ff-ishq concluding part.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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jai-a hard business man does not believe in love rest same as the serial.
bani-a widow does not believe in love after death of raj on the first day of marriage but comp indian only wears white suites and runs dixit group.

preview-jai sees bani in mandir and accidently fills her maang.
please friends i am new tell me should i continue?


part 1

bani is in white suite in mandir and jai is in front of her .
he turns and saw an angel bani.pandit gives jai thali andit slips from his hands seeing bani.
accidently bani's maang fills with sindoor and both are shocked.
bani runs from there.
later all the day a cold jai walia is doing one thing thiking about bani and her eyes which are full of emotions.
he never fells like this in his life.

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jai-bani's first meeting.



should i continue?




part-2

jai- yeh mujhe kya ho gaya hai?
adi enters in the cabin and tells jai about the meeting with dixit's for a new projects.
jai absent minded-adi mujhe pata hai.let's go
meeting is in a hotel.jai is waiting for the chairman for 10 min and he is very angry.

just then she enters in the room.
jai is speechless to see bani and forgets his anger in a second.
bani-hi!iam MRS BANI RAJ SINGH.
jai feels like he is thrown on the bed of thorns but he recovers and meeting goes well.
dixit and walia groups are starting a new project.
jai-bani are heads of the project.
after meeting jai feels that bani is like a sea calm outside but stormy inside.
he wants to know about her so he calls pushkar-his friend.

push-jai sir BANI EK WIDOW HAI.
jai-what?

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bani tells jai everything
bani hurt
jai holds her in his arms


part-3

walia office
its a holiday and office is empty.
bani is early for the meeting.her cell rings its jai.
jai-iam sry bani main 1 hour late hojaounga.
bani-its ok mr walia main office mein hi wait karti hoon.
jai feels bad so he rushes to the office.
meanwhile bani is lost in her thoughts.she sings

saaya bhi saath jab chod jaye,
aise hai tanhaye,-2
rona chahon to aason na aaye aiae hai tanhaye

bani is crying. she doest nt know that jai is in office.

jai cannot see her crying he is feeling very bad.
he slowlely places his hand on her shoulder.
jai-bani kya hua?
bani-aap
sill crying
jai- bani plz kya tum apna dard baant nahin sakti
bani-starts crying hard and hugs jai.
she tells him about raj's death in accident on the day of marriage.
jai listens everything. he can not bear her pain.
he wants to see her happy at any cost.
jai-BANI MUJHSE SHAADI KAROGE?
bani is shocked to death.she slaps jai.
she is going when she trips on the carpet and hurts her ankel.
bani-aah!
jai rushes towards bani. she is like do'nt touch me but she is in pain
bani-do'nt touch me angirly.she is tring to walk but fails.
jai holds her in his arms .

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Posted: 18 years ago
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part-4

after the incident jai-bani never talks about personal life.

after 1 month

everything is going well between them.bani slowely starts loving jai but never accepts this.

jai is confused wheter he loves her or not.

one day in office,jai and bani are working together suddenly a sharp blade cuts bani's finger and she said'"oouch".

jai panicked and put bani's finger in his mouth.

bani[shocked]-mr.walia

again-mr.walia

jai is like what?

bani-vo meri left nahi right hand ki ungli kati hai[showing him while making a baby face she starts laughing]

jai has never seen bani smiling so freely.but he felt very good.

then bani realises what she is doing and leaves from there.

theh adi enters in office

adi-jai masi ne ghar pooja rakhi hai.tum bani ko bhi invite kar lo use acha lagega.

adi knows everything about bani.

jai calls bani and invites her.

she agrees.

at walia mansion

both jai and bani enters and masi sees bani.
she is happy to see her.bani touches her feet.

then bang.

anu bangs in bani with a jug of water and bani is wet.

masi-bani beta tum change kar lo thand lag jayegi.

ye anu bhi na, har waqt sharart.

masi leads bani to a room next to jai.

she hands her a plain shiffon baby pink saree and leaves.

bani and jai opened the door at same time.

bani looked so beautiful.

jai is staring her passionately.bani feels uncomfortable

masi-are bani, yaha kyu khadi hai.mare saath kitchen mein aao.

as bani croosed jai.he winked.
bani blushes .she feels a new feeling.


friends plz tell me should i continue?
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Posted: 18 years ago
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bani and jai on a trip to shimla.
bani sleeps in jai's arms.

friends plz i am a first timer plz send your comments and ideas.plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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part-5
jai and bani steals glances from each other and masi notices this.

pooja goes well.masi is impressed from bani and she realise that jai loves bani.she decides to help them.

masi calls adi.

adi-masi main to pehle se yeh mehsoos kar raha hoon ki vo ek doosre ko chahte hai.par kabhi manege nahi.

masi-mere pas ek plan hai.

plan in action.

adi- jai vo naye hotel ko lekar kuch paper sign karne hai
tum aur bani ka jana zaroori hai maine tickets book kar di hai shimla ki.

in the mrg

jai picks bani from her house and leaves for airport.

after take off,bani feels sleepy and slowly she sleeps on jai's shoulder.

bani's one hand is around his neck and other on his chest.she feels so warm.

jai feels good.he is so close to bani.

he wants to hug her,kiss her.he stares her intensely.

then flight lands and bani sees her position.

she is blushing.her cheeks are red.

bani-i am sorry.vo galti se...

jai said in a seductive tone-"RAB KARE AISI GALTI BAR BAR HO".

bani is stunned to hear this.


BYE

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Posted: 18 years ago
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jai bani shares a room
media havoc
life is changed.

plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz post your comments friends.bye
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Awsome Fanfic - Please do continue👏👏

PrInCy😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow...just read all 5 parts hun...great job..cant wait for the next part...keep it up... 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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firstly welcome to the KS Parivaar and Forum
Read all the five parts they are mindblowing and fablous
I hope Bani and Jai get married, and they confess their feelings for one another and they have their honeymoon in shimla
plz write soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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WOW. Nice ff 👏 Please continue soon. Hope they confess their love soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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loved ur ff 👏 👏
cont soon

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