FF: The Foreign Self. part I to V-C - Page 26

Originally posted by: inavars

that was AMAZING Armana!! 👏 👏 👏 And definitely...I would like more updates than replies! can't help it 😳 love this ff!! 😃

Originally posted by: kubare

Armana,

What can is really say except 👏 Part V-C was just as fantastic, awesome, wonderful, superb as all the others. As I said before you are a superb writer and reading your fanfic is like being there oneself. 😉😛😃

thanks K. Your purple words of praise always encourage me to write some more!

As Farah said you describe so beautifully what these two feel for each other , how they are falling in love and how even simple words and actions can hurt.😳😃

Humm.....Roshni is back and Jai really , really hates her and again we are taken back to a past , a mystery to us all.😃

The mystery surrounding him and Bani and Roshni, definitely some connection there. The plot thickens and so does my wnating to find out what the mystery or story is connecting them.😃
Well, the good news is that i've finished writing out the entire flashback series.
The bad news is that it shall continue to tantalise you for a while yet!
Had to write it out in detail before i could write V-D.

Cant wait to read the next part from you soon too.😃
Shan't be too long now.😊

Love

Krishna

Originally posted by: simz99

Hey Armana
Another great part…and the story keeps me totally hooked!!! 😃
delighted to know that!
I don't really like your JW too much…arrogant so-and-so. 😡
I see. Well we shall have to see about changing your mind!

But Bani complements him so well…the ying to his yang…sigghhh. It was so sweet how he realized that his flippant attitude had hurt her and made amends… 😳 that's the JW we all fell in love with 😳 😉
I should've known that one little thing and all your dislike disappears....O, ye of little consistency.....😆😆😆
On another note…you seem very fond of this green and brown paisley pattern, if I remember correctly wasn't that one of the patterns that Bani had selected for the couch in his study in your last ff?! 😕 Now you know I'm a total ff despo 😉
I love the paisely pattern. The couch cloth was in a paisley pattern, but there was no green in it. Amber and dark brown, on a beige backgroun, to be exact.
And that little observation, i have to admit, made my day!
Looking forward to the next part…with Rosh in the picture things are gonna get real hot!
you bet!
cheers
Sims

Originally posted by: india06

Cant figure this man out .... brooding,tempermental,brash,sexy with attitude.... ❤️ him.

And B like a fragile, beautiful ,flower but at the same time with tremendous spunk, fortitude.

This combination spells PASSION and are we getting it or wot

Thanks

witty, insightful, concise and delighful.....i love your comments!
you are welcome.
looking forward to your comments
armana

Originally posted by: coolgurl_2005

Armana
that was just fabalous.beautifully written.too good.loved it.looking forward to the next part. 😊

Originally posted by: sangitadas

👏

Lovely part Armana, only wish it was a little more longer and di not end so quickly.

Thanks sangs. As for the length, well i posted it before completeing the whole part! sorry!

Am going to tell you something - I feel like that you could keep on writing forever and we could keep on ooh and aah-ing forever.

😆 😆

Thank you very much my dear sangs.😊

Just love this story, impeccable, no loose ends absolutely.

One tries, one tries.....thank you for noticing!😊

BTW, just wanted to reiterate the fact that THIS JW's mine, irrespective of any stampede.
with all my blessings, i might add!

Originally posted by: nibbles

V-C was definitely an amazing part!!👏
thanks sweetie!

I'm glad the kiss happened😳 though Jai needs to keep a hold of his comments otherwise it'll be hard for him to re-convince Bani (Though at the moment he doesn't seem to be having to much of a prolem with it!😉)
😆😆😆 well since it works out in his favour in any case.....😆😆😆

Waiting to see how the storyline unfolds now that Roshni has jumped in!!😛
aaahhhh.....well all i'm saying is that the plot thickens!

Originally posted by: bugs_bunny

WOW. 👏 👏 👏
i love the way you write and this is sucha great FF. i wonder what bani is going to do next... can't wait to read the next part.
btw.. the bit when jai was feeding her was soo cute. 😳

Originally posted by: Cordelia

jeeeeeez ms. dickens!!!! bachchi ki jaan loge kya?!! 😲 itni chhoti si umar me cardiac arrest??!!! 😵

and JW, i'm certain will revive the bachchi in question!😉

what can i say armana, you leave me speechless once again!!!

hehehehe...... Ms.Brown at a loss for words!!! now that's something!

sorry for not commenting on the last 2 parts, but the good thing is i didn't have to wait for updates, it's like "buy one scoop of ice-cream, get one free"!!! 😃 😆
Enjoy!

the ease and subtlety with which you portray the nuances of JW's character... his arrogance, his passion - bordering on obsession or fixation almost!! the posessiveness, and anger, but still a sensitivity about him... JUST... WOW!!!!

and Bani is the cuuuuuutest!!! flicking her hair about, and subtly flirting with Mohan to make him jealous?!! Master stroke!! It brought out the worst in him - or is it the best?!! 😈 😆
Thank you, m'dear😃

Now, as for this roshni character!!! i will lend you my collection of karaare-tamaache if you could please just keep her out of the way and not let her screw up the chances of more J-B moments!!! 😡
The offer moves my heart, truly it does. I might just take you up on it, but only after she has served my purpose......


i just read back and it appears i am rambling again... 😕
Not a problem! Feel absolutely free to do so at great length!

signing off now then, update soon!!!! 🤗


oh, and btw sangs - there is no question of a stampede, i have already kidnapped this JW and taken him home with me!!! 😉 😛 i might let you borrow him from time to time though, if you are nice!!! 😆 😆 😆

I give up! Sort it out between the two of you!
In the meantime, he is quite contented with Bani😉

Originally posted by: sweetu144

Dearest aramana,
You are the one and only ms dickens 😆 !
Nice one cordy, she truly deserves this title! As only she has such magic!
Truly you are the master of the art, creativity!
I don't know how you do it, but it's amazing!
Your play of words, your imaginitive expressions and descriptions...
Just beautiful... amazing!
You are really one in a million armana 😉
As usual you are amazing!
Lots of love
Love you
S. 😳