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syeda nabeela

@sabye

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Posted: 18 years ago

#111

awsome yaar. Where does bani go? ❓

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Henna 786

@Henna 786

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Posted: 18 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: Neetusxm
very nice ff Thank u ...reminds me of kahol from k3g... Aww thats my inspiration!
tarmeet is just to funny lmao..cant stop laughing... i feel for my maths friend he doesnt knw ive used his name! 😆

and what colored water to water the plant..lol that was too funny as well... LOL aww thank u..

i was feeling so down and i read this and now im all 😃 im soo happy that ur smilin!! it takes less effort to smile and plus laffin and smilin makes u luk younger! 😆

plz i wud luv a pm wenever u update oki.. will add u on the list 😉

neetu Henna x

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debolina

@frndsnstrngers

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Posted: 18 years ago

#113

hey henna
ur ff mst say is raelly funny
Banis character is quite diffrnt frm onscrn bt mst say is really gd..........i lov ur Jai.......wud lov 2 c more fnny mmmnts..........n tarmeet...if destructives get 2 kno thsi tey wud surely steal ur idea
debolina

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Jazmin

@jnawaz

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Posted: 18 years ago

#114

heena my love...just read update...woudl post long commene but have to get back to studyig...have finals tomorrow...ill try and post a longer comment later...great update...loved it...as usual...oh and pls pm me too...thanks...
JAZ

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Marya

@Mazzy101

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Posted: 18 years ago

#115

ohh man that was funny 😆 and good! 😊 cant wait to c what hapens nxt! plz cont soon! 😊

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bugs_bunny

@bugs_bunny

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Posted: 18 years ago

#116

i love this bani who takes charge.. driving jai crazy..

and i have to say i LOVE the tony's name.. tarmeet... poor guy 😆🤣 😆 i laughed so much when i read it and bani insists on calling him by that... 😆

so.. where does bani go? maybe her mom is still alive but in a coma??
or she goes to visits kids at orphanges or something? 😕 i have no clue...
u're gonna tell us soon right..??

continue soon

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Mango Bhai!

@Lord-Mangeshwar

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Posted: 18 years ago

#117

I finally managed to read all the updates at once today! 😃

Well done Henna! You're writing style and story are both excellent! 👏

It's great the way you have put light hearted moments into the story to move it forward. Part 4 was brilliant! I loved the way Jai got whupped with a vase! 😆 Seriously, I actually laughed whilst I was reading that part!

Also the way, Bani keeps appearing and Jai's reaction everytime is brilliant ("'Stay away from me! I swear!' jai started to go deeper and deeper into his bed" was funny 🤣 ) ! The often comical communication between the two of them is simply brilliant - I actually like it better than in KS!

Of course, I knew even before I read the updates that Tony aka Tarmeeeeeeeeeeeeet was going to end up being the next biggest thing since Hrithik Roshan! 😆 If Tony was reads this FF, he'll be very proud of you!

Anyways, I hope you continue to make awesome updates like the ones that you've been making! Hopefully the KS writers will learn something about cool storylines from your FF! 😃

Keep up the great work! 👍🏼

God bless.

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Henna 786

@Henna 786

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Posted: 18 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: shaz81
TADA i'm back LMAO !!!!!!!!!!!!! LMAO! usin my wrds against me!
Sweetie this was so not boring but still i can't wait for next update, so UPDATE soon LOL!!!!!! LOL.. u sure.. we had a bet on remember.. u update urs 😉

MWAH!!!!! MWAH!!!!!!!!!
Chick XXX Sweetie xx

PS i found the most adorable Bani style earrings in clairez after i texted you, 😃 i was like grining from ear to ear, i'm gonna send you pic of them LOL, 😕 but let me find my digital camera first and i will post BIG comment on saturday i love being the last to comment LMAO!!!!!!!!

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sharan

@shaz81

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Posted: 18 years ago

#119

Originally posted by: Henna 786

Okay but i havent writtern word and i'm sure you will update before me LMAO!!!!!

Chick XXX

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Henna 786

@Henna 786

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Posted: 18 years ago

#120

A mini note:

I wont be able to update this week.. Me being MOTW an all 😆 have u seen the Q' and Tasks?! its outrageous LOL 😆

ill update a looooooooooooong part wen i can..

Sorry 😳

Henna x

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