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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: cute1228

It has been like three days!!! Please update!!! So bored!!!

im about to update hun.. its a LONG part πŸ˜³πŸ˜‰ so hope u don't get bored
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thanx guyz.. hope u enjoy this part 😳 😳 😳 i hope u dont' get bored 😭 😭 its almost 6 pages on MS

*~*~*PART 53*~*~*


bani went closing the door πŸ˜ƒ .. locking it.. as she decided to eat her dinner.. tired from all d cooking and even shopping need i mention dancing πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† .. she decided to go change and freshen up and enjoy dinner and then go to bed 😳 😳 .. as for jai walia πŸ˜• .. he won't come… right?? If he comes.. she'd 😳 😳 😳 be asleep.. which means resting.. 😳 😳 like he told her or had ordered her to.. bani smiled at that thought.. as she finished her last minute things.. fixing everything.. πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ the dinner table was set.. everything was set.. d only thing left was someone to eat.. d yummy food.. πŸ˜ƒ 😳

as d music kept on playing on the radio.. bani made her way in her room.. heading towards the bathroom to freshen up.. 😳 😳 just then a car stopped outside her building.. as jai made his way outside.. he locked his car.. entering the building he made his way in d elevator.. going upstairs 😳 😳

bani stepped in d shower.. turning the shower on 😳 😳 he stood before bani's apartment door... πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ as he knocked on the door.. not once .. not twice πŸ€”πŸ€” πŸ€” .. um.. well he kept on knocking πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† .. but bani didn't open the door
JW: baniiii.. he stood frustrated 😑 😑 .. bani on the other hand.. enjoyin her shower... couldn't hear a single thing.. cuz d radio was on.. and d shower was on jai continued to knock.. just then is cell rang

JW: hello
Rano: jiju aap di ke pahunchgaye 😳 😳
JW: haan
Rano: oh u met her?? πŸ˜ƒ
JW: no.. waiting for her to open the door
Rano: jijuuuuu.. kuch nahin ho sakta aap ka 😑 😑
JW: kya matlab 😑 😑 😑
Rano: we gave u d keys jiju.. open the door.. she's probably busy
JW: haan acha
confused jai walia hung up.. as he took d keys out of his pocket.. he unlocked d door would bani be mad.. that im entering witout permission but not my fault.. she wasn't opening the door

jai made his way inside.. as he stepped in
JW: banii he whispered softly.. looking around.. and found no one in site ... now stepping in.. he closed the door behind him.. 😳 😳 😳 as he went in further.. he continued to look around for bani she had to be home.. d radio was on πŸ˜• πŸ˜• .. d dinner was also set.. just then he heard the shower but seeing bani's room door closed.. he decided not to enter and invade her privacy πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

JW: she's probably in d bathroom 😳 πŸ˜ƒ jai took a sigh of relief.. now knowing that bani was home.. he walked around.. bored.. waiting for her to come outside 😳 😳 he made his way in the kitchen.. grabbing himself a drink.. tired and hungry and thirsty 😳 😳 😳 he listened to the music on the radio.. as a cute nice number played.. 😳 😳 😳 a little while later.. d shower turned off.. jai was so engrossed listening to the music on d radio.. he didn't hear a thing.. πŸ˜•

bani stepped out of the bathroom..wearing a pink sari 😳 😳 😳 she made her way before her dresser.. combing her hair and wat not.. 😳 πŸ˜ƒ she looked at her cell.. a message.. kiska she picked up her cell... checking d sms πŸ˜ƒ .. it was from raashi.. she read it.. as a smile appeared on her face πŸ˜ƒ 😳 .. after reading the message.. bani put d phone back on the dresser.. 😳 😳 😳 as she put on her necklace.. bangles.. πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ bani opened a drawer.. as she took out d two bangles.. jai had gifted her πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ she looked at d bangles.. wit a smile.. and a bit of nervousness and excitement on her face... πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

she put d bangles on.. as she checked herself in the mirror.. 😳 suddenly she heard the radio volume go louder she made her way towards the door slowly.. opening it a little πŸ˜‰ .. she peeked out.. to find jai in the kitchen.. just standin there.. lookin hubba hubba handsome πŸ˜† drinkin some water.. and enjoyin some music.. he looked tired and hungry bani leaned against the wall.. as she continued to stare at her hubby.. enjoyin d song on the radio..

bani continued to stand there staring at him.. suddenly tears welled up in her eyes..she didn't know y.. but she didn't wanna hold 'em bac 😭 😭 😭 she continued to let 'em flow.. as she saw jai making his way back inside the living room.. he walked around... bored.. bored.. waiting for bani.. bored πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† .. he passed by a table.. something caught his eye.. as he went bac to it.. there were about three.. four cards.. all cute.. yet funny.. he picked 'em all up.. as a smile appeared across his face.. looking at d cards.. 😳 πŸ˜ƒ

they all had one thing in common.. the words "im sorry" 😭 😭 .. jai smiled.. as he read d cards.. nothing had been written on them.. but four cards.. who for



bani wiped off her tears 😭 😭 😳 .. as jai went to put d cards down.. suddenly stopping midway.. as he heard d voice of a person 😳 .. he was waiting to see..since d morning 😳 😳 😳 or d one he had that lunch encounter with πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† as she stood behind him.. whispering in a low voice..
Bani: im sorry 😭 😭 jai turned bac.. looking at.. this beautiful women.. God sent... just for him πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ wearing his favorite color on her 😳 😳 .. and the kangan he had gifted her.. jai stood there.. mesmorzied.. taking in her lovely image 😳 😳 as his eyes met hers πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ suddenly a concern appeared on his face πŸ˜ƒ 😳

JW: bani.. were u cryin?? bringing her gaze down 😭 😭
Bani: no as she let out another short whisper .. jai made his way towards her
JW: bani.. wat's wrong.. tum ro kyun rahi thi πŸ˜•
Bani: nothing mr. walia.. i was just.. woh im sorry 😭 😭
JW: sorry.. bani.. relax.. i just wanted u to rest.. and u had only gone shopping 😳 πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜†
as he smiled πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ replying bac
Bani: nahin mr. walia..mera matlab.. us raat.. jo hua 😭 😭
JW: bani.. wat r u πŸ˜•
suddenly his mind went bac to two nights ago.. and the fight they had had.. in d car 😭 😭 😭

JW: bani.. its
Bani: no mr. walia... let me just say wat i wanna say πŸ˜•
jai took bani.. towards the couch.. as they both seated them selves 😳 😳
Bani: mr. walia us din jo aap ne kaha.. im.. i miss u.. i wanna be wit u.. i.. but i..
JW: bani..
Bani: mr. walia.. i need😭 😭
JW: wait bani 😳 😳 let me say something
bani sat there.. tear eyed.. as jai took her hand in his .. as he started talking

JW: dekho bani.. i love you.. and i miss u.. and i want u back home 😳 πŸ˜ƒ 😊 bani looked at jai.. continued to look at him 😳 😳 😳 as he went on
JW: wateva happened.. the reason as to y u left that house in the first place.. i.. bani that time.. our relationship.. it was.. it was hard bani.. i just never thought u'd leave that house.. just like that.. witout saying anything 😭 😭 😭
Bani: mr. walia.. how could i not.. u.. i mean wat jigyasa aunty said.. 😭 😭 about me.. stealing money.. i would..

JW: bani.. i know.. i knew it then tooo.. i don't know wat had gotten into me... wit pia around in the same house.. and then jigyasa.. i mean she's my sister bani.. my only family.. i had.. how could i not believe her.. or have a little bit of faith in her 😭 😭 😭
bani continued to listen as he went on

JW: i believed u then.. i believe u now.. and i know u'd never do me wrong.. 😳 tears welled up in jai's eyes..
JW: its just that i never thought jigyasa would lie to me like that 😭 😭 ... its not a joke bani.. and she's my sister.. my blood.. 😭 😭 😭 everything she had said.. about u and that money.. and then those signed papers were there.. which made it worse.. d papers.. d check that u had signed 😭 😭 😭 but when u left.. i.. i lost everything bani 😭 😭 😭 bani cried.. along wit jai.. as she moved her hand.. wiping his tears 😭

JW: its time.. Time to move on.. but i can't move on with out u.. i need u by my side 😭 😭 😭 and i know it'll take time.. i need to win ur trust.. 😭 😭 😭
Bani: plz mr. walia
as she put her hands on his lips.. shutting him up πŸ˜• πŸ˜†
Bani: u have my trust.. u always did.. u always have had.. 😳 πŸ˜ƒ i.. i just don't wanna live alone anymore.. i .. i can't as bani burst into tears.. jai took her in a hug.. a tight hug 😭 😭 😭

JW: shhhh bani.. plz.. don't cry.. i can't see u cry.. and how could u say.. ur alone huh..
as he kissed her forehead lightly.. taking her back in his arms.. 😳 😳
JW: aur waise bhi.. did u NOT see my suitcaseπŸ˜‰...u have a new roomate πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ bani looked at him πŸ˜• πŸ˜• as jai smiled.. wiping off her tears.. 😳 😳
JW: u can blame ur sisters for that.. and then Tony their delivery boyπŸ˜• bani let out a laugh.. she knew only raashi/rano would do such a thing πŸ˜† .. bani rested her head on his shoulder.. as they sat there quietly 😳 😳 😳 .. nothing else needed to be said.. their tears.. their quietness had said it all.. they belonged together.. and she needed time and jai was ready to give her as much as time she needed 😳 😳 😳

Bani: waise mr. walia.. how'd u get inside??
JW: oh woh.. keys.. raashi..
as he took d keys out of his pocket.. bani reached for d keys.. as jai closed his hand.. makin a fist.. wit d keys inside 😳 😳 😳
Bani: heyyy
JW: wat?? these are mine now.. after all... i am ur new roomate
Bani: oh r u really??? πŸ˜•
JW: of course πŸ˜‰
Bani: really????

JW: yesss
bani wiped off her tears.. now moving bac
Bani: u know mr. walia.. being a roomate... one has responsibilities πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ .. this is not d walia mansion and there's no tony here
JW: oh really?? toh kya karna hoga mujhe
Bani: well.. helping
JW: with?? πŸ€”
Bani: cooking.. cleaning..
bani started counting down things on her fingers.. as jai looked at her smiling..

JW: wait bani wait.. can i just help u finish up d dinner right now.. we'll talk about chores later.. im starving 😳 😳 😳 bani.. stared at him.. so much for helping. he's planning on finishing her food πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
Bani: let me just heat up d food.. u wait as bani went in d kitchen.. jai got up following her..
JW: waise bani.. these sorry cards πŸ˜• πŸ˜•
Bani: oh those.. i had bought 'em to give u one.. but couldn't decide which one.. they all looked cute😳
bani continued to heat dinner as jai smiled.. jai helped her a little.. as bani went on

Bani: i was gonna make this evening all romantic.. flowers and balloons but.. when i saw u on d street today.. and u looked mad.. so i took a taxi and came home
JW: u got scared???
Bani: not scared 😑 😑 😑
JW: right of course πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Bani: well u were giving evil looks.. so yes.. i did
JW: evil looks and me??
they both continued to talk.. as they seated themselves on the dining table.. 😳 😳 they both ate.. talking.. enjoying.. both couldn't explain how they were feeling.. 😳 they didn't discuss it.. but they couldn't be happier.. both of 'em didn't know this would happen today

bani had planned a bit of something like this.. but not all of this.. but she was happy so no complaints 😳 they both ate dinner..
JW: bani who eats gajar ka halwa??
Bani: i do 😑 😑
JW: y couldn't u make kheer 😭 😭
Bani: cuz this dinner's a treat to myself.. so my fav foods
JW: lekin phir bhi..
Bani: quit complaining.. or u won't get any halwa 😑 😑
they both continued their tiny argument.. as they finished dinner.. food was yummy.. they both ate.. whole heardtly 😳 😳 😳

bani picked up d dishes..
JW: should i help?? 😳 😳 😳
Bani: no no... u can help from tomorrow on πŸ˜‰ .. let me just clean up.. u go sit..
jai nodded.. going in d living room.. as he sat on the couch.. waiting for bani.. who finished up wit cleanin d dishes and wat not.. 😳 πŸ˜ƒ bani soon came and joined him.. as she sat in his arms.. they both sat on the couch
JW: waise bani.. u look beautiful.. pink sari and kangan.. and ...
Bani: thank you 😳 😳
JW: waise bani.. this is not how i wanted to make up
Bani: huh kyun??
JW: well i prefer this idea better


bani stared at him as he picked up a card.. that said "let's kiss and make up" πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ bani looked at him 😲 as jai winked at her πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ he leaned in.. as he placed a kiss on her lips.. to which bani responded wit equal passion 😳 😳 😳 ahem ahem.. after a while.. πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

JW: so u were prepared for tonight πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰
Bani: well no.. i don't know.. i just missed u.. so wore ur fav color and ur gifted kangan 😳 😳 😳
JW: hmm.. waise i missed u too.. so i wore black πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
Bani: not funny..
JW: wat? i think i look handsome in black πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰
Bani: really?
JW: well i get plenty of compliments πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰
Bani: they're probably lying.. πŸ˜†
as bani whispered.. laughing.. jai just smiled at her

Bani: waise mr. walia.. im mad at u jai sat up.. as bani looked at him 😑
JW: kyun.. maine πŸ˜•
Bani: cuz of u.. i dropped my ice cream today
JW: kya?????????????
Bani: haan.. my ice cream 😭 😭 😭
JW: well im sorry bani.. i didn't mean for u to drop ur ice cream.. i'll make it up to u 😳 😳
as he took her back in his arms.. they both continued to talk and eventually fell asleep on the couch.. in each other's arms 😳.. life was finally taking a turn πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ towards the future.. where they both moved on.. together.. step by step

πŸ˜‰

hope u guyz enjoyed 😳 😳 😳
Edited by nyzbabigyal - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#93
hope u guyz enjoy... i tried 😳 😳 😳 jb patch up.. wellll πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 18 years ago
#94
Their back 2gether, eeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!! So cute!!! JB in the whole thin, yhea!!! I love this part!!! Really hot!!! Was not wat, I was think!!! Although now he might need it!!! Drinkin my sweet lassi drink, readin this ff!!! Wat a beautiful day!!!
Bein first I have the idea that one most write more!!! This is the most cutest thin every!!! I will now cry if dont get a husband like Jai!!! Really hottttttttt, carinnnnnnnnnnn, sweetttttttttt, n sexy!!! How nice he kisses n she does it back!!! Cont. soon!!!
Edited by cute1228 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow you updated 😊 😊
i've been in suspense for so long, i've been wanting to know what happens...
will comment later 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: :::pooja:::

wow you updated 😊 😊
i've been in suspense for so long, i've been wanting to know what happens...
will comment later 😊

yep yep.. finally updatedπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† been tryin to write for 2 days.. finally got time.. arey suspense.. kis baat ka.. πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 18 years ago
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as long as u don't fall asleep its fineπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
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Posted: 18 years ago
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navsy.....loved it...it was awesome...they finally kissed and made up...lol...
I am doing my little happy dance here...try to imagine...haha...

Loved it absolutely....i cant wait for what happens next...Rivs
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Great part Navs!!!
i love it!!!
that was really cute. first i thought that Jai would come when Bani's dancing but then when u made it look like that it was after she was done...
then i thought he would meet her in the shower or rather walk on her πŸ˜†
sorry my mind's not in the gutter but i thought it was pretty funny and.. πŸ˜†
but this part was truly wonderful...too cute!!!
love the make up part πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜› πŸ˜†
anyways please continue soon
rooj
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: nyzbabigyal

arey yaar.. batao.. woh camera ka kya karegaπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰


So, did u get wat I was thinkin, huh, πŸ˜†!!!

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