hello friends...gosh i can already see the grins on ur faces😃
well my sweet friend Anju (khattimetti) PM's me yesterday and we were talking when she out of the blue said she wanted to do a fanfic together with me.......so i said hmmm lets see...why not....
the original idea i guess belongs to Shina and Munaabhai but i know they wont mind😃..thanks guys for the great idea...love you!😳
toh humne shuru kya...is kahani meh sirf do log hai...Jai jo hamari pyari Anju represent kar rahi hai😉...aur Bani...who is represented by me😛....no intro and introducing of characters...straight story......read the first part and let us know what u guys think!!!
PS: i know how demanding our buddies are and i can already see demands of more updates.....but my hunies out there ....we can only update on part per day as its done collectively by us....we will try and make it long as it goes....😉😃
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Part 1
Bani looking at her dad...magar papa yeh kya.....Jai tum aisa kiu kar rahe ho...she couldnt believe what was happening ...she was so happy and now
J: tumne teek suna bani......... kyon Mr.Dikshit agar aapko apni beti ki aazaadi chahiye to phir... you have to give me what i want you cannot refuse it anymore
Bani: Jai yeh saab kya hai looking at her dad and than Jai......azadi....what are you talking about
Bani almost in tears feeling like her life was being sold and bought...koi mujhe kuch kahe bhi
nish: I will get an annulment from the court.......
Bani: papa ...noooooo ..meh Jai ke patni hu..i love him
J laughs: after what we shared there is hardly scope for any annulment....
Nish: bani is that true???
Bani putting hands to her ears ...she couldnt believe Jai was saying this....Jai ...almost a sigh
Bani looking at Nishi and than Jai her head swirling around
J: see there is nothing you can do , if you want your daughter's freedom better give me what i want
Nishi: nahi Jai kabhi nahi...woh land na kabhi thumara tha na hoga
J; kya aap ko yeah bardash hoga ki bani mere saath rahe mere bachi ki maa bane mein usay kabhi bhi aazaad nahi karoonga
Bani grabbing Jai's collar...tum yeh kiu kar rahe ho..kiu......shouting now...she didnt know what was happening
Nish: Bani go to your room............... i didnt expect this from you................. silently bani leaves from there
BAni: aisa kaise hosakta....Bani walking like a zombie....not believing it......aisa kaise...Jai....mujse pyar...kya yeh sach hai...turning to look back at him
J is looking only at nishikant
Bani Running down the steps demanding an explanation.....kiu kiya tumne aisa...kiu???? kya tum mujse pyar nahi karte.....kya yeh ek dhikhawa tha........
yeh mangalsurta....taking it from her chest....yeh sindoor pointing to the sindoor....yes saab jhooth tha
J: bani there is no need to get emotional..........
nish: bani aur kitna giravogi mujeh ab chalo yaahasay drags bani away from J..........
papa choro mujhe...shouting ...papa choriye....looking at Jai...Jai ...Jai shouting.....nishi taking her away.....Bani her hands going to where nishi was holding her to set herself free......papa meh Jai ke bina marjaugi...papa choriye na
nish: tum kab samjo gi baani.. he never loved u he used you.......... slept with u to get the hands on my property................
Jai leaves
Bani: nahi her hands to her ears...yeh jhooth hai papa...looking at Jai leaving.....dropping to the ground...not believing it......woh mujhe kaise .......looking at her dad.....
lots of love
Khattimetti and Raania😳
Kyunki Saas Bhi Kabhi Bahu Thi 2
Bade Achhe Lagte Hain
