InNoCeNcE (Part 16 Pg 56) its up

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey

I thawt id start a FF, i knw there a debate on about FFs at the moment.. if this is locked i wont mind..

Characters

Bani: VERY chatty and will tell you things to your face

Jai: Quiet but will get his message across just as effectivly

Rano: Bani's Sister.. Strict and disaplined..

Sahil: A joka, carefree..

As they say opposites attract 😉

Innocence

Part 1

Grabbing her comb and combing her hair reciting her personal statement out allowed, She ran through the door, halting the Taxi walla..

'are chalo nah, mein bolt hi hoon, tero.. ha left, slowly im only small, now another left ha ha BAS! Right yah ape, acha ek building ajayega, I want to stop there' she ordered.

Climbing up the stairs and still reciting the statement, a young woman in her 20s made her way through the office.

'ajj b late! This time I wont get a job!' gathering the loose hair she used wat she thought was a clip and put her hair in a neat and elegant bun.

Sitting there watching the other applicant made her nervous, she got up and made her way towards the canteen to get herself a drink.

'NO I didn't want that' said a masculine voice, His Secretary behind him writing anything he says.

'Sir, we need you to sign this paper,' Looking at her then at the paper he went to his pocket and got out an expensive pen. Scribbling in a corner, swearing quite calmly he turned and asked his PA for a pen.

'Pen hain?'

'Nope sorry sir, the one im writing with is red, and you need to sign with a blue or black pen' quietly, Priya answered.

Looking around, he spotted a pen, pulling it from a lock of hair watching it descend like the closing scene of a theatrical show…

'EY! Watch it.. have you got no manners,' she turned around

'sorry who..'

'Shut up, I know your type of people, ladki nahin deki to tamasha shuru, I have come with a lot of respect here, if you continue I'll surly have u fired, mera clip kartein hain, phir sorry. If u knw u will have to say sorry to phir why do u do it?!' taking in a short breath and placing her cup to the side.

He stared as the perfect size 6 figure storm off into the waiting area. 'Sir signi..' the SECRETARY called again.

Sitting back at her spot twiddling her thumbs she sat again counting the tiles on the floor.

'25!!' A lady called, getting up for the second time that day, she straightened her clothes and walked gingerly yet confidently towards the cabin.

'Ah Cum in' Sed a masculine voice, 'Please sit down' Lookin through a file only back being shown,

'so' Turing around 'TUM!'

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Part 2 page 5

Thats part one.. tell me wat u think of it.. should i continue or leave it.. anything will do..

I dedicate this part to Sharan.. bless she told me to start on since december last year and finally i thwt mite aswell write one.. 😆

btw this is a short FF not many parts.. it depends if i get responses..

Henna x

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Posted: 18 years ago
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me first LMAO!!!!!!!!

YAAY party time🥳!!!!!!

Two month i waited and yay you posted on my birthday like you promised MWAH 🤗!!!!!

well what can i say apart from AWWWWWW so cute love Bani being so bossy kinda reminds me of someone and and Jai pulling the pen out of hair i love that description like theatre curtains cascading down or something very good, who is this useless secretary Jai better fire her soon i wanna see what happens when they start working together *HAILA* so cute, and don't think i didn't notice Mr Jai Walia checking out are Bani Dixit's figure naughty naughty😍, bless he can't help it!!!

overall fantastic, wonderful and brilliant sooooo worth waiting for, BUT one complaint its too short you know how much i write you ask me all the time when I'm updating well now is pay back time so MUAHAHAHA 😈!!!

UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!

love chick XXX🤗

Edited by shaz81 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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👏 👏 👏 awesome FF
so that was jai and bani right...

hmm lets see wat happens next
continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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me first LMAO!!!!!!!! 😆😆 thank u..

YAAY party time🥳!!!!!! Balle balle!!

Two month i waited and yay you posted on my birthday like you promised MWAH 🤗!!!!! How could i let me chick down.. never!!

well what can i say apart from AWWWWWW so cute love Bani being so bossy kinda reminds me of someone i wonder hu 😆and and Jai pulling the pen out of hair i love that description like theatre curtains cascading down or something very good Thank u.. i saw it on the bus 😆, who is this useless secretary Jai better fire her soon hmm..i wanna see what happens when they start working together *HAILA* so cute, and don't think i didn't notice Mr Jai Walia checking out are Bani Dixit's figure naughty naughty😍, bless he can't help it!!! LMAO 😆😆 i knw.. how naughty..

overall fantastic, wonderful and brilliant sooooo worth waiting for, BUT one complaint its too short you know how much i write you ask me all the time when I'm updating well now is pay back time so MUAHAHAHA 😈!!! I take every time i sed it needs to b longer 😆 evry single word!! 😆 oh o..

UPDATE SOON!!!!!!! Am on wednesadays from now on.. until i have my drivin lessons..

love chick XXX🤗

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Posted: 18 years ago
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👏 👏 👏 awesome FF thank you 😳
so that was jai and bani right... hmm i tried not tou use names in the beginnin.. but damn 😆

hmm lets see wat happens next Keep readin to read the twists.. Rano and Sahil in the next part aswell as these two 😉
continue soon will do...
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Posted: 18 years ago
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HEY!
That was a great start! Cant wait to see how the two ppl (most prob J and Bani rite?? 😉 ) react to one another!! hahha UpDate SOON!! 😃

Cheers,
Naz 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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HEY!
That was a great start! Cant wait to see how the two ppl (most prob Jai and Bani rite?? 😉 ) react to one another!! hahha UpDate SOON!! 😃

Cheers,
Naz 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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HEY! Hey!
That was a great start! Thank you 😳Cant wait to see how the two ppl (most prob J and Bani rite?? 😉 )and another couple yet to b seen react to one another!! hahha UpDate SOON!! 😃Will do. thanks once again

Cheers,
Naz 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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yeah finally u started ur fan-fic after all those predictions u made! wow the first part was really good.....bless whats gonna happen to poor bani!hehehe!lets hope she doesnt get tooo nervous in the interview and just start balabbing away! cant wait for the nest part!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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yeah finally u started ur fan-fic after all those predictions u made! LOL i think everyone is sayin that.. lol i never realised how many people paid attension to them they were never rite 😆wow the first part was really good Thank you 😳.....bless whats gonna happen to poor bani!hehehe!lets hope she doesnt get tooo nervous in the interview and just start balabbing away! cant wait for the nest part! 😆😆 she does chat a bit doesnt she.. well wait and watch..

thanks for your comments 😳

Henna x

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