Rhistey Updtd 05/22_Prt 34 35 &36 Pg 95

Part 1 pg 1

Part 2, 3 & 4 Pg 4

Part 5 Pg 5

Part 6 Pg 7

Part 7 Pg 9

Part 8 & 9 Pg 13

Part 10 Pg 16

Part 11 Pg 19

Part 12 Pg 20

Part 13 Pg 29

Part 14 Pg 33

Part 15 Pg 37

Part 16 Pg 40

Part 17 Pg 43

Part 18 Pg 46

Part 19 Pg 50

Part 20 Pg 54

Part 21 Pg 58

Part 22 Pg 60

Part 23 A Pg 66

Part 23 B Pg 69

Part 24 Pg 73

Part 25 Pg 77

Part 26 Pg 80

Part 27 Pg 84

Part 28 Pg 87

Part 29 Pg 89

Part 30, 31, 32 & 33 Pg 93

Part 34, 35 & 36 Pg 95

**********************************

Hi Friends.....

My hands were scratching to write...so here i am with my new piece. Hope u enjoy it as much as i loved writing it.

Part 1 - Jab rhistey toot teh hai toh bohouth dard hotah hai...woh bhi kismat ke haath

Acha beta chalte hai…apna kheyal rhakna….."jee" was all she could utter…her whole world had turned upside down…..looking at the pictures in the middle of the hallway…garlands around them and a small diya lit infront…..….a sob caught in her throat…hey bhagwan meh aab kya karu??? .she couldn't believe her whole family had gone in a second just like that…closing her eyes she still couldn't get rid or the tremor …..the feeling….the feeling of being lost in this big world all alone…..how could that be…she was what a mere 17 and now she didn't have nobody…..

Seated on the edge of the window…with only Ramsey, their butler busy in tidying up everything……she just didn't have the energy to do anything…..13 days had past all the rituals done and gone with but the feeling still remained…sabh kuch kitna acha tha…..normal tha…and now…what was she going to do in this big house….this big estate and the factories…….her father was a successful industrialist….specialising in the tea leaves industry..the multi billion earner for Ceylon….

It was as if yesterday….

Rano and her were really excited to be coming home for Diwali….London meh parahi karne ke bawajud they loved to get together with mum and dad to celebrate this joyous occasion…Rano was three years her senior and a great sister in every respect…she was in her final year at the Oxford University and Bani her final year in high school. Because their father travelled a lot and mum followed ….. after high school Rano took Bani with her.

She had some last minute things to do at school so she was going to fly out the day before diwali and Rano a week early…it had been all arranged…..she had packed everything …gift for mum, gift for dad and for Rano ….all ready to go when the dreadful call had come…….without knowing what to do she had called Wakil uncle with whom BAni had come to India – Ceylon …only to find 3 most precious people she loved dead. It was a nightmare…

Nahiiiiiiii she had screamed…dropping everything she had run to their bodies laying in the room….so white so dead….the room of the hospital…we tired said the doctor but his voice was faint…….im so sorry Miss Dixit…she had heard someone say……followed by a "poor child all alone"..it had tored her very soul…

Bani couldn't stop screaming: papaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa mamamaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa Ranoooooooooooooo ………..nahi…………… papa utho dheko naa meh diwali par hi ai hu…papa utho nah…running like crazy from one to the other….she was shaking them vigorously…

Didi Didi utho nah….wiping her tears….…main main sare homework karugi…I promise…tears were flowing and she couldn't see…utho na didi…meh badmasi nahi karugi…..touching her middle of her neck taking an oath…I promise did meh sari kaam sikhugi….shaking Rano's dead frame…utho na didi please……please didi….

Wakil uncle was trying to hold her but she was out of control…hysterical……papa …papa dheko main aapke liye latest laptop li hu…dheko nah…woh naya system ap chate the main saag li hu…papa papa

She had fallen on the chest of her father and cried and cried for what seemed like hours when she had collapsed……

A chill ran thru her as the cold air passed…..the only remains she had was their memories….bringing her legs close to her she bent her head on them and cried…..tears pained her eyes….red and swollen but nothing could compensate for the loss she had incurred

Ramsey: madam aapse wakil ….Mr Shom Sir milne aye hai….

Bani: hmmmm meh ati hu

Walking like a zombie she entered the family room where wakil uncle seemed to sorting some papers out……: kaise ho beta …getting up he hugged her……knowing very well what she was going thru…Nishikant had been a loyal friend and client for such a long time that she was like a daughter to him now….

Bani: jee rahi hu uncle…aur kya karsakti hu…kuch acha hi nahi lagta….

Uncle: beta kiu nahi tum kuch din kahi bahar chaldo…

Bani: kaha jau uncle maa ki toh family ki kuch khabar nahi…aur papa choking on a sob toh anath the….jaise aab meh hu

Uncle: nahi beta aise nahi kehte…..hugging her

Bani: kya baath hai uncle aap itna worried kiu hai

Uncle: beta…hesitating ..not knowing how to say it to this innocent child….

Bani: its okay uncle…aur kya bura hosakta hai

Uncle: ….nishikant ……….had got a lot of loan on his company some 2 years ago to expand the industry in Mumbai and Dehi some …the business was doing really good but now that he is not in the pic anymore and the party that lent him the money don't have faith in the hands of a mere 17 year old to run the empire so they are demanding their money back

Bani: mujhe kuch samaj nahi araha uncle

Uncle: beta agar unko paisa nahi mila toh they can capture everything u have left…

Bani: toh pay kardete hai

Uncle: yes beta but all finances are tied up in asses and stock…aur financial returns ke liye 6 months intezar karna padega which they don't want to do

Bani just stared at him…..she had lost everything and now this too….she started laughing…slowly and than loudly…..and than collapsing on her knee she started to cry out…: kuch bhi nahi bajta hai uncle

Uncle: im afraid not….sirf is ghar ke saman…….looking sadly at her

Bani looked around...taking in everything....remembering all those moments...those precious little things ...those memories....….meh kya karugi in saab ka……sobbing her heart out….mujhe bhi kiu nahi mummy papa legaye…..kiu nahi

😳😳😳hope u like it

PS: i was going to wait till monday to post but Sweetu 😉neh toh meri halth hi kharab kardi..Sweetu darling here u go😆

awesome...was waiting for it...will read and comment...

lovely beginning...bechari Rano...she is gone too...

And Bani is all alone...so If I am not wrong..the company which gave the loan is WI...so maybe Bani can go and meet him...I am sure our darling is good enough to give her time...

rivs

Very well begun... 👏 👏 👏
I'll try n be regular with this one... 😳

Her pain is described very well 👏
Please update soooooooooon


Poo

great ff...loved it...but i agree withnavu here...why kill rano and not pia...i woud have been so happy if pia died...im telling id throw a party... 🥳
well cant wait for next update...and cant wait for jais entry...bechari bani...where will she go now
JAZ

I LOVE YOU 😳
YAAR i was about to bombard you with pm's asking where the hell it was...oh well...!
I am going to go and read it now! ( ithna kaam hai meh pagal ho rahi hoon 😭 😭 )
Love you soooooooooooo much! 😳😃
I know you are waiting for my commentos...well they are coming my sweety 😃
🤗

👏 👏 👏 wow really awesome story
aww i feel sad for bani but jo hota hai acche ke liye hota hai

continue soon 👏

😳 yaar kya hai!
Such an emotional part , you are too good with words!
I love this fic already..
so let me guess what will happen next...Bani meets the one and only man with deep intense eyes- they make her shiver.
( ok my above description gives me an idea 😉, even though i shouldn't be... )
So when will intense eyes come into this fic.
btw add shivers yaar 😆 😆 😉 and whispers 😃
yaar i feel so sad for B yaar, she lost everything...and she is only 17 😳
hmmm...i wonder how old you'll make intense eyes? 😛 😳
Yaar plsssssssss post the next part soon!
I am waiting my sweety
btw where the hell are my comments on my fic...i am waiting still
Love you
mwah
Sweetu 🤗
p.s. yup you were right to say, if i hadn't pestered and begged and irritated and threatened you so much you wouldn't have posted 😆 😆 ! magar i know you love me 😃 😃

Very Nice. Please continue. I was so choked up when I read that. Waiting to read the entire thing.