Updated 02/1_Betaab Dil Hai...Prt 3 Pg 10 - Page 3

Interesting... two of my fav ff writers getting together to write one... gr8 this should be fun........continue soon....

nice start 👏 👏
something different and interesting
continue soon

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Anju and Rani that was mindblowing
I hope Bani doesn't fall for his charms, and leaves him,
I hope she has someone else in her life
What Jai thinks by coming into her life all of the sudden after three years
can't wait until the next update

Thanks anju and Raania!!!!! both of you are sooo nice to think about me while portraying my baby!!!!

but yaar, i don't think about him that way, come on you made him sleep with her for property, that's not my baby but i am sure you guys will redeem him soon!!!!

and raania, you start a ff and don't tell me 😭

Amazing parts both of you!!!! 👏

can't wait for the next parts!!!!

Shina

Originally posted by: ziddi

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Anju and Rani that was mindblowing
I hope Bani doesn't fall for his charms, and leaves him,
I hope she has someone else in her life
What Jai thinks by coming into her life all of the sudden after three years
can't wait until the next update

thanks yaar.....but keep reading....dont let ur mind run far away😆

and thanks for the lovely feedbck😉

Wow!! both parts were awesome!
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good job girls! keep it up!
I love the title...it reminds me of the song
betaab dil hai dhadkano ki kasam
na reh sakenge ab juda hoke hum
wada karo tum jaane se pehle
phir milenge sanam!! 😊
plzz continue soon! 😉

wow... 👏
great job guys...love it...
haila...who wouldnt be lost in JW blazing eyes... 😳
main hoti toh paata nahin kya hota...shayad puri tarah se behosh ho jati 😉
cant wait for more

nice FF anju and raania 👏 👏

can't wait for the next part 😛

WOW WOW WOW!!! both parts were awesome and intense! did jai ACTUALLY do dat? 😭 oh wells... can't wait for da next part--- update soon!