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kubare thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago

Awww....Saby dalring ,

To good. Loved the whole Kabir and Bani conversation๐Ÿ˜† And trhe last line was the best by him๐Ÿ˜†

Our Jai is one pressitant Bull dog as you said. Love him and love Bani more, and love Kabir the best.๐Ÿ˜†

Can't wait to read what happens next.๐Ÿ˜†

Love

Krishna

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Posted: 18 years ago
awwwwwww poor jai he must be knackered! hmmm maybe i could baby-sit kabir for them adn jai can carry on persuadign bani to marry him!hehehehe! that was a wicked part im glad bani is sticking to her decision and not givnin in nthat easily..as for jai his last line...bechara sumthign tells me he is gonna be sleeping for a very long time! pls cont soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
Hi Jaan,

Sorry, I didn't put my comments sooner, genuinely forgot :-(

Wow, poor JW, exhausted and losing in front of Bani's stubborn pride.

The couch was sizzling.... ๐Ÿ˜ณ I guess he should succumb and say the dreaded three words!! ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰

I like your writing, the flow is fast paced and extremely good!
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Sheena_Row

Hi Jaan,

Sorry, I didn't put my comments sooner, genuinely forgot :-(

koi baat nahin yaar..............ho jata hain

Wow, poor JW, exhausted and losing in front of Bani's stubborn pride.

i wouldn't call it pride............she has a right to be happy for the right reasons, she has her dreams too.................why should she take chances and give up on it when he has told her outright that he does not love her and he wants no more kids.................it's his pride and stubborness not hers.

The couch was sizzling.... ๐Ÿ˜ณ I guess he should succumb and say the dreaded three words!! ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰

yeah............too bad his loss ๐Ÿ˜†

I like your writing, the flow is fast paced and extremely good!

coming from u, i take that as a big compliment.............thank u.

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Posted: 18 years ago
Sabs, your chap doesn't give up does he? so he intends to sleep his life away on Bani's couch? ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† . No problem, that way Bani can indirect custody of Kabir ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† . It was so sad, he didn't want to have kids with her should they marry. any woman would want to have kids with the man they love, that is how love grows ๐Ÿ˜ญ . He goes around in circles and comes right back to her. He is such a fool, can't see what's in front of his face, idiot kahin ka . Let's see what you are up to. Glad Bani took the initiative to correct Kabir in calling Jai Daddy instead of man or gunda ๐Ÿ˜† . great work ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘
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Posted: 18 years ago
omg!!!..wat a part ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ..jai is soooo desperate (not dat i mind ๐Ÿ˜‰ )pleeez get these 2 married before smthin wrong happens ๐Ÿ˜† ....loved the part..arrey yaaaaaaaar bani pleeeeeeez say yes ๐Ÿ˜† ..when the next update?
Edited by ag06 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

Aarz karti hun....memsaab.... now dont worry I know you dont live in Bihar... ๐Ÿ˜‰

Hum aise aashik hain jo gulab ko kamal bana denge,

Uski har adaa par ghazal bana denge,

Agar wo aa jayegi mere zindagi mein,

To Reliance ki kasam Bihar mein bhi Taj Mahal bana denge .... ๐Ÿ˜†

I'm still waiting and you know that very well... soooo..... ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Jojo

Edited by Jojo_han - 18 years ago
sabsj thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Jojo_han

Aarz karti hun....memsaab.... now dont worry I know you dont live in Bihar... ๐Ÿ˜‰

Hum aise aashik hain jo gulab ko kamal bana denge,

Uski har adaa par ghazal bana denge,

Agar wo aa jayegi mere zindagi mein,

To Reliance ki kasam Bihar mein bhi Taj Mahal bana denge .... ๐Ÿ˜†

I'm still waiting and you know that very well... soooo..... ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Jojo

๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ‘ how chweet, i don't know what to say...................thank u ๐Ÿ˜†

btw, what are u waiting for? am not really sure what u r referring to? ๐Ÿ˜•

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: sabsj

๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ‘ how chweet, i don't know what to say...................thank u ๐Ÿ˜†

btw, what are u waiting for? am not really sure what u r referring to? ๐Ÿ˜•

Kuch na kaho.... Kuch na kaho... your well come chweety.... ๐Ÿ˜‰

Ok here we go another one....

Agar tu is dile mein rehe kar bhi yeh dil ki baat naa jaani,

To hum kya kare balah siwaye siida point mein aane par,

UPDATE... ki baat kar rahii hun main.... The great Guruji..... ๐Ÿ˜†

Jojo

Edited by Jojo_han - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
Main aaaaaaaaa gayiiiiiiii.... ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†

FANTABOLOUS parts ๐Ÿ‘

Bani's confusion is so well depicted that its very very real....her emotions and her point of view has been put across very well ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘

I loved the way she told JW ki what if I want a child of my own... and he ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ...koi jawaab nahi tha na uske paas ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก

But ye haar nahi maanta...this guy never gives up... laga hua hai with all his might...now if only he used his heart too...and a lil bit of brain to go with it....

I want to curse him left right and centre for being a jerk ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก
the damn fool is just being useless ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก
He'll keep his tabs on her...he'll feel jealous...he'll want her...sab kuch...but bewakoof will not admit love ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก

kahaan se pakad kar laaye the hum sab isko ๐Ÿ˜ก

Ok now that I'm done cursing him....
lets get to my FAV part... KABIR ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

He didn't let MAN sleep ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†
I'm sooooo proud of this kid.... ๐Ÿ˜ณ
go Man...bad Man...gunda Man...
the kid sure knows how to recognise people ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ‘

Ok now I'll get on my repititive track...
Bani n Kabir's interactions are my all time favourites ๐Ÿ‘
Its one of the best part of the ff....
the love they have for each other...the way they are connected... its beautifully writen...and can be felt...

I bet the boy would support his Mom no matter what... and thats the beauty of it... JW knows he will never have Kabir completely to himself... coz Mommy and Kabir come in a package...and for now he ain't getting either ๐Ÿ˜ก

This is for u ๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค—
U made my sunday...well u wrote it pehle...I just read it abhi ...anyways...u get what I meant na ๐Ÿ˜•

Please update soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon

Poo

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