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Posted: 18 years ago
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Loving this FF. I can guess from the title where this is going. The anticipation is rising daily. So is massi going to demand a pota?
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Posted: 18 years ago
#42
great part, but want to see JAi and Bani's storyline take off
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Posted: 18 years ago
#43
wow nice excellent part... now that Bani knows abt Jai Walia.... and Roshni what will her next step be......

would like to see more Jai and Bani scenes
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Posted: 18 years ago
#44
Hey Tin, I just read the last part. I was up to date but was not commenting. Superb FF just like the rest of yours. I love the pace at which the FF is moving. I am hoping for a little more Jai and Bani interaction. Continue soon.

Sobia
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Posted: 18 years ago
#45
Part Va

lekin Jai ka life kharab ho gaya...shaadi karne wala tha woh, Roshni Chopra ke saath, bahut bara industrialist ki ladki...lekin roshni ne kaha tumhara father aise the aur tum baap ke beta nehi honge iska keya guarantee ......usko chhor ke london chali gayi...
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Next day after breakfast, Bani was sitting at Anu's computer, checking her mail, writing to her friends, when there is a soft knock on the door…Tony, the butler enters…yeh Jai Sir, office jate waqt apke liye diya…

Bani looks at a firm handwriting, 'Bani please meet me at the office at 3 p.m….Jai Walia'…
So after 4 days the wait is finally over, thinks Bani, excited she starts to get dressed…nothing much to choose from..green and pink being her favourite colours, she chooses her pink churidar kameez, sleeveless but decent, she has seen Pia wear, much more deep cuts

Sharp at 3 p.m Bani presents herself in front of Mrs D'Silva…I have an appointment, she smiles at her….Yes, of course, my dear, he is waiting for you…this time Mrs D'Silva, takes her to a different door, the one next to his chambers, Bani is here Jai…she announces…Bani goes in, it's a discussion room for 6 to 8 people and she is surprised to find Aditya Uncle and another gentleman with him, Jai shows Bani the seat opposite to him i.e at the other end of the table…like his chambers, this is also very beautiful furnished…simple and bright…Mary, Jai turns to Mrs D'Silva, we will be busy and please ensure nobody disturbs us, Bani will you like to have some tea / coffee…Tea please…Bani replies…o.k. Mary, send in tea for us and nobody else…what is so secretive about Bani wonders….

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Bani sits straight, ready to hear what Jai Walia has in store for her. Jai looks straight to her …let me introduce with you, aditya whom you know of course and this is Tarun Sablok a very good friend of mine but he is also my lawyer, a very respectable man amongst his fellow peers…
Bani whatever we discuss in this room should remain confidential. By confidential, I mean other than we four, no fifth party should know, not even to your jija Pushkar, though he is otherwise my trusted confidant…last but not the least Bani….you may agree or disagree to whatever I say….incase you disagree, you will forget the matter…and if I am not mistaken you are an honourable person and I am sure you will maintain the confidentiality…

Bani sips her tea and looks at him…he waits for the service boy to go out of the room…clears his throat and starts….

Bani, the other day tumne puchha tha…if I sponsor you, in return what do I want from you….this is an estimated cost for studying 3 years in Harvard University…he passes a paper…Bani looks at the figures…which is broken up into tuition fees, lodging, boarding etc….Bani nods, yes, it matches hers….he waits for Bani's signal to proceed….Bani looks up…if I am not mistaken you are not willing to accept charity…

Bani: Oh Mr Walia, after my parent's death I have already got too many…mai yeh boj toh nehi kahungi…lekin yeh mere liye abh thora bhari hone laga hai…

JW: I appreciate and understand…Bani I also have a need…he looks at Bani…catches her eyes and looks directly into it…a need for an heir….he says…

Bani: Mai samjhi nehi….

JW: Tum pichle 4/5 din se ghar me ho…roz mere masi ka baate sunte ho….mera shaadi na karne se woh bahut parishaan hai...mujhe shaadi ka jaroorat abhi tak nehi hai….lekin mujhe apne waris chahiye…apna khoon….

Bani narrows her eyes: Iska mere scholarship ke saath keya sambandh hai…

JW: Mai tum se maangta hu woh waris….
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Posted: 18 years ago
#46
im the first to reply...that is effin crazyy...excited to read the rest... wow cool...i was so confused with the title and NOW i get it...cant wait to read the next part...plz update it soon...GOOD STUFF

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Posted: 18 years ago
#47
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wow.that was too good.very interesting,im looking forward to seeing wut bani reaction is going to be.just loved it.cant wait for the part. 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
#48
Why can't the JW of KS be like this one-keep it up
AP
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Posted: 18 years ago
#49
holy crap!!!! will she do it? will she murder him? 😆

im dying to find out!!!!

will make more comments later, once i can keep my eyes open lol!

anam
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Posted: 18 years ago
#50

OMG OMG OMG OMG

Tin that was wonderful and so shocking! I had a feeling that this is where you were heading but so soon...it was unexpected. I wonder what Bani will do. Hope she agrees after she has a little fit. Jai want a heir, that means * wink wink* *cough cough*😉. Can't wait for you next update!

Sobia

Edited by sobia.k - 18 years ago

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