FF:MeriZindagi..Pt 27 page32 End... - Page 3

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Posted: 18 years ago
#21
Great Job Aman!!!! 👏

Both the parts were excellent!!!

Pushkar gave Bani extra money because he likes her sister?? 😆

Please continue soon!!!

Can't wait to see interaction between JB!!!

Luv ya,

Meera 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Great part.
Can't wait for the next part.
plz cont. soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: indiandoll89

Great Job Aman!!!! 👏

Both the parts were excellent!!!

Pushkar gave Bani extra money because he likes her sister?? 😆

Please continue soon!!!

Can't wait to see interaction between JB!!!

Luv ya,

Meera 😳

OMG thanks Meera your comments always make me feel like I chould Contine the part right now.😆 Thanks a lottttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt.😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
#24
omg!!!tht was great!! and it was longer.....thanks soo much...pls update sooon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: aNsHu_tEjPaL

omg!!!tht was great!! and it was longer.....thanks soo much...pls update sooon

I'm glad you liked it will try to update today. Thanks.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: ridhijai

Great part.
Can't wait for the next part.
plz cont. soon.

Will continue soon.😉Thanks.

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Posted: 18 years ago
#27

Part 3
Thanks for you great comments. 😊 I have to move faster since its a short story. 😉

Bani turns around in a shock and sees Mr. Walia standing behind her.
Bani: Oh Good Morning sir.
Walia:Your here to Work not talk.
Bani:Sorry Sir I got a call from home it was my sister. I promise it won't happen again.

Then the job continues... She goes home at night.
As soon as she comes in she sees Pia and Rano waiting for her. there Questions Begin:
Pia: Di how's you Boss?
Bani:He's"kadoos" Today when I was talking to you on phone he was standing behind me.
Rano: Then what happened.
Bani:I got excused this time. So You don't call mw next time I will contact you.

The sunsets..
There comes pushker waiting in front of there house. Bani sees him and....
Bani:Pushkar sir what are you doing here?
Pushker:First of all Bani Consider me as a friend not as your boss okay.
Bani seemed to be really happy after knowing that.
Bani:Okay sir
Pushker:Again sir?? 😆
Bani:Sorry Pushker.
Pusker wanted to know more about Pia so here goes:
Pushker: BTW Bani Where's Rano and and Pia?
Bani:I decided Rano will go to Collage and Pia can just help her around.
Pushker:Thats good
Bani's insight feelings were thinking about how nice pushker is. There at work were they find out that there is a Party at Mr. Walia Mansion and Bani as to orgnaize it. She seemed preety happy after knowing she will get Paid extra for that. Pusker wanted to meet pia so he asks Bani to Bring her sister along. She hoped Mr. Waila wouldn't mind. There Bani tells her sister to get ready.

Both Rano and Pia seemed happy Espically pia Wondering what dress to wear and they argud a while but figured something out anyway.

And they leave for the party.

There Walia mansion Getting ready for arangements there come Jigyasa ordering everyone around.

And Comes Pia and Rano

Pia seemed really happy to see the house. And as she turns around bumps into Mr. Walia.

And the part ends.

How's this?😉

Edited by aman123 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#28
Hey Aman i have read all the parts to your ff 👏 👏 👏
Please don't make Pia and Jai fall in love
I hope Jai appreciates Bani's work and finds her attractive
please write soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: ziddi

Hey Aman i have read all the parts to your ff 👏 👏 👏
Please don't make Pia and Jai fall in love
I hope Jai appreciates Bani's work and finds her attractive
please write soon

Thanks Mamta. Yep I Won't do that noo wayyyys.😆Will continue soon.

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Posted: 18 years ago
#30
👏 great as usual! pls keep tht thing(pia 😆 ) away from JW....pls? tht was great.....
Edited by aNsHu_tEjPaL - 18 years ago

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