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Vanita

@*Guli*

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Posted: 18 years ago

#511

oh man poor jai!!! he's all going everywhere with her!!!!!!

poor dude! 😆

please cont soon dear! 😛

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@xxainy

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Posted: 18 years ago

#512

yeah!!! u finally update can't wait to read the other 2 parts but don't worry i will be pacient this time since u have updated but that dosen't mean that u forget anyways....
bechara .. Jai following bani like a dog or a driver 😛 😊 but what he did to bani wasn't fair either lets see what happens nexts don't keep us waiting to long
love ya

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Urooj

@rooj-i

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Posted: 18 years ago

#513

Great part Raania!!!
it was really funny!!!
i really thought that Jai toh ab kam se giyaa...
ji bachu aurat ya ladki ko kabhi nahi intazaar karate...aur yeh nateejah hota hai iss intazaar ka... 😆
par bechara jai...
Please continue soon
Rooj

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Krishna

@kubare

Sparkler

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Posted: 18 years ago

#514

Raania darling,

Ah! at last you updated dear.😃

Such a cute and lovely part dear, and Jai deserved everything she dished out to him too.😆

Cant wait for the next part from you soon.😃😉

Love

Krishna

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Niroo

@Niroo

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Posted: 18 years ago

#515

hey rani di
that part was really funny.

jai sitting with bani
to get her nails done..
that is like something too see..

please please please
continue soon...

thanks
❤️niralixxx

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preet

@preet_2010

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Posted: 18 years ago

#516

Raania

fabalous part.he stood her up,but she got back at him really well.she is just so cute,i totally adore her.very sweet and funny.cant wait for the next part,eagerly waiting. 😳 😳
😊

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Raania

@Raania

Voyager

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Posted: 18 years ago

#517

as promised 😃

Part B

Aise hi khel khel main kab Bani Jai ki dhulan bangayi kuch khabar hi nahi hua. Wakil uncle gave her away as his daughter and did the kaniya dan for her. Sitting in her little apartment for the last time Bani holding onto her family pic and crying silently.

Jai's limo was going to be downstairs any minute to pick her and her final set of belongings with her. Caressing her mum and dads picture Bani sighed: oh papa I wish aap hoteh…sabhine kaha I was such a beautiful bride yesterday. Crying and laughing at the sametime: aur patah hai didi …starring at her mehendi clad hands that were a dark shade of maroon rather than orange that just looked so beautiful…wiping her cheek…: logo ne kaha that mera dhulah bohoth chatah hai mujhe isiliye mehendi ka rang itna khoobsurat hai….aur ghane hai…

Hugging the frame to herself as she leaned back on her bed: but u know I miss you people…I miss you very much. Her jewellery making all the beautiful noises and her ghoonghat still in place yet falling back with her head lying on the pillow now…tonight is their wedding reception night …the wedding wasn't such a big affair just immediate family but the reception….its going to be one of the biggest events in Mumbai till date and people from all over the state were going to be there…even out of country…Jai Walia was a big man in the business world..and she was his wife now! Oh God!

The honking began, Jai was here, to pick his dhulan up. Jai couldn't contain his excitement…he couldn't wait to show her off to the entire world. Yup the most eligible bachelor has finaly tied the knot and is not regretting it at all. Getting of the Limo to go receive Bani talking to his men to make sure to get all the pic frames around the house and all her belongings. He didn't want her to feel she was going to a new place but rather to start a new life together with someone. Someone special! Smling to himself he ran the stairs two at a time his heart racing faster than his steps would allow. His sherwani was heavy but who cared he was a married man now, and that feeling couldn't beat any other!

Entering the hallway in the apartment Jai stood rooted to his spot. Clad in a lavender and silver ghagra Bani stood elegantly sorting her luggage out to the helpers he had sent. Her silver chunri on her head being a burden as she made faces to clear it off and her bindi a reflection on his face right now. Bani looked up as she straightened her bindi in the middle of her forehead smiling as Jai gaze caught hers. He was clad in a silver sherwani with matching lavender around his neck to match her outfit. Never had she seen him so relaxed and looking so handsome. Yes she had to admit her husband was a very handsome man. Her husband as she sighed inwardly…she was a married woman! Though most said he was lucky Bani in her heart knew she was the lucky one. He was nothing but caring, considerate, patient and a whole lot more with her till todate and God knows how much she appreciated that. The only other person who could ever do that was her sister and well God had already taken her away from Bani. Jai was like a miracle sent to her by her family up above!

Bani: kya hai, meri madat karo na looking at him, the way he was starring was making her all dizzy and she needed some distraction.

Jai clearing his throat..: aahem yeah ha chalo kya kya lejana hai??...ever since yesterday he felt a feeling of possession towards her…as if he could look at her forever and ever..and whenever he thought of tonight he would get goosebumps, God his waited long. They were leaving for Zambia (Africa) tonight…..Jai had secretly found out from Raashi that she alwys wanted to go there…and Jai had booked the perfect place for their honeymoon, they were flying out after the reception party. But till than control Jai…control!

Bani knew she was being snappy but what more could she do….she didn't know why she was feeling uneasy and well on edge. After that embarrassing moment with Jai she had made sure to find out how the hell a woman gets pregnant. First she had killed Raashi, oh well she was close to murdering her and than made her tell which she know regrets. All Raashi basically did is rent a few movies and gave it to her, God knows how thankful she was to see it alone. Agar koi hotah Raashi for that matter, meh toh sharam ke mare mar jati. She just couldn't imagine her and Jai ..and well..oh leave it Bani.

As they both kneeled down to pick the same bag, the bag that she was taking for her honeymoon, Jai held her hands (his on top of hers) and instead of pulling it back he looked up still keeling the same way. Bani didn't look up starring at his bronze hands on her creamy ones. They were so strong and so so…words were lost, and she was in those hands now!

Jai starred at those beautiful rosy lips done with lipstick to perfection, those lowered eyelashes, eye lids done beautifully with the eyeliner and makeup. The makeup didn't do justice to Bani but rather Bani did justice to the makeup. Her bangles shaking as she shifted from one leg to the other.

Bani: umm Jai..woh …mera haath

Jai: mere haath meh hai Bani! Smiling wanting her to look, to see what was all happening behind those beautiful eyelashes.

Bani: woh bag…neeche limo….woh party…masi intezar

Jai: smiling futher kabse yeh change…madam is actually lost for words…hmm Jai lagta hai tera asar horaha hai: one condition

Bani: kya

Jai; ek baar mujhe dheko na

Bani: looking up and gazing down again…pulling her hands…choro

Jai: dhekne ko kaha….churane ko nahi

Bani looked up this time Jai held her gaze….

Jai: smilng….and starring back at her!

"Hasrat hai sirf unhe pane ki, aur koi khwaahish nahi is deewane ki. Shikwa mujhe unse nahi, khuda se hai, kya zarurat thi unhe itna khoobsurat banana ki"

Bani smilng: Jai woh....blushing prefusely

Jai letting her go…: chale!

At the party:

jai entered with a huge grin over his face pulling along Bani close by to lead her at the main centre front of the function. With cameras clicking away and live shoot of the entire function broadcasting thruout Mumbai, but who cared, Jai had the most beautiful, most gorgeous thing that ever happened to him. Holding her close to him as he led her across the many inquisite eyes

Bani followed jai looking only at him. She wasnt aware of the people looking or questioning or cameras clicking ...all she could feel was the strong presence of this gorgeous man on her side now her husband.

Jai: its okay ....main hoon na

Bani: held on this arm tighter pulling it close to her chest wanting to hide in the huge frame of his body but his words felt so assuring.

While Jai acknowledged the crowd Bani looked at him only memserised in him......all she could here see was him. Yeah kya horaha hai mujhe, why am i feeling this way? Why was he looking do damn hot and sexy tonight. Oh stop she screamed in her head, stop before u loose it.

Jai: now if you would excuse me i have a beautiful gorgeous wife that i want to dance with.

Kuch Mere Di Ne kaha

Kuch Tere Dil Ne Kaha

Ab Hum kya kare kya sune

Jab dil batein karne lage............

jai: see Bani even the DJ knows what my heart is saying

Bani her head laying on his shoulder : hmmm

JaI: Bani why did u say yes to me

Bani: why do u want to know??

Jai: pulling her close, Bani ....hinting to her that he didnt have any shame as to what he was capable of right here right now

Bani: Jai kya kar rahe ho...choro na....

Jai: well

Bani: because u asked me to

Jai making a face .....a disspointing look yet pulling her closer: really Mrs Walia

Bani: laughing now as he was tickling her neck with his mouth: Jai stop it....

Jai: stop and after marriage....are you mad.....no way...so any insight on how to get pregnant ....Jai whispering her in her ear

Bani: ummm mujhe bhook lagi hai

Jai: yaar yeh kahana mera souten hai....jaab bhi kuch interesting kartah hu yeh beech meh kaise ajata hai

Bani laughing when a reporter with a drink approached both of them ...Jai was leading Bani to the food area

Reporter: So Miss Dixit...oops sorry Mrs Walia..must feel good

Jai wanting to ignore the reporter looking for Adititya or Ranveer someone...and Bani wanting to ignore the man cause he seemed to know who she is or rather was

Bani; Jai lets go...

Jai: yeh baby

Reporter: wait Mrs Walia...how does it feel to have everything back??

Jai: excuse me? scared out of his life.....what the hell....

Bani; everything back...lookin at Jai and that to the reporter......what do u mean

Jai spotting Adi at the right moment...hinting for help as Adi approaching them

Adi: oh there u are...common guys photographer intezar kar raha hai...looking at the reporter, excuse me...no futher questions

Bani: magar?? looking confused

Jai: common honey...his heart beating like crazy and his mind frantic.....yet laughing and leading Bani along........leaning back and whispering to Adi: find out who the hell he was and what the hell was he doing here....and u know what i mean Adi

Bani; looking back...more confused...yet waiting for Jai: kya hua

Jai: kuch nahi baby....ready for tonight kisisng her cheek........as Bani blushing and smiling all red at the sametime.

😳 hope you like it 😳

Edited by Raania - 18 years ago

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khushboo2006

@khushboo2006

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#518

I loved it............it beutifully penned............JW is scared now if the truth would comeout...😊.....waiting for what is going to happen in Zambia😉😉

Plz continue soon ........and remember tomorrow is weekend....so don't keep us waiting until Monday....plz Diiiiiii

Edited by khushboo2006 - 18 years ago

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GoodGoneWrong

@GoodGoneWrong

Sparkler

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Posted: 18 years ago

#519

loved it rani...am finally caught up...ohh...I am so ready for tonight...jaldi aaajaye to acha hai...
Rivs

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preet

@preet_2010

Rocker

Posted: 18 years ago

#520

Raania

OMG OMG OMG.they are married,so excited.bani talking to the picture was so touching.she is finally jai's so sweet and cute.that was just beautiful.cant wait for their honeymoon and bani's reaction to where he is going to take her.just loved it.too good.eagerly waiting for the next part. 😊

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