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Posted: 18 years ago
Haila jaani!!! you updated and i didnt even know about it!😭😑.... how can you not tell me!! i was like omg! she updated!!!!! i see how it is!!πŸ˜•πŸ˜•πŸ˜•...... but anyways... i aint complaining cuz you updated!!!!

So my purpose here is to send a comment and complainπŸ€”!!..

anyways.. haila jaani wat a part!😳 it was just tooo good!!!!!!! and they almost made up!!πŸ‘ i was like aww!!!! i thought he would be all mad but he wasnt! phew!!!! that was a close call!!!!!


anyways jaani i cant wait for the next part!! please cont soon!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
wuhooooooooo Jai and Bani made up πŸ˜ƒ finally about time yaar.. aaur yeh kya sirf gajar ka halwa, mujhe batana tha na kheer mein bana ke bhej deti Jai ke liye 😳 Lovely part please continue soon.
Kripa.
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Posted: 18 years ago
Awwwwwww, absolutely loved JB patch up!!!! 😳 It was very sweet! 😳 Loved their make up too! 😳 Wonderful part, Navs! Loved it!!! Now please update soon cuz i'm really looking foward to the next part! 😳

Love,

Goddess
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Posted: 18 years ago
πŸ‘
gr8 part..
plz cont soon...
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Posted: 18 years ago
navs,
great part and thanx for making up and their milli-milli. hope jigs don't create any new problem. please continue soon.

swati
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Posted: 18 years ago
woo hoo update...woo hoo...woo hoo...woo hoo...lol...im telling u...im in love with that phrase... πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† loved...just LOVED the JANI make up...and haila...KISS n make up...oye...where is jw now...ill make him mad and then send him 100 cards that say "kiss n make up"... 😳 😳 😳 besharam kahin kaa...i know...baas bhai hum toh aaise hi hai... πŸ˜• lol...the keys...go RR...JB patch up aquad... πŸ‘ ...man for a sec i thought that jai would walk into the bathroom with bani still in the shower of just barely coming out...and then u know...well u know...U KNOW 😳 ...ok so i have an over active.creative imagination....sue me πŸ˜• no dont sue me...i need the $$$ for school... ...lol...cant wait for next update navu...
JAZ
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Posted: 18 years ago
That was an awesome update navs 😊 .
Now-a-days you give us a full update of only JB πŸ‘ 😳 , I am really enjoying it πŸ˜› .
Those cards were really cute and I really liked the way they both caught up 😳 πŸ˜ƒ .Haila..... the kiss, the dinner and finally they made up that was choo chwet.. 😳 😍 😳 .
JB confessing their love for each other was very emotional 😭 😭 😳 .
I hope their future is bright and it will shine πŸ‘ 😍 😳 .
Now I hope we can see where Bani truly belongs, or has JW shifted to Bani's apartment permanently 😳 πŸ˜† .
Hope you will update soon dear πŸ€—
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: nyzbabigyal

thanx guyz.. hope u enjoy this part 😳 😳 😳 i hope u dont' get bored 😭 😭 its almost 6 pages on MS

*~*~*JRJK*~*~*


bani went closing the door πŸ˜ƒ .. locking it..he has the keys, navu told me he has the keys as she decided to eat her dinner.. tired from all d cooking and even shopping need i mention dancing nah re i never get tred of dancin, cooking n shopin i hateπŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† .. she decided to go change and freshen up and enjoy dinner and then go to bed 😳 😳 .. as for jai walia πŸ˜• .. he won't come… right??you tryin to kid meπŸ˜† If he comes.. she'd 😳 😳 😳 be asleep.. which means resting.. 😳 😳 like he told her or had ordered her to.. bani smiled at that thought.. as she finished her last minute things.. fixing everything.. πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ the dinner table was set.. did she put candels, nah ye bhoolti bahut haieverything was set.. d only thing left was someone to eat.. d yummy food..intehan ho gayi intezaar ki πŸ˜ƒ 😳

as d music kept on playing on the radio.. bani made her way in her room.. heading towards the bathroom to freshen up.. 😳 😳 just then a car stopped outside her building..baharon phool barsao mera mehboob aya hai (btw cud u tell me who is mehboob, coz i dunno anyone by that name) as jai made his way outside.. he locked his car.. entering the building he made his way in d elevator.. going upstairs now if he was in the elevator then how come stairs😳 😳

bani stepped in d shower.. turning the shower on 😳 😳 he stood before bani's apartment door... πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ as he knocked on the door.. not once .. not twice πŸ€”πŸ€” πŸ€” .. um.. well he kept on knocking πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† .. but bani didn't open the door
JW: baniiii..jai baby u got th key use it, haila kya kya shikhana padta hai he stood frustrated 😑 😑 .. bani on the other hand.. enjoyin her shower... couldn't hear a single thing.. cuz d radio was on.. and d shower was on, was bani not on, haila i am awyas on in the shower, that is the only place i am allowed to sing jai continued to knock..oye ghanti bajaoπŸ˜† just then is cell rang

JW: hello hi baby
Rano: jiju aap di ke pahunchgaye 😳 😳
JW: haan
Rano: oh u met her?? πŸ˜ƒ nahin bell dhoond raha hoon
JW: no.. waiting for her to open the door
Rano: jijuuuuu.. kuch nahin ho sakta aap ka 😑 😑
JW: kya matlab 😑 😑 😑 matlab nothing can happen to uπŸ˜†navs theek translate kiya na, eng weak hai meri thodi.
Rano: we gave u d keys jiju.. open the door.. she's probably busy yeshe is.
JW: haan acha
confused jai walia hung up.. as he took d keys out of his pocket.. he unlocked d door would bani be mad.. that im entering witout permission but not my fault.. she wasn't opening the door haila kitna sharif hai re tu, main maar jaawan😳

jai made his way inside.. as he stepped in
JW: banii he whispered softly..chilao, ye phoos phoos kya kar rahe ho, she dint hear ur knock looking around.. and found no one in site ... now stepping in.. he closed the door behind him.. 😳 😳 😳 as he went in further.. he continued to look around for bani she had to be home.. d radio was on πŸ˜• πŸ˜• .. d dinner was also set.. just then he heard the shower but seeing bani's room door closed.. he decided not to enter and invade her privacy πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ baba bahut zayada shaif hai, i know one JW who never knocks, n dose'nt give a damn for privacy, u know him navsπŸ˜‰

JW: she's probably in d bathroom 😳 πŸ˜ƒ jai took a sigh of relief.. now knowing that bani was home.. he walked around.. bored..Jai main beedi jaloonπŸ˜‰ i mean bajaoon waiting for her to come outside 😳 😳 he made his way in the kitchen.. grabbing himself a drink..pass one buddy, wots itπŸ˜‰ tired and hungry and thirsty 😳 😳 😳 he listened to the music on the radio.. as a cute nice number played.. know which one, Thande Thande pani se nahana chahiye, nahaya jaye ya na jaye gana chahiye (my own compositionπŸ˜‰)πŸ˜† 😳 😳 😳 a little while later.. d shower turned off.. jai was so engrossed listening to the music on d radio.. he didn't hear a thing.. πŸ˜•

she put d bangles on.. as she checked herself in the mirror.. 😳 suddenly she heard the radio volume go louder she made her way towards the door slowly.. opening it a little πŸ˜‰ .. she peeked out.. to find jai in the kitchen.. just standin there.. lookin hubba hubba i love this handsome πŸ˜† drinkin some water.. i dont want water, i dont dilute my drinkπŸ˜†and enjoyin some music.. he looked tired and hungry bani leaned against the wall.. as she continued to stare at her hubby.. enjoyin d song on the radio.. ok now the song is, chup chup khade hozaroor koi baat hai, pehli mulakat hai ye pehli mulakat hai (not pehli tho)

bani continued to stand there staring at him.. suddenly tears welled up in her eyes..she didn't know y..dont worry iska ice cream gir gaya tha na but she didn't wanna hold 'em bacrona kabi nahin rona chahe toot jaye koi khilona 😭 😭 😭 she continued to let 'em flow.. as she saw jai making his way back inside the living room.. he walked around... bored.. bored.. waiting for bani.. bored jai lets do beedi pls yaarπŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† .. he passed by a table.. something caught his eye.. as he went bac to it.. there were about three.. four cards.. all cute.. yet funny.. he picked 'em all up.. as a smile appeared across his face.. looking at d cards.. 😳 πŸ˜ƒ

they all had one thing in common.. the words "im sorry" 😭 😭 .. jai smiled.. as he read d cards.. nothing had been written on them.. but four cards.. who for mehboob bhai ke liye hai


loved the cards navs, haila now i'll also fight wid him, i am gettin ideasπŸ˜†

bani wiped off her tears 😭 😭 😳 .. as jai went to put d cards down.. suddenly stopping midway.. as he heard d voice of a person 😳 .. he was waiting to see..since d morning i know baby, but abhitum is se mil lo, main yehahin hoon😳 😳 😳 or d one he had that lunch encounter with πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† as she stood behind him.. whispering in a low voice..
Bani: im sorry 😭 😭 jai turned bac.. looking at.. this beautiful women.. God sent...ye god bhi a kabhi kabhi galti kar hi dete hai just for him πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ wearing his favorite color on her 😳 😳 .. and the kangan he had gifted her.. jai stood there.. mesmorzied.. taking in her lovely image 😳 😳 as his eyes met hers πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ suddenly a concern appeared on his face πŸ˜ƒ 😳

JW: bani.. were u cryin?? bringing her gaze down 😭 😭
Bani: no as she let out another short whisper .. jai made his way towards her
JW: bani.. wat's wrong.. tum ro kyun rahi thi πŸ˜• wo kya hai na jai subah iski ice cream gir gayi thi, tumhe dekh kar bas itna si baat hai
Bani: nothing mr. walia.. i was just.. woh im sorry 😭 😭
JW: sorry.. bani.. relax.. i just wanted u to rest.. and u had only gone shopping 😳 πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜†
as he smiled tum itna jo muskura rahe ho kya gum hai jisko chupa rahe ho (i am here baby)πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ replying bac
Bani: nahin mr. walia..mera matlab.. us raat.. jo hua raat gayi baat gayi bani chod na 😭 😭
Bani: no mr. walia... let me just say wat i wanna say πŸ˜• jai took bani.. towards the couch.. oh these couches, my next ff ill be khissa ek couch kaπŸ˜†as they both seated them selves 😳 😳
Bani: mr. walia us din jo aap ne kaha.. im.. i miss u.. i wanna be wit u.. i.. but i.. haila JW ne kaha maine to nahin sunaπŸ˜†
JW: bani..
Bani: mr. walia.. i need😭 😭 I need Sexual Healing(navs marna mat yaar i cud not stop, its just asong, was lisnin to it y'day n just remembered so had put it, sorry)
JW: wait bani 😳 😳 let me say something
bani sat there.. tear eyed.. as jai took her hand in his .. as he started talking kuch tum bolo kuch hum bolen...... sumthin sumthin

JW: dekho bani.. i love you.. and i miss u.. and i want u back home chal chalen apne ghar (purified versionπŸ˜‰)😳 πŸ˜ƒ 😊 bani looked at jai.. continued to look at him 😳 😳 😳 as he went on
JW: bani.. i know.. i knew it then tooo.. i don't know wat had gotten into me... wit pia around in the same house..dont take her name jai😑, ow go wash ur mouth and then jigyasa.. i mean she's my sister yeah n wt a sis jai bani.. my only family.. i had.. how could i not believe her.. or have a little bit of faith in her 😭 😭 😭 bani continued to listen as he went on

JW: i believed u then.. i believe u now.. and i know u'd never do me wrong.. 😳 tears welled up in jai's eyes.. wait i'll get the hanky, i am also😭😭😭 cant take the hurt anymore, cant see u crying
JW: its just that i never thought jigyasa would lie to me like that 😭 😭 ... its not a joke bani.. and she's my sister.. my blood..i know Jai bloody sister😑 😭 😭 😭 everything she had said.. about u and that money.. and then those signed papers were there.. which made it worse.. d papers.. d check that u had signed 😭 😭 😭 but when u left.. i.. i lost everything bani 😭 😭 😭 bani cried.. along wit jai.. as she moved her hand.. wiping his tears 😭

JW: its time.. Time to move on.. but i can't move on with out u.. i need u by my side 😭 😭 😭 and i know it'll take time.. i need to win ur trust.. 😭 😭 😭
Bani: plz mr. walia
as she put her hands on his lips.. shutting him up πŸ˜• πŸ˜†
Bani: u have my trust.. u always did.. u always have had.. 😳 πŸ˜ƒ i.. i just don't wanna live alone anymore..jai main hoon na i .. i can't as bani burst into tears.. jai took her in a hug.. a tight hug 😭 😭 😭 haila😳

JW: shhhh bani.. plz.. don't cry.. i can't see u cry.. and how could u say.. ur alone huh..
as he kissed her forehead lightly.. taking her back in his arms.. 😳 😳
JW: aur waise bhi.. did u NOT see my suitcaseπŸ˜‰...u have a new roomate lMAO πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ bani looked at him πŸ˜• πŸ˜• as jai smiled.. wiping off her tears.. 😳 😳 hhhhmmmm roommate, ye kya hua
JW: u can blame ur sisters for that.. and then Tony their delivery boyπŸ˜• bani let out a laugh.. she knew only raashi/rano would do such a thing πŸ˜† .. bani rested her head on his shoulder.. as they sat there quietly 😳 😳 😳 .. nothing else needed to be said.. their tears.. their quietness had said it all.. they belonged together.. and she needed time and jai was ready to give her as much as time she needed 😳 😳 😳

JW: yesss bani wiped off her tears.. now moving bac
Bani: u know mr. walia.. being a roomate... one has responsibilities πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ .. this is not d walia mansion and there's no tony here
JW: oh really?? toh kya karna hoga mujhe
Bani: well.. helping
JW: with?? πŸ€”
Bani: cooking.. cleaning..
bani started counting down things on her fingers.. as jai looked at her smiling.. o use bani, u can keep counting, they will neavr get down to doing itπŸ˜†

JW: wait bani wait.. can i just help u finish up d dinner right now.. we'll talk about chores later.. im starving for whatπŸ˜‰ 😳 😳 😳 bani.. stared at him.. so much for helping. he's planning on finishing her food πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
Bani: i was gonna make this evening all romantic.. flowers and balloons but.. when i saw u on d street today.. and u looked mad.. so i took a taxi and came home
JW: u got scared???
Bani: not scared 😑 😑 😑
JW: right of course πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Bani: well u were giving evil looks.. so yes.. i did i love that look, alah maar dala looks
JW: evil looks and me??
they both continued to talk.. as they seated themselves on the dining table.. 😳 😳 they both ate.. talking.. enjoying.. both couldn't explain how they were feeling.. 😳 they didn't discuss it.. but they couldn't be happier.. both of 'em didn't know this would happen today but sumhow i knewπŸ˜‰

bani had planned a bit of something like this.. but not all of this.. but she was happy so no complaints 😳 they both ate dinner..
JW: bani who eats gajar ka halwa?? i do
Bani: i do 😑 😑
JW: y couldn't u make kheer 😭 😭 there was no milk, she sent Dipu, remember dipu the smart boy, yeah but dhoodh nahin mila
Bani: cuz this dinner's a treat to myself.. so my fav foods
JW: lekin phir bhi..
Bani: quit complaining.. or u won't get any halwa 😑 😑
they both continued their tiny argument.. as they finished dinner.. food was yummy.. they both ate.. whole heardtly 😳 😳 😳

bani picked up d dishes..
JW: should i help?? 😳 😳 😳
Bani: no no... u can help from tomorrow on πŸ˜‰ .. let me just clean up.. u go sit..
jai nodded.. yeah i new he wud do that, best trick in th book, first they say they r so tired, then ask sud i helpπŸ˜†going in d living room.. as he sat on the couch.. waiting for bani.. who finished up wit cleanin d dishes and wat not.. 😳 πŸ˜ƒ bani soon came and joined him.. as she sat in his arms.. they both sat on the couch lmao i hav to do khisa couch ka
JW: waise bani.. u look beautiful.. pink sari and kangan.. and ...
Bani: thank you 😳 😳
JW: waise bani..oye ye waise waise kya hai this is not how i wanted to make up
Bani: huh kyun??
JW: well i prefer this idea better


bani stared at him as he picked up a card.. that said "let's kiss and make up" always the best, dont hav to do much talkin, no explanation, coz then the arguments start againπŸ˜‰ oh the best idea is KNMU.πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ bani looked at him 😲 as jai winked at her ankh mare ladka ankh mare πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ he leaned in.. as he placed a kiss on her lips.. to which bani responded wit equal passion 😳 😳 😳 ahem ahem.. after a while..but why, i mean y after a while, chalo hoga koi starting prblm humin kya, hamari car main bhi hai, starting prblm πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

JW: so u were prepared for tonight πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰
Bani: well no.. i don't know.. i just missed u.. so wore ur fav color and ur gifted kangan 😳 😳 😳
JW: hmm.. waise i missed u too.. so i wore black πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
Bani: not funny..
JW: wat? i think i look handsome in black πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ now d i need to ayanthing, matlab........kya boloon..........black makes me speechless😳
Bani: really?
JW: well i get plenty of compliments πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ssshhhh jai dont tell her, right nvs
Bani: they're probably lying..now i hav no prblemin killing her, she just called us liars navs πŸ˜†
as bani whispered.. laughing.. jai just smiled at her

Bani: waise mr. walia.. im mad at u jai sat up.. as bani looked at him 😑
JW: kyun.. maine πŸ˜•
Bani: cuz of u.. i dropped my ice cream today
JW: kya?????????????
Bani: haan.. my ice cream 😭 😭 😭 see i told u, isi liye ro rahi thi, now u know jai, i never lie
JW: well im sorry bani.. i didn't mean for u to drop ur ice cream.. i'll make it up to ukasie 😳 😳
as he took her back in his arms.. they both continued to talk and eventually fell asleep on the couch.. navs you want me to believe this, u really think i believe this, nah no waysπŸ˜†in each other's arms 😳.. life was finally taking a turn πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ towards the future.. where they both moved on.. together.. step by step

πŸ˜‰

hope u guyz enjoyed 😳 😳 😳I loved it navs, it was so cute n romantic, just mind blowing.

tried my commentoes, sud not hav coz this was such a beatiful part but cud not stop myself, n had to it in 4/5 times as my net misbehaving.

Edited by sanam84 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
πŸ‘ woooooow luved dat part πŸ‘ ......yippppppee jb r back togeva 😳 ........pleazzzzz cont soon 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
i dont think i've been commenting on the last few parts!! am not sure why πŸ˜• πŸ˜•

well they were fanastic!! bani scared of JW!! well who wouldn't be?? especially with those killer looks he gives people 😳

last part was perfect! JB finally back together again!!! 😳 😳 😳 loved their re-union!! and i loved the whole new roommate conversation 😳

awesome updates πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
continue soon
Tanu

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