FF: U R My Sunshine: Updt Ch 20, pg 118 - Page 56

Originally posted by: coolgurl_2005

Hey Sabs

that was one hell of part,just too good.jai is such duffer,he is so angry one minute and the sweetest creature the next,but still cant stop loving him.too good.the emotions of bani,protrayed so well.wonderfully written.just loved it.looking forward to the next part,cant wait.. 😊

thanks dear, am glad u liked the update. i posted another one already.

Haila Sabs...yeh kiya?
i mean i knew the proposal was coming but in such manner...shame on Jai..
this is not a way to talk to a lady Jai...
that last sentence Sabs...not good in Bani's part...why is he emotionally blackmailing her?
then again that is your specialty... 😆 😆 😆
anyways that was an awesome part!
i really loved all the details...but again less talking and more description want more dialogues, if you please...
anyways please update soon
rooj

PS: happy commenting! 😆

What a proposal...Jai has some guts...itna sab hone ke baad.. Loved Bani's response as well to him..You write wonderfully....waiting in anticipation for the next part.... 👏

My comments this time will be short cos my hands really shaking now so cant type much.

Back to the update

WOW, Astounding, astonishing, Amazing, remarkable,wonderful, incredible, startling, marvelous,Miraculous, beyond belief,phenomenal, extraordinary, mind blowing,mind boggling,staggering, unbelievable,confounding, impressive

okay my vocabulary is limited to just this! 😳

but ur update is this and much more!

I yet detest Jai, same level, not less not more.
he is a MCP and i man without heart.
A spineless creature

I mean common go get a nanny, you dont just marry someone!
and Dude that is no way to ask a girl to marry you, even if she wants to say a Yes, she wont!

Bani, Hats Off to this female...
Brilliant character sabs

again ( i am seriously tired of giving the same comments, can we have a not so brilliant update atleast once sabs???)

Brilliant potrayal of emotions, heart wrenching and seat gripping. Your writing keeps me hooked on to the edge till the last line and then takes a minute or two to gather ur senses back so as to write how u feel abt this update ( though i think anything said abt it is less!)

keep it up saby!

love u

Nautanki 😃

What an oaf.....a stupid, cold, insensitive CLOD 😡 This has to rank as one of the most appalling proposals ever...kya yaar Saby, Jai is one heck of a self centred, arrogant, pompous as* 😡 😡 😡 and I'd love to whip his a*se (mmmm...brings up interesting possibilities, that!☺️)
Shoot....focus Sim focus...where was I...kya yaar got distracted...bechari Bani ka paala kaise gadhe sa pada hai But I have full faith in her powers to reform this baboon and heat up the blood in his veins 😳 😉
Btw...my checklist is all ready...waiting to be used 😆
Super work hun...this is one hell of a hatke-ff....my alltime fav 😃 😃
love
Sims

Great part Saby 👏 👏 👏

But like others I also feel that Jai has really been so heartless. What a proposal! 😡 I was waiting for a heart-warming one.

Hope you post the next part soon.

Great updates.
liked it.
👏
plz cont. soon.

WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏
Just read both the parts.I LOVE my Jai 😳 😳 😳 .I am so happy he proposed Baani 😳 😳 😳 .My Kabir will now have his Mamma 😃 😃 😃 .
I am waiting for your next update.
Shiya