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armana

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Posted: 18 years ago

#241

Originally posted by: nema123
Armana, It was toooo gooood.. waiting for next part.

thank you nema.😊

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armana

@armana

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Posted: 18 years ago

#242

Originally posted by: fsam
Armana part V-C was awesome. Amazingly portrayed how two people who love each other can hurt the other with just a few mis-spoken words.
i guess love makes us hypersensitive!

Loved the way JW showed his possessiveness by laying claim on her. Seems that Bani is teaching him to be thoughtful, if only towards.
well, homo sapiens are related to the cave men!😆😆😆
let's see what else Bani teaches him!

You have beautifully captured the emotions and essence of two people who have resolved to stay away from each other but are unable, because the attraction and love they feel is much stronger than their resolve.
lust is a pretty strong force, wouldn't you agree? and add love to mix........

Yet another hint to seven years ago, waiting for the mystry to unfold and the next part.
Mum's the word!😛

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armana

@armana

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Posted: 18 years ago

#243

Originally posted by: lramanujam
You have a talent.Do you write novels? You should.I like your style.Please keep posting regularly

Thank you I.😊 Nope, i don't write novels. Maybe i will after i stop writing ff's.😉
Glad to hear that you like my writing.Thank you for that😊 I try and update as fast as i can, don't like to drag my ff's. so hopefully, TFS will proceed to its conclusion rather briskly.
Thanks for writing in.
Armana

Edited by armana - 18 years ago

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Sangita

@sangitadas

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Posted: 18 years ago

#244

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Lovely part Armana, only wish it was a little more longer and di not end so quickly.

Am going to tell you something - I feel like that you could keep on writing forever and we could keep on ooh and aah-ing forever.

😆 😆

Just love this story, impeccable, no loose ends absolutely.

BTW, just wanted to reiterate the fact that THIS JW's mine, irrespective of any stampede.

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Nabila

@Tomiko

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+ 5

Posted: 18 years ago

#245

V-C was definitely an amazing part!!👏

I'm glad the kiss happened😳 though Jai needs to keep a hold of his comments otherwise it'll be hard for him to re-convince Bani (Though at the moment he doesn't seem to be having to much of a prolem with it!😉)

Waiting to see how the storyline unfolds now that Roshni has jumped in!!😛

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bugs_bunny

@bugs_bunny

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Posted: 18 years ago

#246

WOW. 👏 👏 👏
i love the way you write and this is sucha great FF. i wonder what bani is going to do next... can't wait to read the next part.
btw.. the bit when jai was feeding her was soo cute. 😳

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Chaitali

@Cordelia

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Posted: 18 years ago

#247

jeeeeeez ms. dickens!!!! bachchi ki jaan loge kya?!! 😲 itni chhoti si umar me cardiac arrest??!!! 😵

what can i say armana, you leave me speechless once again!!!

sorry for not commenting on the last 2 parts, but the good thing is i didn't have to wait for updates, it's like "buy one scoop of ice-cream, get one free"!!! 😃 😆

the ease and subtlety with which you portray the nuances of JW's character... his arrogance, his passion - bordering on obsession or fixation almost!! the posessiveness, and anger, but still a sensitivity about him... JUST... WOW!!!!

and Bani is the cuuuuuutest!!! flicking her hair about, and subtly flirting with Mohan to make him jealous?!! Master stroke!! It brought out the worst in him - or is it the best?!! 😈 😆

Now, as for this roshni character!!! i will lend you my collection of karaare-tamaache if you could please just keep her out of the way and not let her screw up the chances of more J-B moments!!! 😡

i just read back and it appears i am rambling again... 😕

signing off now then, update soon!!!! 🤗

oh, and btw sangs - there is no question of a stampede, i have already kidnapped this JW and taken him home with me!!! 😉 😛 i might let you borrow him from time to time though, if you are nice!!! 😆 😆 😆

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pooja1_76

@pooja1_76

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Posted: 18 years ago

#248

so first Question first ..........When are you updating again

Second Question.......where and which world you got this JW.

Third Question......how did you come up with this nice story line

Forth Question.......Are you a Writer by any chance

Fifth Question.......if you are not writer definatly you studied something on which is based on that.

final Question.......Repeat of first when are you updating again.

pooja

P.S eventhough i have not addressed directly that your FF is Awsome as you are. Indirectly my questions prove it.

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sweetu144

@sweetu144

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Posted: 18 years ago

#249

Dearest aramana,
You are the one and only ms dickens 😆 !
Nice one cordy, she truly deserves this title! As only she has such magic!
Truly you are the master of the art, creativity!
I don't know how you do it, but it's amazing!
Your play of words, your imaginitive expressions and descriptions...
Just beautiful... amazing!
You are really one in a million armana 😉
As usual you are amazing!
Lots of love
Love you
S. 😳

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armana

@armana

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Posted: 18 years ago

#250

Originally posted by: btkr
Armana dear, if you never reply to us individually, I don't think anyone would mind - no contest, we want our update anyday!!!
thanks darling, glad to have that sorted and my place in the scheme of things so clearly defined!😛😊

Boy, this Jai is so complicated - changes mood in the flash of an eye...luckily Bani seems to have infinite patience with him (or affection?? )
yep, Jai is complicated and definitely not easy.....but the best things in life never are! As for Bani, she reads Somerset Maughm (yes, i will clarify that. In the course of TFS😉)

👏 👏 👏
bt

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