Baby.. u know i would never hurt you like that.. but.. 😭

Bani: but kya Mr Walia, main hamesha aapse pyar se baatein karti hoon and this is how you treat me??? 😭

Jai: Aaawww Bani, Bani please, no tears Bani, you know main tumhari aankhon mein aansu nahi dekh sakta......... Bani idhar dekho, lo maine kaan bhi pakad liye, please ab rona bandh karo na!!!!

Bani: No just leave me alone!!!!! 😡

Jai: Bani? 😭 😭

Bani: Please Mr. Walia!! 😡

Jai: Ur that mad ur calling me Mr. Walia? 😭

Bani: Yes!! 😡

Jai: So, sorry, want do I do now

Bani: Go away

Jai: No, I will not

Bani: Y

Jai: Ur crin, want does one do!!!

bani: they will leave the other person alone! 😡

jai: but i wont leave u!!!😭 😭

bani is crying 😭 😭

Bani: Fine if you dont.. then i will!!!

she walks off!!! Jai follows her

Jai:bani pls listen to me she goes to the kids room..

He follows there and ....
Bani runs into his study and locks the door.

Now Jai is really scared because his files and laptop are in there, what if Bani is so mad that she goes and messes up his laptop or tears up his files.

He knocks on the door and asks Bani to open the door.

Bani screams: Go away before I get really mad.....

Jai: Bani please!!!! 😕 😕 😕

Bani: Jai! i am warning u!! 😡 😡

Jai: Okay i will go away!!!but please dont touch my stuff!!! 😕

Bani: WHAT? 😡

Jai is like oh man why did i say that!

Bani: Your stuff ? 😡😡😡

Jai is like hmm i meant 😕

Bani: what did you mean your stuff, it only belongs to you just because you go to the office and earn. 😡😡

Jai: is like oh shit

The End

Part7 will be after uni

Enjoy Guys
What will Jai do to pacify her


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Posted: 18 years ago
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😆 😆 good idea mamta!! really funny !!! LMAO!

Edited by bugs_bunny - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#20
hey mamta
that was an awesome update..
hehe
jai is so cute..
love him..
and aww bani is so mad at jai..
not cool..
jk jk..
they both are so cute toghether

continue soon
please

cheers
❤️Niralixxx

p.s. oh by the way mamta.. i did update my ff today.. so go check it out.. and now u have to update ur other ff too soon..

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