Originally posted by: rivya
Okie...so I read...and wondered...why???? i knew that one was coming...and the answer is simple i love annoying you people and leaving at cliffhangers...after all i didn't earn the K in the kreatives for nothing๐
why do u do this...๐ก...the stupid kiss on the head...Bani being amma...and Jai being a duffer...i know im working on that...but see i need this for my story...
anyways...jaldi se jaldi move them on the right path...and u better know what that it...๐๐...I need results...oh trust me you will get the results soon...i need to start moving the story further...
okay now serious...it was really good...but why is Bani so slow and amma like...you should add more spunk to her character...maybe that is what it will take Jai to notice her...I dont know...๐๐๐i will rivs...but you will be left gaping with the kind of spunk she will come with later๐ so not only your Jai but others will notice her too๐๐๐
awesome part...take ur time with the next one..and yes school is more important..๐๐ thankoo thankoo...i def. will then...sike! i'll try my best to give the next part soon