FF:The Foreign Self. Part V-D to VIII - Page 13

and the wait for confrontation is over..........
however we human are griddy
never satisfied with what we have and what we got...
always asking for more................
so the decision of writing update was excellent........
will hope that you will continue writing and we will satisfy you with comments.
Once again a master peice which include emossions of both
angry at a minute and next minute calm as river.
respecting the "please" (once she respected and left him alone, now he respected and leave her alone)

the ominious sweetness in his voice where her was nervous as well as confident.
the guesture of removing her shoes (their i see a mixed emossions he is angry at him self for falling for her and hopeing what he is thinking is wrong)

did i blabber too much.......
never mind............
that is the reson i can't write.........

once again my silly request as you already heard from every one also (did you actually guess that........Wow)
you are right again yes that is update please......

two things forgot to mention

-Bani is Sarswati ?

-Roshni has been informed of jai's arrival ?

pooja

armana....this was beautiful...it really makes me wonder how he is not recognizing her...
from the updates so far...they definitely have a link...the link she can see...the one that he can feel...but refuses to recognize...
he keeps remembering his angel...yet not willing to recognize her...

I am very much intrigued...and cannot wait for the next update....please conitue soon...am in love with ur writing....
Rivs

wow that was very nice ....fell bad 4 bani 😭 😭 very beutiful.... 👏

Can really feel Bani's pain....my heart hurt for her!! 😭 😭 😭 ....why is Jai so short-sighted??? Not looking beyond the immediate picture....well, hopefully, he will be able to put Roshni behind him now easily..what with Bani's thoughts to occupy his mind and heart!!!

Think that was a personal record for u - the quickness of that update!! May u keep beating your own records!!! No just kidding, some people are never satisfied and just want more, more, more. But u know what, u are going to have me going to hte library after so long - rekindled the love for good books.... 🤗

bt

Beautiful updates.
I don't understand Jai remember his angel....her memories are there why can't he recongnize her....Bani is so sad that he don't remember her...pained to see her like that.
plz cont. soon.

Armanaaaaaaaaaaaa!

I don't have words to say anything...............it was great........beautifully portrayed...........your'e great writer...........Did I tell you how eagerly I wait for your update?

👏

Plz update sooooooooooooon

After reading your last couple of updates, here are my insane ramblings :

We're never so vulnerable than when we trust someone - but paradoxically, if we cannot trust, neither can we find love or joy.

According to your JW because Bani was slightly believable, she's not believable at all?

I repeat, I still can't pass any judgements on ur Bani. But so far, I'm game for this very mature and beautiful love story.
Promise me Armana, that you are going to continue with this beautiful FF in the same leisure fashion. Don't rush. Even if i have to wait eons longer for another JB confrontation, so be it.
Awsome part(s).

Armana
I've run out of words to express how much I love your work. But what truly touched me today were the words from the song you used..Hallelujah. It is such a powerful ode to pain...broken dreams, broken hearts. Holds a very special significance for me and brought back many bittersweet memories.
As always will wait eagerly for the next part.
Sims

Armana, a great read as always. Made my Sunday morning. Love your song and poem selections as always. Please update soon.
Somali

Armana
just fabalous as well.beautifully written.just too good.loved it.the passion in the last part,is just unexplainable.beautifully written.looking forward to the next part,cant wait. 😊