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Posted: 18 years ago
Tin
This story has the feel of a screenplay written all over it-I have said this
b4 and I'll say it again, your writing style is not easy, it takes someone
very talented and someone who has experienced life, to write the way you
write. The emotions are there in the
characters psyche and even without any explanation given by the writer
the reader feels what the character is feeling. This is an achievement in
writing, in any art form. You are a true artist.
Keep it up. A splendid job.
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Posted: 18 years ago
No longer am i going to remain i silent reader
This fanfic is amazing and one of my favorites
Its so original and you are an amazing writer
Keep up the good work

Please let the two duffers know they love each other and dont have then seperate
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Posted: 18 years ago
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every time a read a part,i fall short of praise.you are just fabalous.wonderful part.the end of this part,really touched me.beautifully written.loved it.looking forward to Neev's birthday party,cant wait.

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Posted: 18 years ago
YOur Ff is great. I eagerly wait evry day for update & can't wait for Monday for next one. I bet there is a twist. I don't want JB to seperate.
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Posted: 18 years ago
Dear Friends,

Thank you for your wonderful comments. I am overwhelmed and in loss of words. Many of you said that this is one of your favourite FFs. I am glad it is. Your words encourage me to put an extra effort and I am happy that you are liking it.. I hope I can live upto your expectations for the forthcoming parts...love ...tin

Part XXV

As soon as Bani leaves the room, Jai gets up and follows her…He goes into his chamber and asks Mary not to disturb him and pours a drink for himself.

Aditya looked at Tarun: Tarun ek request hai, you will not file the papers without informing me…

Tarun: As you wish, isse keya faida mujhe samaj me nehi a rahe hai…

Aditya: Tumhe ayega bhi nehi because you are not married and you do not have a child…

Tarun shrugs, collects the papers and goes out…Aditya follows and asks Mary about Jai's whereabouts, Mary points his chamber but says he does not wants to be disturbed..Aditya goes in anyway…

Aditya: Jai tum yeh keya kar rahe ho…
Jai who was staring out of his window with a glass in his hand does not even turn around: Keya kar raha hu mai…

Aditya: Bani se divorce papers sign karwa rahe ho..
Jai turns: Tumhe galat faimi hui hai, aditya, divorce papers, Bani ne prepare karne ke liye kaha, maine nehi...
Aditya is momentarily taken aback but says: Theek hai, but she is keeping her side of her bargain, but tum toh usko rokh sakte ho, woh Neev ka ma hai…
Jai: Tum bhul rahe ho Aditya, she has kept her side of the bargain lekin abh meri bari hai…I have to keep my side and let her go…
Aditya is now very angry: Jai agar tumhare sine me koi dil hai, tum uske saath baath karoge, about your feelings uske baad you will come to an understanding, khayal rakhna woh Neev ki ma hai aur Neev ko agar bare hokar maloom chalega, I don't think he will forgive you…
Jai thinks for a while and looks into his eyes: Theek hai Aditya, I will speak to her, kaal ka din beeth jane do, I will definitely speak to her before she leaves, I promise you….
Aditya: Jai ek baath yaad rakhna, sab ke jindagi me aise khushiya bar bar nehi ateh aur jindagi business nehi hai….before Jai could reply anything otherwise, Aditya leaves…

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It is late that night, Jai walks into Walia Mansion, the whole evening he was fighting with himself, is it right to tell Bani about his feelings or should he ask Bani for hers. Bani has kept her part of bargain now it is upto him to fulfill his part, let her go, she should not feel that he is imposing himself on her, as Aditya said talk to her about your feeling but then why did she ask Tarun to draw up the papers without informing him, itna toh bol hi sakti thi woh, it would not have been bolt from the blue, today when tarun wanted to meet him, he thought it was usual business lekin, yeh keya, akhir humdono ek hi kamre me rehte hai…it was after a few pegs and late into the evening, Jai could get up to leave for Walia Mansion…

The Walia Mansion is decorated like a bride, tomorrow is the youngest member's first birthday, Jai enters the living room, its past 12 o'clock in the evening and the house is quiet, everybody is conserving their energy for tomorrow, his son's birthday but he hardly has any idea what is the arrangement like except that there is a Puja in the morning, Jai goes upto his room, and through the interconnecting door into the nursery to see Neev, must have gone to bed, poor guy had to miss out on his evening ride today, but I will make it up tomorrow, stands next to cot, but where is Neev? Looks towards the reclining chair where Bani normally sits to give him his feed, that too is empty…Jai retreats to his room, on his way out, his eyes fall on his bed, in the low light he could see Bani lying on her back with Neev on her chest, both in deep sleep….Jai goes and stands in front of the bed….many people say that Neev is his father's son, his gait, his structure his nose but there is no doubt he is also very much Bani's son. When he plays with him, sometimes he feels that he is looking into Bani's eyes and not into Neev's. His laughter, his anger and even when he cries, he looks like Bani. Jai takes out his coat, removes his scarf, loosens his shirt….and then climbs into the bed to put his head next to Neev's, Bani, even in her sleep encircles them with her arms and kisses their heads.

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Posted: 18 years ago
absolutly lovely!!!!👏 👏last scene was sooo sweet!!! but waaayyyy toooo short yaar!!!!!
Edited by aNsHu_tEjPaL - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

awesome part
I can't wait for next update
pls cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey's hows it goin?? anyways tintiny ive always been a silent observer but that was effin good...i love ur ff...i look forward to it...even during my exams...sometimes i like to read all the parts over and over agian....make the updates longer hehehe...i totally agree with u im being selfish but i love ur ff its so different and unique in its own way...just keep doing wat ur doing...BECAUSE UR AWESOME AT IT...hehe more updates plzzz
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Posted: 18 years ago
last scene was absolutely lovely... can't express my fellings... CAN WE PLEASE GET MORE of this type....

You are awesome..!!!!\
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Posted: 18 years ago
Awesome update....but too short
last scene was just awwwwwwwwww.
plz can we have one more update

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