InNoCeNcE (Part 16 Pg 56) its up - Page 13

LMAO that is the best fan fiction ever man i cannot belive i aint read it till now 😆


Firstly tonys got another indian name 🤣 only you could do that lol

Then the language especially sahils is tooo good 😆

The couples are soo cute 😳 😳

That vase inccident was funny then rano threatning the same to sahil 😆

keep it up I DEMAND A UPDATE!!

I need a break this made me sooo laugh🤣

Originally posted by: ridhijai

Great part.
loved it.
Bani the nonstop radio.....taking care of Jai...lovely.
so everyone is getting use to Bani and her nonstop talking.
Poor Tony god........that so funny.
plz cont. soon

Originally posted by: sxcdevil

😆 😆 😆 each tym tamreet was said i was in hytsterics! 🤣🤣🤣i LMAO! so sweet think bani shuld first find out why he chnaged his name to tony..she can start poractising her jasoosgiri! hehe.. i think u'll like the reason behind the name change hehe hhehehehe! i realised i didnt have to resort to any rashigiri for u to post this!LOL i knw! damn and theres only lyk one day left for me to do all the raashgigir that i want! that part was awesome...at the beg im sure jai thought that bani was the one he is meant to be protected from im glad u liked the part.. LOL yeh i was sure too.. 😆...i love ur bani shes so realistic...again reminds me fo a few ppl! i wanna knw hu she reminds u of!!!!! 😉lolz everytime she strats talkin jai should put in sum headphones block her out for a while she prolly wont even notice!LMAO! good idea.. ear muffs are in fashion this year! 😆 aawwwwwwwwwwww the bani and rano scence was so senti...reminds me of me n my sisi when i dnt see her for lyk days i really do miss her even though she annoys me 30 secs after i meet her!lolz! LMAO! im glad it wrked.. i was worried i never touched the issue sensitivly.. i dont have a sis u c.. and my bro is usually wiv his mates and wiv mum 😆 cuz of college and skool hours we hardly talk properly anymore.. so i thwt id that in 😉looks lyk love is defo in the air for sahil and rano..thank god the sahil in this is not the looser sahil we see in KS! LOL i liked Sahil.. so i madee him a goody in this FF 😆 so hu does bani go to meet...her mentally ill friend pia or raashi?!lolz only joking! LMAO! no Raashi or Pia in this FF [i tink] that was an awesome update and pls upsate soon! awww so sweet! 😳
take care
p.s hope thursday went fyn plus i dnt htink i nd to say it but u betta pm each tym u update cos i love ur ff! especially ur bani! pheeeeeeeeeew that was long! yeh thrus was fine.. i passed 😳 minus Genereal studies but then again hu passes htat 😆 k ill PM u wen ive updated.. 😳

Originally posted by: InTheZone123

tarmeeeeeeeeeet to tony, that is so funny 😆

i love this bani, shes so carefree and doesnt cry all the time and i wonder where she goes at 2:30,
update soon, great part

Originally posted by: janu_2006

gr8 part 👏
n bani is completely funny man caling tony in his real name makes me laugh 😆
cont. soon

Originally posted by: amiee

very good part pls cont soon i want to know where does bani go at 2:30

Originally posted by: sabye

awsome yaar. Where does bani go? ❓

Originally posted by: frndsnstrngers

hey henna
ur ff mst say is raelly funny
Banis character is quite diffrnt frm onscrn bt mst say is really gd..........i lov ur Jai.......wud lov 2 c more fnny mmmnts..........n tarmeet...if destructives get 2 kno thsi tey wud surely steal ur idea
debolina