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Pooja

@kripa0521

Voyager

Posted: 18 years ago

#81

Awesome part.. please continue soon!

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Sanam

@sanam84

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 18 years ago

#82

saby great as usual, loved the way you have described bani's confusion , yes Kabir is a part of her n they have a great bonding but to marry a man who does not love her, well I think he does but as far as bani is concerned he doesn't to confusion to hoga na.

so Master Kabir is giving JW sleepless nights, good for JW coz he has given sleepless nights to many. Acha hai raat bhar bhatko aur gao
Gali koi apani na shehar apana koi
Kaha din bitaate kaha raat karate
Na milata agar maikada to bataayo kaha zindagi se mulaakaat karate

"No" replied Jai and sent her a reproachful look. "He peed on my cotton robe."
This line was hilarious, ab to stain bhi nahin jayega lol

And now to the couch, I was just thinking if these couches cud tell stories to kaisa hota. Matlab navs ke FF mein couch, mere FF mein couch, tere FF mein couch……..

Yes my next FF is khissa couch ka.

Very well done saby, loved it and loved the last line. Wake me up b4 u go go….in this case when u say yes yes.

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khushboo2006

@khushboo2006

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#83

Hi SAB! 😊
Awesome part sweetie 😃 😆
Was little bit steamy Na 😉
Beautifully penned the interaction between Bani and Kabir 😃 ......could visualize each and every word 😊 ......Kabir is so adorable 😃 😆 🤗
Bani refused his proposal 👏 🤗 .....good good 😊 ....let him suffer a bit 😉 ....not so long 😉 😃
Please update soon 😃
BTW, you rock SAB! 🤗

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btkr

@btkr

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#84

Baap re, garmi ka mausam is ruling ffs now! Loved Kabir's little tirade of complaints.. ❤️ Couch time = fireworks!!!!

👏 👏 👏
bt

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Nasreen

@ShiyaNasreen29

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#85

Very good update Didi 👏 👏 👏
Waiting for the next part.
Shiya

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swati

@swatinarang

Sparkler

Posted: 18 years ago

#86

sabby dear really a great weekend gift and really nice part and just loved it. u know perfect combination.

poor kabir is suffering because of jai if he have accepted the proposal of joint custody it would not have happened.

wow so little kabir has made JW life a miserable hell, and i just luv the guts of kabir wow what he has done to mighty JW, i just love him he is such a sweety.

i just love my bani also that she has not surrendered to temptation but is really thinking about her own life and family of her own and a husband who loves her, i just luv this avataar of bani and wants her to be like this only.

hope that JW will realize his love for bani before bani falls for someone else or tarun comes back to take bani.

please continue soon and hope u will havd a great weekend.

swati

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simz99

@simz99

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#87

Another superb part Saby dear....and a great weekend treat. Thanks, hun 😃 😃
I must admit to feeling a flicker of sadistic pleasure at the arrogant in-control JW brought straight down to the Earth by a little tyke 😉 Kabir is truly his father's son 😆
Hope that Bani puts him out of his misery soon and accepts his proposal, the passion between them is so hot 😳 😳 😳 haila, its a great basis for a good marriage 😉
Have a great weekend and update soon.
love
Sims

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Radhika

@love is fire

Voyager

Posted: 18 years ago

#88

Awesome part Sabs!!! Awwww I just love your ff yaar!! It feels nice to read ff like this after how the actual show is going 😕

Anyways, loved the whole part!! the part where Bani tries to assure him with the gentle touches.... awwwwwwwwwww 😳

Rather intense scene on the couch! 😆 😆 😆 very nicely described!!!

Poor Jai he must be so desperate that he wants her to wake him up when she is ready for marriage!! 😆

Wonder what is gonna happen next!!

Update soon!! 😊

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Vishakha_Sakhi

@Vishakha_Sakhi

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 18 years ago

#89

Sabs that was fantabulous!! 😳
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Jai are you sure you can sleep for that longg? 😆
Loved the HOTD! 😆 😆
Do continue soon

V.

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GoodGoneWrong

@GoodGoneWrong

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 18 years ago

#90

fab update saby...love it...absolutely...

I think Jai needs to do some rethinking....and instead of pouncing on the girl at every opporutnity he gets...he should reconsider...a little wooing will go a long way...

BTW...the scene where he wishes her good morning and kisses her...darn I could feel it as if I were in her place...it was too sexy...loved it...

Rivs