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Posted: 18 years ago
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first of all thanks to all the members a lot for supporting me.

part-6

on the way to hotel bani is quiet,but she cannot handle this situation for a long time.

they reach hotel and manager says that they have reservation for one room and also that hotel is fully booked.

first jai resist but finally they agree to share a room.

the room is pink with a balcony.its very romantic kind of and wheather is chilly.

first jai goes to bathroom and take a shower then she goes.

bani comes out wearing a cream coloured silky nighty and a net gown.

when jai saw her his jaw drops.she looks sober yet sexy.

his throat dries.

then he realises what he is doing and starts working on laptop atleast pretending to be busy.

bani sits on carpet near his couch and fell asleep.when jai saw her.her head is falling as her back is resting on a table.

jai sits on the carpet and tries to hold her head.
he is in a position that his arms wrapped her body.he can feel her warm breath on his chest.

suddenly bani wraps her arms around him. he was speechless.

jai sits in that posiion whole night b'coz he do'nt want to disturb her.

in this position someone clicks there pictures.

in the morning room service delivers the newspaper.headlines is'JAI WALIA AND BANI DIXIT CAUGHT IN PRIVATE MOMENTS'.

jai bani are shocked.everyone talks about bani's character.

phones are ringing.jai is very angry.they returned mumbai immediately.

every paper,magazine has one topic jai and bani.
now this insult is unbearable for bani.

she is not going to office.not receving calls.

even jai has not seen her for mant days.he is worried.

he decides to confront bani.he reaches at her house.she is alone.she looks pale.

jai can'nt see her like this.

jai-BANI LET'S GET MARRIED.
bani is shocked, confused,happy at the same time.

but jai says-bani main jaanta hoon tum ye rishta nahi chahti.par hum contract marriage karte hai 2 mahene ke liye.tab tak sab theek ho jayega.aur phir tum is rishte se azad ho jaogi.tab tak tum mere ghar mein rahogi mrs jai walia bankar.

jai said all this in a minute.

bani feels sick to hear this.but agrees finally.

bani-shayad mere parivar ki izzat aur aur meri behno ke future ke liye yahi theek hai.

they go to a mandir and get married.

bani in mind-"chahe main jai se kitna bhi pyar karoon kabhi keh nahi paaongi.par pyaar kiya hai to zaroori to nahi ki mil hi jaaye vo aapko".

jai in mind-"main nahi jaanta ki main bani se pyaar karta hoon ki nahi.par is waqt yahi theek hai.aur phir kuch hi waqt me yeh rishta khatam ho jayega.nahi yeh pyar nahi sirf concern hai.

then both reach walia mansion.

masi welcomes her bahu.she is very happy.she told bani to rest in their room.

masi-wah adi hamara sara plan succesful ho gaya.

adi-masi aage-aage dekhie hota hai kya.

in night
jai and bani retires on the bed far away from each other.
but thinking about each other.

in morning
jai is combing his hair wheh bani comes from bathroom.
she is wearing a dori blouse.jai's watch suddenly struck with the dori.

slowly jai comes near and starts untangling.
bani feels goosebumps.she is shy.

then masi enters and they parted.
jai leaves for the office.

whole family loves bani except jigyasa.

aweek passed.
one day jai is leaving for a meeting
bani-"suniye,vo aaj aap jaldi aayega,dinner saath mein karenge.
said shyly
jai smiles at her simplicity.

bani is preparing for date.

bye

plz leave your comments

preview-
jai's accident

honey11 thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#12
yaaro please send your comments as soon as possible.
plz
Piku_S thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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👏
i hope they throw the contract marriage
i hope nothing happens to Jai 😭
plz write soon
honey11 thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thank you so much ziddi for reading ishq.
next part is specially for you.
good bye and thanks again.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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oh man just read the past 6 parts!!!!!!!
that was awesome!!!!
oh no!
jai's accident!!!!!!!!!!
continue soon!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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haila a date...aww...accident...pechara jai...and bani too...continue soon honey...loving it... 👏 PS: the classical dori scene...there is one in every ff...your was dffenent but great none the less... 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#17
well done dear, i really liked it pleaz continue it soon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#18
a very sweet ff my dear, thanks for the pm!

lovely concept of bani as a widow and jai's offer of a contract marriage to save her respect! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwww haila.. just read it all.. they got married.. YAYYYYYYYYYYY.. contract marraige - chalo at least she luvs him and he luvs her too - too duffer to realize it.. but yay.. that's greatttt... defeintely different - as she was a widow.. luv it.. plz cont soon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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part-7

bani is getting ready for the date.she is in bedroom singing

kaise piya se main kahoon,
mujhe kitna pyar hai,
aankhon ko intezaar hai,
dil bequarar hai...

just then phone rings

bani is shocked and crying to hear that jai met with an accident.

she runs to the hospital praying for jai all the time.

in hospital

bani-dr.mr.walia kaise hai?she said crying

dr.he is out of danger now.bas unke haath mein sprain aaya hai.he will be fine.

bani thank god nd enters in jai's room.he is unconcious.

bani sits there whole night doing pati ki seva.

morning,
dr-how r yu mr.walia?yu r lucky aapki wife ne saari raat aapki dekhbhal ki.

jai was happy and sttuned to hear this.

bani comes in.she has done the formalities of hosp.and jai is dischared.

bani helps jai in everything.as jai's hand is injured.

jai is trying to wear his shirt but unable

bani-dijiye main karti hoon.

jai is staring bani intensely.

jai-bani jab ye sab karti hai to mujhe acha kyu lagta hai? kyu uske hone se apne poore hone ka ehsas hota hai?

bye

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jai bani moments

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