FF: U R My Sunshine: Updt Ch 20, pg 118 - Page 54

Originally posted by: Neetusxm

sabs...lovely update..

thanks neetu

oh my bani is such a wreck.. 😭 but jai helped her wen she needed someone the most for that thanks... yaar its hard to see my cuddles as 'BAD MAN' (glushan grover style 😆 )

😆😆aur koi nahin mila sivay gulshan grover ke

when will he except her yaar..he likes her...he needs to get over his ex soon...

yes he does

can i please have a short bani kabir reunion..poor them yaar ...

done

cont soon

neetu

Originally posted by: Cordelia

i know i'm supposed to be fainting and all, but i can't help shuddering too... sabs this is possibly one of the darkest scenes you have ever written, i am in absolute awe!! 👏

thanks dear, i take that as a compliment

bani's sleeping pills, jai's disgust but instinctive protection of her... quite obviously a regular occurence for him!! him sobering her up and that final paragraph... please saby i cant take much more, stop making me so upset!! 😭 😭 😭

sorry sweetie, will bring on a lot of sunshine soon

ab bhi keh rahi hoon, we need to re-evaluate this guru-cheli equation!!! 👏

na re, never

Originally posted by: sanam84

Saby i am spechless.....ok wait i can type i dont need to talk. 😆

yeh kya yaar, is this word in fashion 😆 jissi dekho kehta hain i am speechless. itna bhi bura nahin likha maine

i was like Haila haila ye kya ho raha hai ye kya ho raha hai, I hated Jai for fraction of a second, yep yep I did, I thot nahhiinnn jai ye nahin kar sakta, she is not well cant u see damn it. Then my gut said Sam control he is a good guy, must be a reason. (i sarted thinking again) N now I know, my jai baby took care of her as a doc wud do with a patient. See my gut was right, it always is where JW is concerned that is y I cant dislike him, not even in ur FF where my baby gets bashed so often.

ok ok, took the hint, no more bashing 😆

Bani is really upset, well its absolutely understandable, she took sleeping pills, again absolutely understandable, I wud do worse in a situation like that.

yeah, me too

Ok now b4 I blabber more lemme just say it was awesome, the way u put it, only a brilliant writer like you cud do. Thanks Sabs for a wonderful FF.

thanks sam, for the lovely encouraging comments, i hope i live upto them

Originally posted by: damilola

😕 WHAT DO U MEAN UR GONNA MISS ME ??????
I AINT GOIN NOWHERE 😆 😆 IM HERE 2 STAY 😉

i know, i was only kidding

ok now about d story 😃
👏
it was so goodddd 👏 👏
im jst 😊 😊 so happy dat they've cleared up the misunderstandin 😕
and jai found out dat bani was not like his ex-wife 🤢

it was high time


😳 😳 😳 oohhhhhhohhhh and d shower ..... DAT WAS HOT!!!!!!!!!!

I tried 2 stay angry at jai buh i culdnt he is jst so 😳 😳 😳 adorable

in the shower u mean 😆

plz ctn soon and once again 👏
MASSIVE UPDATE 👏

thanks dear, will try and update soon

hugzz..........
damilola

Originally posted by: jnawaz

omg...im so late in commenting and reading...its been one h*ll of a weekend and one h*ll of a monday...wont get into the nitty gritty details...but to sum up...life sucks...i so needed your ff...it was like my escape for today...i really needed it...thanks shabbo...great update as usual...jai is getting on my last nerve...ok not going to ven out my personal anger on jai now... 😕 😕 update again soon yaar...
JAZ

no problem janoo, just take it easy. will try and update soon, till then u relax.

Originally posted by: xindian_baybeex

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honestly. I feel BAD for Bani, my poor baby
awww sweet of him to help, but he basically just stripped her 😆
aww both in the showerr 😉 im surprised he didn't do anything 😉 😉 But yeah ..Poor kid mann..lost evertything

hello what was he supposed to do in the shower 😆 u guys na, seriously one track mind.

Originally posted by: nikita28

Hi Sabsj,

That was a brilliant part. Poor Bani...for a second there she must have really thought that Jai was taking advantage of the state that she was in.....I'm sure he enjoyed it😆.

thanks nikita. yes bani was confused about his intentions 😆 and yes he did enjoy part of it

Please update soon, I need to know what he wants to talk to her about now...he's already wrecked her life!!!

will try and update soon

Nikita

Originally posted by: Miss_Diey

😭
i hate Jai to cause all this pain to Bani. How could he do such a thing, and be selfish. He could accept a conjoint guard.
He destroyed her life and dare to see her or try to talk with her.
I really don't know but i think in Bani shoes even if he's handsome in first i will think at the fact that he takes my life away so i will get him out of my home asap and my life.
I will hete him from the bottom of my heart. Just imagine you have only one paerson in your life and someone comes and get him away how will you react.
Si i still hate Jai, i think she should go visit Jai and ignore him and talk with him only for the visit and show him how much she hates him.
I'm sorry but i hate injustice even if it's a ff i know it happen in real life.
Excellent update really well written. 👏

thanks dear, am glad u enjoyed the read so far

Hope you will update soon dear. 😉

asap

Take care and please continue to pm me when you update thanks 😉

u too and i will pm you

Take care
Diey