FF:U R My Sunshine: TOPIC CLOSED - Page 10

poor jai.. really exhausted and soooo desperate for bani!! 😆 😆 its soo funny seeing him like this!!

i love kabir even more than JW!! he's is such a cutie!!
him lecturing bnai and calling jai a 'gunda' was sooooo cute! i could so imagine that!!

goodgood.. bani's not giving into her desires! keep torturing jai! 😉

loved the humour!! thanks for that 😆 😆

that was an awesome update so what is bani's answer going to be
pls cont soon.....

that was an awesome update so what is bani's answer going to be
pls cont soon.....

Haila - I thought Kabir had tired Jai out!!😆

Feel so sorry for the poor guy, having to drive around until Kabir falls asleep!!.......Saby, is this your way of getting revenge?😕😆

Kabir meeting his mamma was sooooooooo cute!!😛.........Honestly Sabs, where do you get him from?.....do you have a cousin/nephew etc like that?

The part with JB alone was:😳

Saaabbyyyyyyy ji .. tussii mujhe maar ke rahoge ! .. lolzz.. i am jst having my punjabi sessionss !! .. 😆 😆 😆 ....yyaarr whtss this abt ....??? u dont end on places like dat ! .. u know its illegal !! .. 😳 ..

loveeeee this Kabir Guyyyyy !! .. suucchhhh a chewwttoooo !..he is ssooo cutee !! .. 😃 😃 ....loved the reunion with his mum !! .....he is suchh a cutiee !! .. and loved it wen jai said "he is over exxagerating" ... 😆 😆 😆 ...tht wasss like "awwwwwwwwwwwww"... sooo cuteee ! .. blessss him !! ...

aur Bani madam ...? whtss wrong with her .... Gosh ! .. yaarr ek baar they get married .. he will let her have kids and all dat ! . but then she too has to undertsnad .. tht he lost his kid ! ... which is bad ! .. but she has to giveee him timeee !!! ... 😭 .... and jai ttooo ... doesnt he relaisee tht he loves her ! ... why doesnt he say it toooo !! Goshh theseee 2 r sooo confusinggg !! ... Phew ! .. mera to yahi heart fail ho jayega !! theyy need to hurryyy upp !! .. aww and wen jai said .. wake me up .. wen u r ready to get married !! .. i am ssooo happyy dat he so not giving up on her !! ... 😉 😉 😉 will be waiting for the updatee eagerllyyyy !!!!
Shafaq!

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What a superb part sabs!!!!Loved ur poems & weekend treat...beautifully portrayed bani's confusion & feelings for jai.....Kabir is so cute...waiting for the next part...Have a nice weekend.... 👏 👏

Sabyyyyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 🤗

Kaise hi ji? Looooooong time hua aapse baat kiye hue!! 😭

Loved the last 3 parts soooooo much!!

My favourite scenes:

1) Bani getting one up on Roshni!! You go girl!! 😉 Those dialogues were briliant - my jaw dropped wide open just like my Cuddles!! 😉 😆 👏

2) Jai, Kabir, Barney and oooooosssssss - "are you my son or my enemy?!" 🤣 🤣 🤣 brilliant sabs!! that whole scenario was brilliant, you have such a good understanding of it all, the reader cannot help but be engrossed!!

3) Jai trapping Bani on the sofa - need I explain?? 😳 😳 😳


Keep on rocking cheliji, and update soon!!!! (by the way, maine bhi update kiya hai, lekin aap kahi nazar hi nahi aaye?! 😭 )

Cordy xxxxxx

Hai..mar dala.. kya update tha.. 😳 😳

Dialouges were superb..

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sabs gr8 update...
ok now im against both...sala both confused... 😆
both dont know wat they want...

wel i cant blaim jai also cuz bechara lord knows wen he made love 😆

and cant blaim bani cuz bechari has a stud jai walia infront of her...who wudnt be confused...

lol i dont know if i make sense 😆

cont soon

neetu